The Portal between Earth and Equestria has opened, the fight to save what remains of humanity begins. This is a sequel to 'Coming Out of It'.
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Now I'm no expert, but I'm not sure if this
Can happen right after child birth, I know for C-scetions the medication that is given numbs the body so the rule of thumb is if the mother can't move/feel her toes she can't hold the child. But I'm unsure if that is the same for natural birth.
That's my only statement that I can tack on this chapter. Good work.
Wasn't Dominic known as 'Night Eagle' in this story? And you named his son Altair, after the brightest star in the constellation 'Aquila', which is the Latin word for 'eagle'.
...What? The point I'm trying to make? There isn't one, I was just commenting on something I thought was clever on the author's part.
Nice chapter! Good to see a new member of the Occisor family!!!
Thought I saw her eyes glow for a second. Don't piss her off man!
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It can happen through natural too.
Just don't ever go near her if you're the one that did it for a hour or two.
I am VERY happy to see you updating this fantastic story, regularly. It is refreshing to see the story progressing so well, BUT I am concerned by the WAR type of mentality that pervades the story. You've steeped the entirety of Equestria in an arms war that there doesn't seem to be any end to. Its like the humans are living through all the wars and battles that we have fought over our history, in the span of a few short months. The next battle could very well involve nuclear weapons. The arms escalation is very disturbing to say the least.
Why is Celestia being so paranoid ? Is it because the human nation is proving to be more popular than she is ? Why has she done the MANY things she has done ? WHY has she gone so far ? Now, she has been forced into exile, but she is still "chomping at the b it" to get her kingdom back. She is acting very OOC. Its like she is just looking for an excuse to "cut loose" and show her REAL POWER. She is in control of a star for crying out loud. She could wipe out the human nation with who knows what powers at her command, but she's been hesitating, second guessing her motives. WHAT were her motives for the arms race? WHY did she push Equestria to the brink of war? SHE seems to be the biggest threat in the entire story. Why is she doing such stupid things even after she was in exile ? I was expecting her to take over the crystal empire, while Cadence and Shining were negotiating the trade agreement. SHE is quite a despot when you look at her actions overall. WHAT IS HER GAME ?????
7474238 Me thinks your not paying attention, yes she is acting out of character, to a degree, but the majority of her paranoia that led up to the existential toppling of her nation and her TECHNICALLY self imposed exile(she was never officially forced she just didn't want to face war trials) came from her 'Pony Master Race' Generals and Command Staff. There was actually a point where they were working things out (Dom and Cel) but due to the constant 'whisperings' of "Pony Superiority" and "Monkey inferiority" stealing the Global World Policing Power while being a smaller nation both in size and Legitimacy (seeing as the world was in some ways still in a Feudal system) while wielding weapons that the command staff got greedy and wanted and felt the "Hairless apes" didn't deserve to have them and continuously inferring the research and development of weapons that far outclassed their own as acts of aggression then what the painting actually.. well painted, even as Dom basically told Celestia that he would use them to protect her nation if needed regardless of his differences on-towards her and his own should it fall to that(which it did). The Saddest part is her own slight rascism towards thestrals blinded her from the most intelligent of the command staff warning her against such idiocy regardless of him being under her sister's private Military, another thing that comes from the influences of her General's staff, of note are also racist towards their Lunar Cousins soooo yeah.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
FULL ON BITCH MODE ACTIVATE !!!!!!!!!!!!