The Portal between Earth and Equestria has opened, the fight to save what remains of humanity begins. This is a sequel to 'Coming Out of It'.
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Ok. So whens the next disaster?
Would it be possible for you to translate the German maybe in parentheses or something? Love the story man This has quickly become one of my favorite Series and you one of my favorite authors
It's GOOD to have a downtime chapter or two, but shouldn't there be a scene where Dominic and Celestia talk and they're all
"Hey, um, my spies reported your side is KINDA amassing what looks like a large INVASION force, what's going on there"? This REALLY is not the time for small talk when both sides are so on edge and NEITHER one trusts each other that well. It would take all of five minutes for Celestia to just say "My country is afraid of what yours could do so we're trying to play catch up to defend ourselves". "Oh, okay, that's fine". Bam. Five minutes.
Well now we've been spoiled. Ready the moar cannons lads!
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Don't jinx it.
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NEIN!
I love it.
It's one of the greatest stories I've ever read on this site honestly, it has war, it has regrets, it has sex and class, it has foreshadowing thoughts, it has Gods and genocide, and it has feelings and emotions put in every interaction of either major or minor characters.
In short, It's Good Niggah! 10/10 (IGN)
7377768 And not to mention music and not being all about Equestria. It's unique in that Equestria has good intent, but is being evil in how they are preparing to carry out that intent.
Also, I wonder if the NUS will use new fighters or ground based AA vehicles to counter the airships. Half-tracks and Flak Panzers would be cool to see.
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I had actually theorized using high altitude bombers, since an Airship is a pretty big target. But it's all theoretical at this point, because I will not confirm or deny if that well ever happen. Gotta keep some things close to the vest after all.
7377768 I've been debating between this and diaries of a madman for best story.
7378092 awwww. I ran out of chapters.
It's a fantastic story! Keep up the good work!
War. War never changes.
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Just use google translator. it's fairly accurate.
7379020 But would it really be that difficult for him to do it? It seems like a small thing that would make this story better in my opinion
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It's only temporary until I can find a way to differentiate language.
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DOMM got out of hand after chapter 200 but there was waaay too much sex in the earlier chapters and a lot of it wasn't that tasteful to me to be honest.
This story does have it but it is in just the right places and it has a kind of goofy awkwardness that just packs a bit more feeling into it ya know?
7379476 You have to remembet that he was addicted to sex earlier on, and before that he was brutally raped in a violent way. He was using it as a coping mechanism.
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I remember the entirety of the plot but that doesn't mean that I enjoyed it.
The fact is that I didn't really care for DOMM past chapter 220 as it just started getting kind of old ya know?
I kept reading to 223 but I gave up on it after the thing happened and they were doing that thing together as that's pretty much what it had become after so many chapters of it. Just kind of lost the emotional impact of what could happen next.
7379515 I can see how people would get that feeling, and it only has 140 chapters
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What? What you talkin bout? Last time I read it it had 223 chapters.
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I lost all of my chapter progress apparently.....well then that's new!
I distinctly remember there being more chapters then a piddly 140 though.
Is it possible they shortened the chapter count by rounding off some of the chapters to a larger word count?
7379546 Probobly, but it would be more work than its worth.
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Never underestimate a author with time on their hands.
I don't know why, but I just imagined a huge airship acting like some sort of aircraft carrier
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This is the unedited short version, the one I was waiting on is nearing twelve thousand words... If my editor is to be believed. I just got tired of waiting, so whenever the edited version gets done it'll replace this chapter.
Youd think Celestia would try and make friends with the human nation rather than constantly pitting herself against them.
Also Bluebloods probably the one stirring all of the hate and discontent still with his noble allies
And a immortal Putin...... Seriously, you made me think THAT thought
In the cannon lore, it was Discord who created the Everfree Forest. If Celestia, wiped out the Thestral nation, why are the thestrals still around ?
Dom is going GREY, at 20 years ? DAMN !!!
I still remember what Maria said after she and Dom "DID IT" for the first time. "My insides still feel like mushy past". That was sssooooo unforgetable !!!
To fuck yeaahhhhh
B17 BOMBER IN THE SKY
KILLING MACHINE
fLYING HOME
B17
SAID GOODBYE TO THE CROSS HE DESERVED
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Ever heard of escaping 🤯🤯🤯🤯
The wheels that were supposed to generate lift, would have to be like a fan, so the props would start them turning.
SSOOOO....When is Space Battleship Yamato going to show up ????