The Portal between Earth and Equestria has opened, the fight to save what remains of humanity begins. This is a sequel to 'Coming Out of It'.
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All this does is reinforce the point I had put down earlier. DOMINIC'S ways are right. DOMINIC is the one who understands what's up. The human knows what's best for these stupid ponies, they would NEVER be able to stand up for themselves against the Caribou. Dominic is "mighty whitey", he's the Tom Cruise to their Japanese samurai. He's always right, never wrong, and MEANT to be that way, so says destiny...from the VERY. SPIRIT. OF CHAOS. Someone who shouldn't BELIEVE in the power of Fate. There was NO attempt to see both sides as equal or having equal points. No, it's Dominic's ways that are always right, always smart, always moral and always good, and everything ALWAYS works out for him AND, on top of that, he gets to have two wives.
It's so contrived, so forced, so overdone. And the fact that people lap this up really, really bothers me. They don't see the obvious flaws in the story and call it out. They instead cheer for it simply because they LIKE Dominic being the guy who solves all the problems with violence and force and showing up the authoritarian figure they hate, Celestia, ignoring how authoritarian Dominic himself is becoming and giving HIM a free pass for all the awful things he does but not giving Celestia any leeway. Not to mention it doesn't come off as very "realistic" for a story that was trying to BE more realistic to include an "always chaotic evil" raping and pillaging species like the Caribou. Even the Changelings have good ones like Thorax as we saw in the latest episode.
But nobody wants to address these flaws. And when I try to point them out, I'm shouted down not because my points are WRONG, but because people don't wanna hear it. For those who claim to hate the special college snowflakes who whine about safe spaces, you act just as entitled and in a bubble, flinging around stupid buzzword nonsense like SJW and crap instead of dealing with actual SUBSTANCE.
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You just don't get it. We aren't looking for the morally ambiguous story hear. We aren't looking for great literature. We want a feel good fluff piece in these trying times while we are stuck in the real world with real jobs and bills and problems.
7503192 spoil sport.
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A feel good piece involving annexation, slavery, rape, mass murder, the forced invasion of countries and war? How's that "feel good"? How's that an "escape from the real world"? That's like a reflection of the real world. The literal opposite of escapist fantasy!
Are you saying all of the summer movie blockbusters are not escapist fantasies. Very few war movies are in any way realistic but we go see them anyway for the catharsis effect they give. Many people still think professional wrestling is real. It's actually a physical action soap opera. But like I said we aren't looking for real here. We are looking for the "good guy " to win. If you want deep and meaningful go read Background Pony by shortskirtsandexplosions.
Did Dominic's earth end before the Afghanistan and Iraq wars? I don't see "shock and awe" followed by ocupation of the Caribou lands going well for them.
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Dominic isn't a good guy. Not when he uses the exact same tactics as the people he fights. Including shock and awe campaigns.
You wanna be a good guy? Don't IMITATE GEORGE W. BUSH!
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"While some of your points have merit, ranting about it then complaining when everyone doesn't see what is so obvious to you, won't get anyone to agree with you in any way what so ever, hence why some call you an SJW..." Ah, I see. So when OTHER people complain, that's "legit criticism", but when I do it, it's "ranting". Double standard, much?
Also, never mind the fact I've had multiple stories written already that have done quite well even BEFORE I touched the "Undertale bandwagon" as you put it. And BTW? The Human in Equestria thing ISN'T a bandwagon? The whole "human goes to Equestria and becomes its ruler and shows them how to do things better" was a bandwagon for years and still IS one even now. Don't pretend it's not, and that just because it's been around LONGER it has more validity. You know what else has been around for a long time on this site? Conversion Bureau stories. But the foundation THAT is built upon is misanthropic shit.
And I wouldn't MIND this story so much if not for the fact that NOBODY is equivalent to Dominic in the story. NOBODY is equal to him in power, he's ALWAYS in the right and nobody EVER calls him out on the stuff he does. And no, Luna telling him not too go to far isn't a "Reason you suck" speech like Twilight gave to Celestia. It's friendly advice, not a "You can't keep doing shitty things and need to change" speech like I kept waiting to be delivered. This is my problem. He's ALWAYS right, NEVER wrong, and NEVER called out for the morally ambiguous, assholey or outright evil things he does. He gets a free pass. Even in my OWN work I've had my OWN protagonists get called out when they were being idiots or selfish or when they did rotten things.
But you don't want that, do you? You want an asshole protagonist. Well, you can have your asshole protagonist. Truly, we DO all get the heroes we deserve.
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Truly I thought we would have seen the last of these pointless rants about a story that has a unique reputation, but no, like a rash on the backside of the fattest feminazi you flare up once more.
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Nobody who's actually intelligent uses the phrase "femminazi". That's the kind of thing RUSH LIMBAUGH says. Congrats, you're diving into the RUSHBO playbook.
Can't wait for the BIG SHOWDOWN with the Carabou !!!!
Fucking Yoda
BACKGROUND PONY...DAMN GOOD STORY !!!!!