The Portal between Earth and Equestria has opened, the fight to save what remains of humanity begins. This is a sequel to 'Coming Out of It'.
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Earlier Today:
Wow, a new chapter of In a Cello Mood, that's cool I guess.
Later
Hey, Heart of the Dragon General updated and it has a cool cliffhanger! Awesome!
Around Midnight
Holy shit! Your Human and You got a new chapter really fast! Today's awesome!
Finishes Chapter
Okay, time to go back to the homepage!
Library (1)
No fucking way
Marching Back In
SQUEE!
Love Hogan's Heroes so much I went out and got all six seasons. Favorite season is either 2 or 4.
Wait, so taking that mission at the end. Is that to kill Dom? Or meet him?
Celestia you idiot don't send your guards just talked to your sister.
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Maybe both.
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Reparations should be paid, ponies should be jailed it's as simple as that. Murder like this shouldn't be that hard Tia.
So is moon beam a double agent now or a simple turn coat?
How is this story so unpopular? I would have thought people from the previous story would go over to this one, maybe they don't know there's a sequel?
Do you have an update schedule?
I'm going crazy over when you will update this I can't wait
By Jove its the ARK!!!!! A complex server system that utilizes a hardwired coding and data compression to secure a package of almost all of mankind's information and technological progress in the forms of schematics and resource management software with advanced security codes for those that are smart enough to use the information and not accidentally destroy it.
Set to activate a remote geothermal power system when power begins to drain too much for functional programming and send out a wireless signal to any who would have the capacity to find it.
Is sheer brilliance in its design but sadly its said it would fail after a few decades of no maintenance and thus wouldn't be much use in a real apocalypse.
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"Good thing it's only been four years!" He said with a smirk and a puff of his cigar.
7010707 indeed would be a shame if something happened to the ARK at a later time though like some weirdly dressed people in robes worshipped the damn thing or something as the salvation of humanity.
Heh I made myself chuckle. Can you imagine how uh....special... you have to be to actually worship tech?
Would be funny as hell of them gazing upon a VHS tape from the 90s and claiming true words of wisdom......its a jazzercise tape.
my reaction to sunbutt sending troops to Appleloosa gif-finder.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/Chi-McBride-Oh-Hell-No.gif
It is really hard to take the Empire of light as any serious kind of antagonist in this story. They come across as a bad joke So many over-exaggerated traits and whatnot. That and I find it hard to believe people would be content to live under those kind of conditions. It's not like they grew up in a slave society and world. Just 4 years ago it was a very different world, and now they're content to be slaves? Better to be dead.
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No. 1: the EOL are furries, feminists and white-knights, you can't take them seriously anyways, also they are pretty much the embodiment of Lawful Evil already, imagine if the government collapsed and the didn't have to risk someone stopping them.
No. 2: you might say that, but they have self preservation instincts and probably no means to do that.
Okay this comment is me reading the story mid-through the chapter, but I need to bring my thoughts on something bothering me... oh and spoilers.
So at some point in the chapter some American volunteers/citizens/government employees, whichever the three, are just setting a sensible border post to show which is their land and which is Equestria, or other territories. Now the problem goes to how the situation was dealt with, now while the border was being made, some of the apple orchard from Appleloosa is beyond the border area, and the locals get so riled up about the situation that somebody dies from the rioting crowd.
There are literally two ways this could of been fixed; one, just how the buffalo situation was dealt with back in S1, they could of moved the trees out of American land to a different plot of dirt to produce apples. Two, even if they couldn't, a deal could of been made with the New United States and the town of Appleloosa to trade the apples - they allow the town to keep that portion of the apple orchard as theirs, while a quarter of that specific produce can go to the Americans...
OH AND THE OBVIOUS THIRD SOLUTION, MAKE A BORDER FENCE AROUND THE ORCHARD LIKE ANY SENSIBLE BEING, A BORDER WALL DOESN'T HAVE TO BE FREAKING STRAIGHT!
Sorry, this part of the chapter just gotten me so miffed, that there were so many story flaws, that it makes me think that both Celestia and the townsfolk of Appleloosa are all incompetent. This isn't the first time the townsfolk had to dealt with a territory dispute, between them and the buffalos.
Why do I have the strange feeling something terrible is going to happen... and Dom is going to go full on "KILL THEM ALL" mode