The Portal between Earth and Equestria has opened, the fight to save what remains of humanity begins. This is a sequel to 'Coming Out of It'.
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Again, and to be honest I know this is a bit O.C.D. of me, but humanXhuman=smut. It's only when ponies/gryphons/changlings/etc. are involved that it qualifies as clop.
On another note, as far as the relationship aspect of the story is concerned I for one am getting a bit antsy waiting for him to reunite with Luna. In fact, if I'm remembering correctly, the whole reason I ever even found this series was because I was searching for a decent Luna-romance-HiE-fic. Don't misunderstand, I absolutely love the story, but It seems to be taking forever just to get the focus back on the relationship that drew me to it in the first place. Instead we're treated to many scenes of him rekindling his romance with Maria, which while cute, seem far less interesting than just the hints she herself drops about possibly forming a herd with the three of them. We get it, the two of them are ecstatic to finally be reunited and together after all this time... but it's taking so long to get back that Luna must be starting to empathize with her on that front.
You, Sir, are diabolical.
I love it.
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I never knew that humanXhuman was classified as smut as opposed to clop, but duly noted. I'll change it. As for your concerns on the Luna relationship front, I understand them as well. I'm trying to get it to that point, but I can't very well say 'btw we beat the EOL let's all go home'. I guess in my efforts to keep from rushing the story along I've actually kinda slowed it down too much. Thanks for the input, I'll try and speed things along.
7183719 Yeah, proper story pacing is a bitch. But hey, if stuff needs to happen for the good of the story as a whole, then don't change it on account of my opinions regarding a single aspect, that whole comment was essentially just me griping.
...Also, the whole O.C.D. 'smut' v.s. 'clop' thing was just my personal views on it. To me at least, clop is the term for pony smut, so without at least some form of species from mlp involved, it's just ordinary smut.
hehe, lovely continuation of the story.
looking forward to the continuation of this chapter, as i think it adds to to the romance, but i can see people would like to skip that part.
A outbreak on almost whatever level wouldn't make monogamous relationships obsolete, not only would it cost more resources to upkeep but it could easily lead to infighting.
That's not even counting the massive cultural influences on it.
when you chose EOL as an acronimn, I see tons AOL's instalation cd making it's way on Equestria.
Hehehehe!!!! *imminent fangasm for Boss Senpai's work*
I'm a little raindrop short and stout!
It would seem that discord has played a dangerous game and I noticed that reference to the shaved heads and the long haired royals.
Soon the insanity of Dominic will make its way to the forefront and shadow him as a wraith in the night!!! Hehehehehehe!!!!!
Do you hear it......it is the last song of the nightingale...so beautiful, yet so full of sorrow and strife!! Bwahahahaha!!!!!!!!
Sorry.......Soontm
I see what ya did there. Your referring to yourself. Nice touch gave me a good laugh.
ahh yes, the two way mirror, also commonly known as a window..
All jokes aside great story so far..
My favorite rendition of the song
It seems, the infected didn't go for animals, just humans.
OH MY GOSH !!! ARE THEY GONNA.....DO IT...AT LAST ?????