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Well, when my damn internet decides to let me load fimfic within an hour, I'll be reading this.
For sure.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I'm surprised that there isn't any gore tag on this one. Anyways, time to read the hell out of this fic.
Continue to fuck dash or head out to get a chance of facing your nemesis, That's not an easy choice.
Or is it?
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Tags will be updated as the story progresses and paths are chosen.
-Agree to track and spy on Captain Ray. Have you chosen wisely? I don't fucking know.
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So would the other three come with us if we track him down or would this be a solo mission?
In my opinion you can either agree to go and Dash would do something very stupid and compromise the mission or refuse and hope the Wonderbolts can keep it together long enough to not do something stupid and compromise the mission.
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If you voted to go, the other three would [CENSORED].
(can't spoil anything. Just have to hope that Dash can hold it together...)
*After Choosing* "Have you chosen wisely?"
Me: Well I don't know but sometimes you gotta make a decision and roll with it. Plus if this were actually me I would have gone after Ray.
Argh!! What the fuck do I choose!?!
Have you chosen wisely?
I decided to go. And hopefully in the next chapter Soarin' and the Courier will basically tell Spitfire and Dash to stay at the apartment. Looking forward to some hot SpitDash action!
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Do what I do when I can't choose; flip a coin
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Same here, after what that prick's done to Dashie...
As long as she still...belongs to us, and is still broken and completely dependant on us I don't care what happens Dash~
Killing the Griffons it is!
"Have you chosen wisely?"
And I was thinking there were no trick questions.
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It's always fun making people second guess their decisions like this. If you think this is bad, just wait until the next few chapters... if we get that far.
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Nope nope nope, I refuse to second guess myself. If I doubt myself then that makes me less effective so I try to push all doubt out of my mind and just proceed.
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I hope you hold yourself to that strategy... I think the choice the next chapter will be the most difficult to make.
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I'm sure it's nothing compared to a choice I had to help make before...
"Have you chosen wisely?"
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I must say, putting that one line after people voted sure has given me more amusement than people's reaction when I killed off Tank.
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Well said good sir. I'm glad we amuse you.
Oh gosh.... the poll has closed... now we wait....
This story is amazing. been following it since Rainbow.
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Not yet... still a few more hours (I'm on Eastern Time...)
I have broken my habit of not reading incomplete stories so that I can take part in the voting.
Is this how everyone feels when there are no more chapters out yet?
I can't take it!
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Each chapter should hopefully be released within a few days after voting closes, depending on my work schedule. Each path is already planned out, and when the votes are severely leaning in one direction I can start writing the next chapter without worrying too much that the story will take the other path.
Is there an option for 'I'm taking Spitfire/Rainbow Dash alone with me'?
I chose Dash and Spitfire to accompany me. What's the worst, that could happen?
I have a feeling they would follow him even if he said he wanted to go alone...fuck it time for a threeway
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Originally there were two additional options; take just Dash or just Spitfire. Both those choices would lead to their own unique story branch, but as I'm going to make the entire book once an ending is reached here, having that many story branches would make this project last almost a year.
In my opinion taking them would be the worse option. Rainbow seems like she would freeze up at sight of a griffin with the possible exception being if you were in danger. Spitfire is too consumed by revenge to be a good choice. Sure she could probably protect Rainbow but everything would break down once you encounter Ray.
However, I feel that even if you choose to go alone they will just end up following you anyway. The Wonderbolts really would be better off fending off the assault on Las Pegasus. Rainbow is too broken to be of any realistic help but is a catch-22, either you take her with you and she probably screws up the plan or you leave her and she goes after you probably screwing up the plan.
Hmm..... either choose the hand or three..... hmm......
story is amazing.
Public?!
Aww...
Also, c'mon, this poll is a no-brainer; how are they supposed to get raped if they don't come with us, huh?
I really hope that isn't being sarcastic.
2934590 Okay... but taking Spitfire alone would have been fun; it'll break Soarin and Dashie's heart at the same time, as well as having a hot escort.
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You sick, twisted f*cks... I love you guys.
Both options have their pros and cons, though it feels like the cons outweigh the pros in both cases.
Can't I just pick option three: Bring Celestia?
In all srsness though, I think I have to go with option one. While likely to bring harm to the two mares, it's also possible it will increase the likelihood of succeeding the mission; saving all of Equestria. The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few! Victory at all costs!
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I actually did toy with the idea of bringing Discord.
Traveling in a group increase each individuals chance of survival and when going after trained killers it is a good idea to bring people with combat training.
Well Rainbow Dash's punishment was interesting and creative.
It's hard to remember that "you" is only a courier and not someone who knows something about stealth and combat but no. So I have to either risk them and me, or pretty much certain death.... Well it seems we are outnumbered if/when we find Ray so odds are we will die anyways because it seems one Griffin can hold their own against a number of ponies... I guess I could go alone and spare the two of them but that would devastate Rainbow Dash... She would probably kill herself after I die which is far better than her being recaptured by Ray. Plus as a courier I can move quickly and for long distances should I need to bug out. Well looks like I have made my choice
Omg what it said after the vote >_<
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Never thought you would have to think this hard while reading a clopfic, huh?
Well, this is interesting... the poll right now is much, much closer than I thought it would be... looks like I have to actually wait this one out before I start writing the next chapter.
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As soon as I saw "choose you're own adventure" I buckled down and recalled all the decision making skills I learned in a senior leadership camp I just went to a month ago so I am ready to do this.
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If your senior leadership camp had you choosing who to bring to kill the person responsible for raping your girlfriend that you pretty much raped when you met her, I just have two things to say...
1. WTF?
2. Where do I sign up?
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No just decision making but there was one event where we had to choose who in our squad had to die, and they made us think they were getting sent home after we chose. It was very hard to actually choose one of the people sitting next to you and it really made me think hard about what type of person I was. In order to go to something like this you must be a MCJROTC cadet in the Western United states that has gone to Basic Leadership Camp
Good God man, why must you make this so stressful for us to choose!
All I want is the bastard dead in the most painful way possible...
If he lives, all that clopping will have been for naught...
2942001 That is the sort of thought process that runs in the back of my mind, so thought about it in the same way you think about typing.
I say bring both...strength in numbers.