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  • T Diary of a Soldier

    The griffons attack on Los Pegasus, from the view of one pony guard.
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  • 5w, 5d
    Fan Sequel

    Greetings, fellow cloppers and clopettes.

    So, I was recently sent an interesting little link... it seems that one of my fans, Lunar Deviant, has decided to continue on the epicness of Broken Hearts and Diamonds and dive into the 'what-if' scenario of Rarity's life fifty years into the future. You can find the story HERE, and I highly recommend giving it a read (and following it as it is incomplete). It is fairly well written and for now seems to be sticking with the vibe I set in the original. Hell, the fact that KrisProwler gave it her official seal of approval should say how well it seems to be going.

    However, just remember that it is not the official sequel. There may be something coming up soon...

    1 comments · 64 views
  • 7w, 3d
    Where are the updates???

    4 comments · 69 views
  • 8w, 8h
    Because I was bored...

    So, got bored, and since my partner-in-crime did one, why not jump on the bandwagon?


    OC picked: Ray

    1. What is your name?

    You seriously don't know my name? Seriously? Are you that retarded to not look three lines up?

    <Just answer the question, please...>

    Fine... you may call me Captain Ray, ruler of the almighty Griffon Kingdom.

    2. Do you know why you were named that?

    Because it's my name.

    3. Single or taken?

    Absolutely single. I do not need any mate, nor do I want one.

    4. Have any abilities or powers?

    Heh heh... what powers don't I have? I have acquired one of the greatest artifacts and treasures in all of Equestria which has made me unstoppable!

    5. Stop being a Mary Sue!

    What the foal fucking Tartarus are you talking about?

    6. What's your eye color?

    Green. If you're lucky enough you may be able to see them right before I kill you...

    7. How about hair color?

    My primary feather color is black.

    8. Do you have any family members?

    Family? Feh! Who needs family?

    <can you please just answer the question?>

    My father killed my mother when I was right about to leave for training in the Griffon Army, so I killed him in return. There, happy?

    9. Oh? How about pets?

    I had a pet or two before, but they became boring and too loose. Though my last one did escape...

    10. That's cool, I guess. Now tell me something you don't like.


    11. Do you have any activities/hobbies that you like to do?

    If my current conquests and activities haven't made that clear, you're more of a retard than I thought.

    12. Have you ever hurt anypony in any way before?

    Oh yes... perhaps you are not familiar with the late Rainbow Dash? I remember one of the last activities I had her do; she was bound to the floor with her flank spread wide open, and I-


    13. Ever… killed anypony before?

    Who, me? Yes, yes I have... and I will kill many more...

    14. What kind of animal are you?

    I'm a cow. Seriously?! NOW you ask that question?! I'm a purebred griffon!

    15. Name your worst habits.

    Not playing well with others, it seems...

    16. Do you look up to anypony at all?

    As hard as it may be to believe, I actually admire that pony Celestia. She is by far the longest ruling leader of any nation in Equestria's history. How she has managed to retain rule is amazing. It will make it all the sweeter to crush her record myself.

    17. Are you gay, straight, or bisexual?

    Straight, as every noble griffon should be.

    18. Do you go to school?

    I graduated the Griffon Military Academy as top of my class.

    19. Ever want to marry and have kids one day?

    Hahahaha! No.

    20. Do you have fangirls/fanboys?

    I believe I do. Those who worship me shall earn a place as my servants in my new kingdom.

    21. What are you most afraid of?

    I fear absolutely nothing.

    22. What do you usually wear?

    As of now I still don my officer's uniform. Only once the ponies are crushed and serving me will I allow myself to be crowned Emperor.

    23. What's one food that tempts you?

    Though it is seen as 'barbaric' and currently illegal, I have heard that pony meat is quite tasty...

    24. Am I annoying you?


    25. Well, it's still not over!

    I can make it over...

    26. What class are you (low class, middle class, high class)?

    High class. Seriously, are you blind?

    27. How many friends do you have?

    Friends? I do not need friends. Friends only slow you down.

    28. What are your thoughts on pie?

    Blasphemy. Cake is supreme.

    30. Favorite drink?

    Cold spring water from the mountains surrounding my kingdom.

    31. What's your favorite place?

    No place like home...

    32. Are you interested in anypony~?


    33. That was a stupid question.

    Indeed it was.

    34. Would you rather swim in a lake or the ocean?

    Griffon's are not known for their swimming skills.

    35. What's your type?

    What part of 'I don't need friends' and I have no need of a mate don't you seem to understand??

    36. Any fetishes?

    Well, torturing ponies is near the top...

    37. Seme or uke?

    Once again, your stupidity is unmatched.

    38. Camping or indoors?

    Camping. It is becoming a lost art among us griffons...

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  • 12w, 4d
    More Updates

    Good news, everyone! I finally found time to write this morning and got more writing in today than I have in the past two months combined!

    <Too bad you barely wrote half a page, you lazy scum.>

    Hey, I'll take what I can get.

    But anyway, sorry for the delays in all my ongoing projects... between work, more work, buying a home, credit card fraud, my car being recalled three times, and the usual shenanigans, writing has had to take a back seat to real-life.

    3 comments · 98 views
  • 15w, 15h
    Writing Update

    <It's about time you got your sorry ass back on here.>

    Shaddup. Be lucky I decided to finally get on here at all.

    <Are you going to quit stalling and tell them, or do I have to do this for you AGAIN?>

    Calm down, Ray, I got this.


    Long time no see everyone. I'm sure you're all wondering the same thing; where the hell are the updates to Starfall, Another Point of View, and Wilting Rose. Well, Wilting Rose is on hiatus until I finish up Starfall, and that story and Another Point of View are under way.

    Now, the reason that it's been a while since I've updated anything... well, work almost killed me.


    My new main job has been taking its toll on me, but things should be quieting down now that summer is in its last month. However, its the part-time job I hold that is eating up more and more of my time. For those of you privy enough to know my part-time job, things have heated up immensely and caused me to take increased hours.

    <That's not the whole reason, you 'tard.>

    Ah, yeah... so... another reason I've been taking so long is... well...

    *EDIT* Probably shouldn't post why...

    But anyway! I'll be finding time to write again soon, so expect a new chapter in both stories (hopefully) by the end of the month!

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#1 · 93w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I have yet to read the story yet, but I don't think the story cover art is alowed to show snatch.... Not that I mind or anything but the site people might.  I have no clue if its a big deal on this site but if it is you might want to do something about it.

#2 · 93w, 1d ago · 1 · 1 · Chapter 1 ·

No snatch


Comment posted by TheCamel deleted at 9:17pm on the 13th of February, 2013
#4 · 92w, 5d ago · 3 · 8 · Chapter 2 ·

Wow. I'll be taking my thumb back.


#5 · 92w, 5d ago · 1 · 2 · Chapter 2 ·

Not bad, but not something I will be re-reading.

#6 · 92w, 5d ago · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·

Probably the most messed up thing I've read this year. If that was the intention then good job if not then you need serious help.

#7 · 92w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I give it a thumbs up but dude honestly this even by my insanely twisted mind is creepy

#8 · 92w, 5d ago · 2 · 3 · Chapter 2 ·

Ignore what I said before. GET HELP NOW!

#9 · 92w, 5d ago · 2 · 3 · Chapter 2 ·

Fuck.  You had a pretty decent story going there on the first chapter.  Didn't much like the rape, but it was done somewhat tastefully.  Then you publish this rubbish.  I don't down-vote stories for their subject matter (and no one should), but I just wanted to mention that this was quite a disappointment.  It could have been a pretty good story had you not been so obsessed with getting sicko rape shit in there just to get your rocks off.  But seriously if you get off to this, you really need some help.  

#10 · 92w, 5d ago · 1 · 2 · Chapter 2 · was pretty good...but the rape and other didn't really care for it...:ajbemused:....other than the rape it was really good!:scootangel:

#11 · 92w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


nothing more to be said

#12 · 92w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

on second thought it was good ^^



#13 · 92w, 4d ago · 3 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

Good beginning, bad ending...

#14 · 92w, 4d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

I thought it was good till the second chapter. It had a good set up and could have been better. Also whats with the adventure tag? I mean they leave to go on a mission but it suddenly turns to shit and then they get released. There was no adventure just rape. I think it could have worked if say after a few days the protagonist managed to escape his cell and rescued Dash and they had to evade and kill their way to freedom all the while having Dash deal with her new mental problems but hey it was decent.

#15 · 92w, 4d ago · 2 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

Sorry to sound like a broken record, but rape isn't in my quota of turn ons. Especially if its Dash.

#16 · 92w, 4d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

Twilight: So RainbowDash how ya doin? Plan on haveing a good day?:twilightsmile:

RainbowDash: Ya i actualy do....After about 7 Griffin abortions, 5 litters of TimberWolf abortions..and 20 other abortions from other species....


Twilight: ohhh......ok then....

RainbowDash: Oh ya..and one regular....

#17 · 92w, 1d ago · 10 · 6 · Chapter 1 ·

Its not rape if u like it :derpytongue2:

#18 · 92w, 1d ago · · 5 · Chapter 2 ·

you hurt MY [size=32][/size]DASHIE PREPARE YOUR ANUS SIR!

#19 · 91w, 3d ago · · 3 · Chapter 2 ·

This calls for a Ziolian strike missile the griffin will soon become a giant ass crater in this universe. And not a single square foot of non-griffin grounds will be touched. Rainbow will go through intense ziolian magical therapy sessions and eventually my favorite Pegasus will be back to normal. And my daughters will yell at me endlessly(damed spoiled goddesses).

Order 84954927.68 has been given,

King Lazaro Sol of Ziolia

#20 · 91w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

She stays close to you as much as she can, refusing to return home and instead opts to stay with you.


I think it's safe to say that 'My Little Dashie' gave her a better excuse than… this.


Oh, look! The fire's back. Can't think why…

#21 · 91w, 3d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

I read it again...thought about it again from a different point of's actually not half bad...the rape is fine...and everything is good....just...tip: don't include things about RainbowDash getting or possibly getting just gives her a sort of bad rep. if you know what I mean...:applejackunsure:

#22 · 91w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

I liked it.. but didn't I can't take Dashie being raped.. I just feel really bad for her but most of my OCS would have most likely have been killed during that for harming those griffons for doing that..... I could say wich OC I used for this but I won't because I'll get so, so many hater replies. :derpyderp2:

#23 · 91w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

tis a shame besides a few spelling issues i liked it, but because of rainbow dashes role people will instantly dislike and its a shame

#24 · 91w, 2d ago · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·

At first I felt like a sick bastard for enjoying this. Then I remembered I fap to ponies. I AM a sick bastard.:pinkiecrazy:

#25 · 91w, 2d ago · 1 · 2 · Chapter 2 ·

This chapter ruined the first.

#26 · 91w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>2107797 yeah... sounds about right...

And did she get pregnant or not? I'm still confused on the whole ordeal

#27 · 91w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

oh and chapter 3!

Comment posted by TheCamel deleted at 7:20pm on the 20th of February, 2013
#29 · 91w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


I think this may be the best comment ever.


Pretty sure that there won't be a chapter three. Yes, I have a really fucked up mind (welcome to the internet), but even I gotta draw the line somewhere (usually much further down than most people). Then again, ya never know what may inspire me to continue poor Dash's experience... or maybe introduce another pony to this story...

#30 · 91w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


so... in other words, there MAY be a chapter 3...

#31 · 91w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·



Still trying to decide if I can bear to put poor Dashie through anymore though...

Oh who am I kidding. Of course I can. :rainbowderp:

#32 · 91w, 2d ago · 4 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

Thanks! Hope you make more fanfics like this. Can't wait for more!!! GIVE ME MORE!!:rainbowwild:

Comment posted by MidnightThePegasus deleted at 1:28am on the 22nd of February, 2013
#34 · 91w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I would had preferred if you had it in a sense where (you) were able to rescue Dash despite her being raped. At least getting back at the Griffins would have been better but a bad ending needs to be done every now and then. NOT that I liked what happened to dash but you wrote this pretty well 'dark' like you said~  

#35 · 91w, 1d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·


I was leaning towards a happy ending at one point, but after browsing various stories on here, it just seemed like going that route would be too typical and somewhat expected.

Again, there is the possibility of a third chapter. What route it may take (if any at all) has yet to be decided. Maybe I'll make a poll and let people vote. But for now, my attention is on a few other fics I'm working on/have in mind, plus my lousy IRL job... :facehoof:

#36 · 91w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


Maybe it's not YOU who rapes dash, but dash who rapes YOU what chapter 3 should be about...

Comment posted by Froboy69 deleted at 9:41am on the 21st of February, 2013
#38 · 91w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


Hey you never know. Maybe something with a character relationship development would work. I would like to see (you) and Rainbow Dash together in a more positive future.

#39 · 91w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


That would have to be a completely different story. Yeah, Dash deserves a happy relationship, but I don't think I could work it out so it goes that way in this one.

#40 · 91w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I like what omeggga said.:twilightsmile: Rainbow Dash did say she would make him pay for raping her. So how about you have rainbow dash rape him. Not kill him of course but teach him a good lesson.:rainbowwild: that would be another great addition for this awesome clop fic.

#41 · 91w, 23h ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


Sadly I don't think that will happen unless he/she continues the story to where RD gets that fire in her eyes back.

#42 · 91w, 6h ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

I hope he does. Granted it was pretty sad, but this deserves a continuation :rainbowdetermined2:

#44 · 90w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


or maybe that's how she'll gets the fire in her eyes back!

Comment posted by GenericUsername deleted at 12:05am on the 24th of February, 2013
#46 · 90w, 6d ago · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·

I think it's kind of a shame that you got the rating bomb due the plainly posted subject matter warning. It's sad, and it's dark. The story did exactly what it set out to do, and I applaud you for that.

You'll get no moral beat-downs from me.

#47 · 90w, 6d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·


What can I say...

Yeah, I'll agree that I have a fucked up mind, especially since part of this story was almost a play-by-play of a dream I had (hint: it MAY have been the last half of the second chapter...)  :rainbowhuh:

#48 · 90w, 6d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

For anyone curious, I've begun brainstorming for additional chapters for this story. Yes, the story is technically complete, but the additional chapters will be added to compliment the existing story. Will the next chapters be how Rainbow Dash recovers? Will 'you' continue using Dash for your personal pleasure? Or will I go into detail of Dash's time in captivity? Who knows.... (oh wait, I do!)

#49 · 90w, 6d ago · 1 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

Write more of this.

#50 · 90w, 6d ago · 1 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

Really nice story. Would love to have seen all of the rape scenes the guard was describing

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