As Equestria pluments into turmoil and the great and powerful Princess Celestia is assassinated, her sister Luna takes power and forms the radical U.N.L.R.(United National Lunar Republic), the young pony Rainbow Dash discovers that her life is a mirage of memories that have been repressed in her head for years. Questions she never really thought of or asked herself get answered and she discovers who she really is, or better yet what she is. What she finds out about herself however will change her life forever. Meanwhile a secret rebellion known as the Enlightenment, is planning to overthrow Luna's rule. The mysterious leader of this rebellion offers Rainbow Dash an opportunity to teach her to control the very thing she is. The Juggernaut.
What is the Juggernaut? How is Rainbow Dash involved with The Enlightenment? Who can she trust and who does she betray or better yet who betrays her? Follow Rainbow Dash as she is plunged into an unexpected adventure that will put her loyalty to the ultimate test, but what exactly does it mean to be loyal?
By the way I would like to thank my good friend Bulltrup for the awesome cover art! :D
Hmm... Hmm...
Seems interesting enough. I shall track this!
I like the concept here and I'll admit I'm curious, but the grammatical errors and typos are ridiculous and make the story difficult to read sometimes. I'll follow this story anyway though, so I hope future installments will make better use of a little spell-check. Otherwise, pacing was great, characters seem deep, and the plot looks intense!
Please write more!!!
Don't you know who I am? I'm Rainbow Dash, b*tch!
Please update
Please update I read this story once every week so I can remember how cool it is
Please update
My greatest enemy is finally dead!? I would kiss you if I didn't hate mortals!
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Hence why people have editors like you
You would too if you were supposed to be equals but not. There's more to it but I want to hear what else one of Celestia's has to say.
Bad idea
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Luna is smarter when it comes to government but Celestia was a pony person. Ponies like to have their hand held and shit. At least, the equestrians do. Which is why Luna can't lead the ponies. It's not what they want but it's what they need. However you see how ponies will do extreme things to get their way. Starlight, starswirl, any high powered unicorn. Does Trixie count. She was wronged but...the aftermath
Cue Astro boy reference. One sin
She is probably the most knowledgeable person about government ironically. Sorry, sorry. Continue.
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Out of Spitfire and Pinkie for a mare friend I choose pinks. Sorin is a no.
For the record, I hope Sorin and Rainbow end up together. Although, considering that you mentioned Spitfire's sexual desires, I don't think that's going to happen.