Rainbow Dash is lost. Not in the normal sense of lost. She's in Cloudsdale, but it's not the same. She can't figure out why until she visits Ponyville and makes a startling discovery. Will she ever be the same?
(A/N): I like constructive criticism, because it helps my writing. you can be harsh, but not downright rude, things that will help me become a better writer. Thank you :)
Dis gon be gud
Also, first comment :)
Discords got this in the bag!
this-fic-is....SO AWSOME
all of the feels man..all those feels,, I feel for you dashie
keep up the awesome work for all of your fics are amazing
oh btw when is the next chapter out if you don't know yet its fine
oh also I really want discord and dashie get togever cause I think discord and dashie fics are awesome
I also thin that ship with discord and dashie are cute and addorble "yay"
plz plz plz let discord win dashie's heart and those too fall in love
4733032 Thank you :) and is a mystery as to who will win her heart :3 and im not sure yet on the next chapter. Thank you :) :)
your welcome
Iz want Sombra win~doki.
Poor RD