Rainbow Dash was once a beautiful Princess who had everything she could ever want or need. But this caused her to become selfish and arrogant. For this she, her castle, and all who lived there were cursed. The only way to break the curse was for Rainbow Dash to find true love and to be loved in return, but can a beast ever find love? And could anyone ever lean to love a beast?
Art belongs to tomColt15! Thank you so much for allowing me to use your art...now stop giving me ideas for stories with your amazing art! I have too many now to write!
Also this is for the MacDash October Contest.
Chapters (1)
3379811 Thanks so much!
This isn't the place, but that's an amazingly cute Rainbow Dash.
3379935 Thank you!
This is awesome. I had an idea of something like this once...
Of course it was with a Turian and Fleur de Lis.
3380019 I'm glad you liked it!
Nice beginning. I like how you switched the roles so the clock is the excited one, while the candlestick is unsure of things.
Just a few things I noticed though,
I think you mean muscles.
You also seem to switch between calling Soarin 'Brother in law' and 'Brother,' near the beginning.
Do you mean 'planting?'
Good start, altogether. Will be keeping and eye on this one.
3380042 Thank you for the feed back. I will go back and fix some of those mistakes. With the planting and harvesting...I might have worked on a farm...but I was never good at that part of the job. My job was to repair fences and such.
Thank you for your feedback!
I like this. I like this a lot. Please continue this.
And I can't help but ask... Who's going to be Gaston?
3380229 I'm glad you like it and I hope to have another chapter up soon.
As much as I love Gaston and LeFou (Played him in the musical) I will not have one in the story. Unfortunately I could not find a place for them.
MacDash and SoarinApple?
3380324 Yep! There will be more SoarinApple in future chapters.
3380327
Well... good, I guess I have a group to add it to then. Of course I wonder who will be Gaston?
3380337 Unfortunately there will be no Gaston or LeFou (even though I was the sidekick in the musical). I could not find anyone I liked for the part, and though it is a Beauty and the Beast version of things, I am changing things up.
And I shall join the group!
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No Gaston? But there must be a Gaston! Even he is to be a Mare
You are already a member of the SoarinJack group, you joined 4 weeks ago
3380375 Trust me I love the character and would love to have him in the story, but I could not find a place for him in what I wanted to do. If I do a re-write I will add him and more than likely it will be Trixie, but the story is almost done and I am too lazy to go back and rework it right now.
Forgot about that...ADD and college do not mix well with ponies.
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Yeah Trixie would be the only canon mare that could be a Gaston
All that matters is that it's added now
.....just gonna go and give this a favourate, coz its MacDash, has a great concept and well...i forgot
R63 Beauty and the Beast...I like it. However, a lot of your sentences seem to be run-ons in need of some commas, and pieces of the story feel...a tad rushed. I could try helping with the run-on sentences if you want.
Do more storys like this
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So im just wandering....whens this gonna be updated?
3744409 I have the next two chapters kind of done...I lost a lot of the story though when my computer crashed
So I am trying to rewrite it. Might try to get more done soon.
3744411 oh...computers can be a bitch at times
When ya planning on adding some more chapters?
Add more. It’s really good.