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Captain Unstoppable


"When you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth." Sherlock Holmes

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Little Mac has always had a hard time in school. While reading and writing just seemed to come easy to other ponies, he had to struggle constantly and even then he didn't get it. Was he doomed to forever not be able to learn like the other ponies, or was it because he had never been taught the right way?

Thank you so much to Biker Dash,jszellmer, CptBrony, and Masked Ferret for the edits! Also thank you to Allonso Bronyguy and Shrapmo for reading it!

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Gotta love them fancy mathematics.

I see only two spots where there would be any need of correction, and that is formatting issues. I could take a look at the Gdoc, and see if I can figure out why the two spots did not format the paragraphs correctly.

Love this idea, btw! :pinkiehappy:

There really is no such thing as 'IQ'. Here's my source. For people who don't want to bother clicking the link, it basically says that IQ is three different aspects: verbal abilities, short term memory abilities, and reasoning abilities, and since there are three different aspects, you can't pin it down with a single number.

:heart: I want moooooooore!

*Gose crazy on though of this story entering my brain

Best story ever make more❗️

Comment posted by Ebony Gryphon deleted Aug 15th, 2014

Very nice story and very well handled

This is great! I have friends with dyslexia, and I also have a friend who's overly smart.... This story hit me right in the heart! :fluttercry: Please write more!:rainbowkiss:

“Calm yerself youngin’, their there ain’t nothin’ ta be afraid of,” she said as calmly as possible, her voice filled with sincerity as she talked spoke to her eldest grandson.

And that's only one sentence. No offense, but I think you need a better editor. I hear rogueunicorn is pretty good.

Cute, my older brother's got Dyslexia

4856036 Hope I did it just. I have a mild form of dyslexia

4856062 Aww *pats head*

It seems OK to me, though he should at least be able to read some, or recognize what a work looks like to how it's said.

4855239 In order to do that, you must adhere to the following protocol:

1) You must sign the standard 'Long-Suffering Editor' Contract in triplicate.

2) Buy out previous editor's franchise for a sum of not less than $500,000 or equivalent in muffins.

3) Send at least one version of the editorial revisions to the original author during one of his MMA events. (And as the author does participate in MMA, politeness is highly recommended as per paragraph 3, subsection 6 of the Extracurricular Activities rider to the main contract, but not strictly mandated.)

4) Refer to oneself in First-Person Format. (Third-Person Persons being strictly banned after an unfortunate incident with one 'Trixie Lulamoon.')

5) DANCE CONTEST!!!!

6) Justify why 'The Pen is Mightier than the Sword' if 'Actions Speak Louder Than Words.'

Do that and your set, but if you screw any of it up, you have to repeat the entire process over again.

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4855239 Oh do I love to fight! 3 rounds, no holding back, best two out of three or knock out.

4864551 Now, now. If you're going to do that, take it outside and let me sell tickets. :ajsmug:

I kept trying to take this seriously, but calling him "Little Mac" made that just impossible because I kept expecting him to challenge people to a boxing match.

5398628 So... did you like the story or not? Lol

5398670 Good! Check out my other stories!

Awwwww, beautiful story. Made me well up a bit there, bud. :ajsmug:

Do you have plans to continue this?

5499135 Not really sure. I mean there is room to, but I am not sure how to go about it without getting too personal

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Ah, fair enough. A great story either way. :twilightsmile:

This was....so touching. Little Mac has the opposite problem of me. I have really good reading, bad math. But it was touching.

:fluttershysad: Not gonna cry.
:raritydespair: Not...gonna.
:raritycry: I cried.

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