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JonRS


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damn... it took you this long to post the story here?

read this in fanfiction.net
cool story

Oh I remember this on fanfic this was one of the epics!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart:

i love this story :pinkiehappy:

Glad to see this on here.

Good story but I'm gonna stop after Chapter 1 for now because you really really need someone to proofread it. Also it is a slight bit rushed in some cases. Good luck

i remember reading this on fanfiction.net, glad to see it here :pinkiehappy:

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aye, this one here is a good story :rainbowkiss:

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Read on, my friend. I got absolutely no sleep tonight and I have to be up for the day, all because of how enveloping this story was. Look past the errors, that's what I did, for this story is completely amazing.

Ever looking around for a good clop story and then find one, but get so enveloped in the storyline because it's so good that you don't care about the sex when it finally occurs? That's how this was. I greatly encourage you to read this.

Oh my goodness it's finally here. Fav'd and upvoted. Welcome, good sir. Welcome.
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Hmmm, yes. :moustache:
I remember this one. :trollestia:
Lets see if its as good as it used to be when I was a scrub. :ajsmug:

found it in clopfeec.heroku, really good fic.

looks like he's gonna...touch fluffy tail AAHH HAHAHAHAA!!!....im sorry :ajsleepy:

you gotta love the MGS references :pinkiecrazy:

this was the story that really pulled me into the fandom, I thank you for that JohnRS :pinkiehappy:. glad to see it finally on Fimfiction... though i'm still waiting on the sequel

I thought the whole point of the story was to try to ween ponyville from same-sex couples?

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I will continue but it does feel a bit rushed... I mean i'd expect Spike to atleast try and get back with Diamond. 'Course she is a premadona and will crawl back to him probably. Believe it or not i'm actually not that into Clopfics. I just feel that they are more... how you say "Intricately" defined in the way of detail. :duck::twistnerd:

Heyy! Lookie here! and I was just about to look up your story too! Well then, I have already favorited your story on FanFiction, and I will do so again here. Nice piece of work, my good sir.

:fluttercry:Awwww Spike, I'm sad that she feels literally NOTHING for him.

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I completely agree. Nice concept, but there is something like five errors per paragraph, it's impossible to focus on the story. Aside from the grammar, you also need page-breaks.

It's been a long time since I read this.

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Hey! Fancy seeing you here:raritywink:

Man I'm just goina come out and say it. Spike's a FUCKING baws!!!
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

2684749 No, walk towards the rape:pinkiecrazy:

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Heh heh, oh hey there! I... uh... THIS ISN'T WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE. I'm here for the plot- I mean the ass- I mean the STORY!... Ah, buck it. Yeah, I'm here for the clop.

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I was to originally 'hangs head'. Dang, I read this a long time ago

I know to a fact I've read this story before. Just not sure where... Maybe fanfiction.net?

2687563 Yeah, that's where I remember reading it too. Great story! :pinkiehappy:

This has the most ridiculous plot I have ever seen. Now if you'll excuse me I shall read the rest :derpytongue2:

Ah, I seem to remember reading this one on fanfiction.net. Glad you finally posted the story here.

2687563 I think it was on clopfic.heroku when it was still up.

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"Looking for a clop-fic but finding a story" you say.
My answer (or at least 3 answers.)
1. Diaries of a Madman
2. Man of War
3. The Lost Element.
You will stay up reading these. I can guaranty it.
:twilightsmile: Have a good one.

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Trixie's Magic Bit and Who Rules? Are great very long stories. 2 of my favorites on the entire site. The third book of Who Rules actually had me complaining when the clop happened, cause it made the climax take longer.

What the actual fuck?

Do you remember when this story was originally posted on Fanfiction.net?

Pepperidge farm remembers.

Oh god I remember reading this a long time ago and then stopping when it didn't update for a while. When I saw this in the featured box it made my day.

This... Is probably the best clopfic i've ever read. :rainbowhuh:
... If it included a scene with Celestia, it would be undoubtedly the best, but pretty f***in' swell in any case :pinkiecrazy:

Great job with the storyline, characters, and everything else. Kind of a silly concept ("a future where there are no children, you must have sex") but you made it work, and work well for that matter. So often you see clopfics with little to no storyline, just kind of hops into the action without much work. Seeing stuff like this just makes me all giddy, and restores my faith in the writers on this site. Can't really say much because if I wrote my own story, it would more then likely be total s***, but hey, I can still appreciate good s*** when I see it. I give this story a thumbs up, a favorite, and 5 Applejacks.
:ajsleepy::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::ajbemused::ajsmug:

I really liked this story, but i cant help but notice some...well, a lot for a fanfiction.... grammatical errors. I'd suggest going back and re-reading the whole story to find them. Namely, I noticed your comma placement, or lack thereof. This totally throws off the flow of the story and makes me have to re-read it to determine how it actually should sound. Other than this, I really liked this fic, keep on writing, bro!

Ooomigosh! This first chapter feels JUST like those old 80s comedy porn movies! I am soooooooo reading it all. :rainbowkiss:

:rainbowdetermined2: vs. :moustache:
Let the s.e.x war begin! :pinkiecrazy:

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Unrealistic clopfic.... imagine that. :trollestia:

That last part, Dexter much?

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Well, I will definitely stay up reading Diaries of a Madman, considering that it's the LONGEST FANFIC ON THE SITE. How somebody can put 1,000,000+ words in one story without it ever getting boring is insane, that guy has talent.

The other two, I'm not really a fan of the sad/tragedy genre, so I prefer to not get into those two, same with grimdarks, and all that.

I saw the reference to Metal Gear the Moment he put his finger to his ear.

epicness was made in this story

Maximum ?????????? has been achieved... again!:rainbowhuh::applejackconfused:

2685284 That's my thought exactly.
And when is the series set? I originally thought everypony was older. After the story with Trixie, however, it could be between seasons two and three. Please Clarify.:derpyderp1:

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