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Blooming Cherries


A bipedal organism reading and writing about colourful quadrapedal female equines having rambunctious escapades over learning the fundamentals of companionship amongst one another.

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This is a story of a dragon and a twist of fate. Sometimes a dream can become a reality. A dream you never thought would ever become possible. One you didn't even know you truly wanted. The real question one should ask themselves is "Do I truly want this?". Only time can answer such questions. But what if those answers only leave ever the more questions? Perhaps friendship will count now, more than ever.

Other tags: Nuzzles,
*6/26/18 - May add Mature tag for talk of sex, possible sexy scenes (not clop), and mentions or interactions with genitalia.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 56 )

Great start, loving it so far, but:

I want to start a collection of fics in a world where Spike gets turned into an alicorn princess.

Wouldn't he be an alicorn Prince? Or are you planning to gender-shift him? If so... why? I mean, Spike is one of the few male characters on the show with developed personality. Plus, reading the intro, nothing in there says he has to become a female to do all those things. If he does have to be a female to do those things... why? I mean, it's not a deal-breaker or anything, just kinda odd. A sudden male alicorn would be a very nifty thing to read about.

Still, you have some decent writing chops, and I'm a sucker for a story with the brother/sister relationship for Spike and Twilight, so I'm on board. :twilightsmile:

Just two one continuity notes:

1.) Spike tells Luna he's never seen her bedchamber before, but in Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep and the rest of the principal cost are all in Luna's bedroom when they try to fall asleep together.

2.) Applejack makes the remark that Pinkie Pie has never been in "Canterlot's giant kitchen." Well, she was, actually. It was during A Canterlot Wedding, Part 1.

Other than those two one minor issues, it has started off on an interesting note.:twilightsmile:

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Well. I have my own explanation for it. And it's not that it didn't cross my mind. It's just that. Well. I kinda have a thing for gender-bent Spike. It's always been appealing to me. Not that male Spike isn't. He's my broski. Love Spike. It Takes A Village is like one of my fav. stories, and that has male Spike.

And a male alicorn would be interesting.
Also, Thank You so much.

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And on the Pinkie thing.....Maybe i have to rewatch episodes, holy shiz. DO I KNOW ANYTHING ANYMORE!!!!!!!!

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Oh, and also thank you for your time! My bad. Me being all rude.

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I'll have to recheck, but I thought Twilight was sleeping on one of the spare beds and Luna was in the big one. Maybe I confused that story element.

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I remember it being Twilight in the big one with everpony else and Spike in other smaller ones. I think Luna fell asleep in the middle of the floor. Gracefully and elegantly mind you.

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Yup, just checked... you're right. My bad. Ignore me!

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Victory! Well played, sir. Well played. You had the upper hand at .......crap there is still that Pinkie thing with the kitchen. I shall say we are even. Yes, yes? No?

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Aww. Thank you. :twilightsmile:I could hug you. However science hasn't gotten that far. Another let down from humanity.

While this looks to be a very interesting story the prospect of the main character changing so much from canon is really unappealing to me personally. I think just a bit more exposition on how things got to be currently would help ease readers in too. I'll give it a chance because the idea is just so bizarre.

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Thanks for the reply, I'm sorry if I came off too negative, I love that your so motivated about your story and had the courage write it.

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It's okay. You did give me something to think about though. Not everybody has the same likes or preferences. Just giving my story a shot is all I ask. So, thank you.

Love the story!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

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Thank you so much. I love that you enjoyed it that much.

A small thing you might want to check "mad" instead of "made" is used a few times.

Here's what I found:

Twilight mad sure he knew that,

being related to Celestia was what probably mad her an expert of the art.

Also, at the end, Apple Bloom's name should have a capital B, for consistency's sake.

said Apple bloom tauntingly.

But, they're really minor. There were a few sentences that weren't super clear, but otherwise, what you've written is better than most fanfics here. And for that, I applaud you, sir/madam.

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Thank you for your help kind sir/madam. I appreciate the help. :twilightsmile:

Well, this is a interestingly good start. Keep up the good work!
Will be watching and good luck.:moustache:

Do I smell a Spike x Luna story? Oohhhhh it might just be one. I'll keep and eye on this story. Also, very nicely done with pretty much everything so far!

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Thank you :) It means a lot. I didn't think anybody would like it.

I wonder if Spike and Apple bloom would remain together in this fic or is something going to happen to break them up.
but if they do break up I would love for Spike and Luna to get together. I mean despite Spike x Luna being my OTP, the way you wrote their interaction with each other was both fun and adorable in this, I would ship them in this fic even if I didn't care about the pairing.

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So you liked it? I didn't think people would particularly like what I did.

6441078 well I can't speak for anyone else, but I thought this was very fun to read.

Hmm... well, u got me intrigued; so, I'm definitely keep a eye on this :yay:. Plus I gotta see when dear Spike gets changed into his future role cause that's goin' to probably get some interestin' reactions out of everypony when it happens :rainbowlaugh:

This story has great promise and I'm definitely liking the SpikeBloom ship with a hint of SpikeLuna. Very creative and we'll thought out as well. A few grammar mistakes but they didn't really detract from the story.

However, there is one thing that I'd have to say would bother me. That's if Spike is actually turned into an Alicorn Princess. Why does he gave to become a mare? Why not a prince?
That's honestly my biggest gripe. If he turns mare, then I can't guarantee I'll still be interested. But the story is still good. :twilightsmile:

i love the premise and its written well, what else does a story need?
...all i will say is that i patiently wait for moar

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I intended it to be done forever ago...... I've just been so distracted.

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s'all good, i dont mind waiting a long time for an update. just dont forget about this story if your struck with inspiration! :pinkiesmile:

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I think about it all the time. I just haven't gotten to actually writing it lol

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PROCRASTINATORS UNITE!...
tomorrow... maybe... i dont know i kinda have a thing to do aaaaaand...

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Yeah, totally. Fallout 4 and Plants vs Zombies Garden Warfare 2 are my crack right now. And I gotta finish it before Dark Souls 3 comes out or idk if it'll get done lol

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I'm gonna work on it tonight though. See if I can get back into binge writing.

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May I asked what you liked about it? Just curious.

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if i had to wander a guess it'd probably be the idea as a whole
spike turning into a princess (no less a different one from the four we know of) and dealing with being a different gender? cant say ive heard of that idea before let alone using it in a story. im just curious to see how you'll make spike handle it and how the other princesses will handle it (especially twilight!:twilightoops:) :ajsmug:

YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS! ITS ALIVE :pinkiehappy:
its been so long sense I heard of this story and I do believe the last time was when Blooming Cherries and I talked about what’s going to happen to Spike:unsuresweetie:

and also yeah first comment besides author :moustache:

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See. I didn't forget. Just took a million years

Well that was one hell of a wait! Ah well can't rush art I suppose. Can't wait to see the story progress some more! :pinkiesmile:

Yah, I'm SO glad to see this interestin' story get updated :yay:; can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter~ :pinkiehappy:

Good chapter. When will it next be updated?

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I'm basically redoing the whole 3rd chapter so...... I can't promise anything. I might plan for sometime this month. Might just release it on Christmas idk yet.

Comment posted by Blooming Cherries deleted Sep 13th, 2018
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