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Sparkler
Not the G1 Sparkler. Nor the G3.5 Sparkler. Nor the G4 Draft Sparkler. Nor the Winningverse Sparkler (even though she's awesome).
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Why is everything between Rarity and Twilight, always BDSM?
2999922 It isn't. Perhaps you just keep stumbling across the sexiness.
2999922
I had actually never seen this pairing before, so I don't know what you might be referring to!
3000147
That's because there isn't enough of it
but what's there always seems to involve BDSM...
Did Satan help you write this chapter, or something?
I'll read just for the wordcount.
I really liked the way it was written.
You know what I thought, Sparkles
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Oh, c'mon, you know that lily-white oh-so-proper unicorn is a dirty little mare behind closed doors.
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I've no doubt that she can be
I just wish it didn't always have to be BDSM (there's more fetishes out there you know?)
3007760
Okay, I'll bite... what fetishes would you like to see Rarity and Twilight get up to instead?
Inspire me, and I just might write it...
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Hell I dunno... Voyeurism, exhibitionism, Autagonistophilia, Autoandrophilia(which Twilight can do something about as well xD) Agalmatophilia for Rarity... Chremastistophilia...
I actually looked up a list... there's so many things!
3008121
I try to stay verbose... but for this post, I think the only reply can be a meme.
3008121
Man, and I thought Sweetie Belle was the walking dictionary around here.
Honestly, I wouldn't even know where to begin approaching most of those, not having any experience with them, or even knowing anyone who's into those. (And when an author tries to write clop scenes about things they're not into and/or have no experience with... it shows. As evidenced by about 3/4ths of the clopfics on this very site.
)
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Well, I'd be interested in talking about it if you'd like. a good setup is half the battle
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Ha! Let me finish working my way through the ones I've already got in progress first, and we'll see...
In the meantime -- Rarity's dirty desires
vs. Twilight's adorkable OCD tendencies? 
Yes, this can only end well.
Let the games begin...
Oh good grief...
Did I call it or what? Rarity's dirty desires 
versus Twilight's adorkable OCD tendencies... 
i dont know if there even will be actual clop but thi story is ALREADY gold
I told you once, I'll tell you again:
This right here is a healthy D/s relationship. Using the safeword when unsure, the giving of trust. It's all very naturally written here.
Also, my favorite part will always be that ending:
That is a great ending, and totally Twi in my opinion. You get 6 out of 5 spikes
That ending...
Well that was excellently done. Very intense without being overwhelming.
Oh, Spike. Poor, poor Spike. Believe me little dude, if you couldn't be the dragon of Rarity's dreams before, you definitely don't qualify now! Well, unless you don't grow ginormous and learn about BDSM like it's the back of your claw.
This was absolutely wonderful. Glad to see I'm not the only one that thinks Twilight has that inner dominant hiding away inside of her! Then again, it's always the quiet ones with plenty of time taken to think about their feelings that manage to find their inner bedroom freak....and I mean freak in the kindest and most praising sense of the word.
Eeeeeeeeexcellent.
Wow, I want one of those inverted Gala dresses for myself. Wearing one of those would make me hot as hell.
Wow, I love the way you write amigo. You're writing style is magnificent, and the attention to detail is perfect for a Twilight and Rarity story. Muy bueno.
That is the precise point at which this story hooked me. Not even a full paragraph in, and you have my rapt attention. Good job.
I enjoyed that quite a bit, kinky bastard that I am.
another good read I feel It had a lot of hart with it. It was a nice clopfic but a lovely love story with a sexy ending I will give it 7 harts out of 5
This chapter was sooo good. I love your style.
Twilight being so OCD is very in character for her.
rarity...you just made a monster
I loved it, so good!
That was surprisingly fun to read
Poor Pinkie.
It's okay to say no...
I'm sorry, I almost lost it there...
oh my, my poor imagination is swimming with images of what happens after that ending. well done.
Very nice.
Rarity the rapist.....I'll see myself out.
That... well, I... I mean...
...Damn.
Good job. You certainly have produced some feels, here. Now I think I'm going to go curl up in a corner and feel sorry for Pinkie Pie.
Ill just be the next person to cry a bit for pinkie. Well written? yes, painful to read? Oh so much. Well done. I like your take on fluttershy with the departure from crazy sex deviant to somewhere more reasonable. Twilight just scared me... Not cupcakes level scary but I related to rarity several times and the epilouge reaffirmed my discomfort with her (also well written just not my cup of tea). Rainbow was also unexpected but i liked her cuddle aspect, I haven't seen that much and you made it work beautifully. Applejack was the least innovative of their personalities, but I wouldent have it any otherway, after all she is a constant in character and it would seem dishonest (see what I did there? Lol) to show her any other way. However as much as I approve of rarity's buffing up and strengthening herself I dont think she would ever apple buck as well as even applebloom.
All in all I appreciate the beleiveability of the characters because even though I cant see it really happening, youve done a lot to mae it plausable and true to the characters while still being original (as far as I know, I havent read everything just yet). I hoe you can get the message of my review beyond my poor typing and lazy revisions in this comment, I usually dont do this but you left a lot to talk about.
This was a great chapter, my friend. So good I only have one nitpick:
--And then, she can go to withdrawn filly to passionately shoving me down to the ground in ten seconds flat.
Shouldn't that be "She can go FROM withdrawn filly" instead of to?
Otherwise, loved the chapter, it was quite revealing, and...I feel bad for Pinkie Pie, and more so for Rarity because...well...yeah.
Hats off to you, my friend. Very well done.
I must say that I find your depiction of Pinkie Pie absolutely excellent. That part was really touching.
I'm not sure that I agree with giving this piece a "rape" label, even if it might be fitting. It doesn't concern the bulk of the story, and it could potentially turn away readers who might otherwise enjoy it.
maybe you tried something different for this story or maybe that's ust how first person works but reading this felt way different and scenes were described in drastically different ways which made it difficult for me to follow what was being described....
also total anti climax 3/10.....
I... don't really have words for how good this is. Your take on Pinkie was especially interesting.
Also, Princess Twilight is bent. I like her.
I would very much like it if you ever decide to write a sequel to this detailing the further relationship between Twilight and Rarity. This story was sublime.
I think I just swooned.
Goodness gracious, this story is exquisite. I'm not even in "clop" chapters yet, and I already have a boner.
I... I don't know? Probably, most pin-point way to say how I felt about this, will be, strangely, that after the second chapter, I was reading with a smile on my face and laughs in my throat. No more, no less... Well, and some compassion for Pinkie and a bit of a cringe... on some personal things. Honestly, the "clop" chapters didn't strike me nearly as well as the first two did.
Nevertheless, well done, I did enjoy this quite a lot
I think you overstepped a bit with that last chapter - it didn't seem to mesh well with the rest of the story, but the rest of the story was excellent.
It would be really nice to see a story with the the topic of that "dumbing down to a mere Sex slave" from you
Of course... XD
My goodness this has to be the best literary depiction of kink I've read in my entire life. It's so pure and wonderful and Rarity is characterized so well and I just so dearly love this insofar. I haven't even finished the darn thing and I've already felt so much joy at reading this I've physically clapped my hands several times. I even started jumping a little. It's so funny and lovely and warm and concise, yet paced so well. This feels so believable and so sweet and I just can't stop gushing about it.