- Member Since 15th Dec, 2011
- offline last seen Dec 17th, 2022
Neon Czolgosz
"Violence for violence is the rule of beasts" - Barack Obama
Neon Czolgosz
Joined 15th Dec, 2011 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Neon Czolgosz · 5.6k words · 423 27 · 10k views
- Sparkler · 16k words · 268 13 · 4.3k views
- Arwhale · 13k words · 81 10 · 2k views
- _SilverTongue · 9.5k words · 54 27 · 1.8k views
- Starswirls Beard · 4k words · 174 35 · 6.7k views
- JKinsley · 3.1k words · 242 14 · 7k views
- stanku · 6k words · 78 6 · 1.9k views
- TheNewYorkBrony · 2.4k words · 95 5 · 3.1k views
Featured In8
Clopfics11,535 stories ·15,805 members
Sensual Fiction (SFG)1,192 stories ·1,725 members
RariTwi, Rarilight, Twilight x Rarity476 stories ·1,110 members
Cryosite2,675 stories ·252 members
Stories on Goodreads28,595 stories ·492 members
Mistress Rarity291 stories ·261 members
Clocktower Society - All Consensual Kinks4,668 stories ·1,200 members
twisub563 stories ·193 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.177 seconds
Total duration
1,040 users online
2,534,914 hits today, 2,814,898 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I am so
hornyhappy to see this.Oh yes, now that's what I'm talking about.
Deliciously done, darling! 
I love you, Chuckfinley, for making a sequel to that story. It was the best. So is this.
It's amazing how close your portrayal of Twilight's reaction to magic blockers and knowledge/power against them matches my head canon.
Is it weird that I'm about as turned on by the "unsexy" parts (the munch, the rules, the 'grit' of the kink) as I am by the "good stuff?"
This chapter reminded me of how I used to clamp binder clips on my hands out of boredom while in class or working.
A tiny typo there. but other than that, Predicament Bondage is the best. So evily sexy and sexily evil.
Goodness. Ponyville's filled with kinky fuckers!
They're all naked. Wouldn't "no indecent acts" perhaps be a better turn of phrase?
Damn, she went fast. Unsurprising considering how worked up she must have already been.
Suddenly my crack shipping of Carrot Cake and (pegasus) Flash Sentry doesn't feel quite so cracky.
I notice you either forgot or choose not to to mention the magic blocker coming off at the end.
Over all, very engaging, very well written, very sexy.
should be "at"
It's so weird to see "data" be plural.
Another great scene.
Yessssss, statistics clop.
Gorgeous.
Well, that was fun!
Twilight calling yellow on the K-word cracked me up! 
Though I always wonder, when I read a story like this, whether the author has done some research, or is writing based on personal experience...
I'm must be a big idiot. I have no idea what the k-word is.
5158091
Kindergarten
5158384 yep a big ass moron.
IT FINALLY HAPPENED.
5092485 Please ignore this involuntary word-nerd response.
The singular form of data is datum. Data is the plural form.
CribbedParaphrased from the dictionary definition:This word is more often used as an uncountable noun with a singular verb than as a plural noun with singular datum. This is where most people become confused over data's plural/singular status.
Thank you for suffering through reading this unnecessary comment.
only read this fanfic because of the adorable cover picture really cute little chibi ponies.
Idle thoughts, only vaguely related to the story
: I wonder why it seems a popular idea for Rarity to be the dominant? It's a bit... cliche? The fussy, perfectionist, high-class lady being "Mistress". In my head, it'd be far more interesting to see her as the submissive one, especially with someone stereotypically "beneath" her, like Applejack or Rainbow, being the dominant.
Also, I think I mentioned this in another Chuckfinley story, but I'd love to see a full-blown safeword use (meaning red, not yellow) and the effects thereof. Safeword use doesn't have to be something bad - safewording doesn't even need to mean that something went wrong, merely that the limit of consent has been reached, and that's a perfectly okay thing to happen. Safewording can be a learning experience and, for me, at least, (but I'm weird) a very powerful expression of trust and love.
There's a difference between "I trust you to not hurt me too much" and "I trust you to stop at my word, no matter how much you're enjoying yourself or how 'into' the role you are, because you're always still there, hearing me, and you love me."
None of this is a direct request to the author; I'm just taking the opportunity to ramble.
You can has review!
5371189
No no, I appreciate nerd shit. Thank you.