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Wolokai


"The road ahead is not easy, but neither is it impossible to travel. Run, Twilight Sparkle. Run."- Wolokai KuRR

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What the fuck happened to Pony ville????

This is quite interesting... I shall look forward to more.

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Seems like some sort of zombie-like apocalypse. Tracking.

Tracking

I like that you didn't go right for shock value and kill all but one of the mane 6.

COMING SOON TO YOUR NEAREST FIMFICTION...:rainbowkiss:


I AM LEGEND

STARTING: Twilight Sparkle:twilightoops:



....:pinkiecrazy:

really cool i do want to see what u did with spike did he go crazy, stay same or does he do like nonstop pushups to protect rarity and the rest

This is sad but cool

Now only one question remains... Cupcakes anyone? :pinkiehappy:

DIS IZ WUNDERBAR!!!:coolphoto::coolphoto::coolphoto::coolphoto:
I can't wait to read more.

Wow, very intriguing. Curious to see where this goes.

this is awsome i love your work keep it coming

Holy jeebus....they're like....giant evil moths attracted to the light or something :trixieshiftright:
WTF is going on here, man?! :pinkiegasp:
This is some brilliant stuff, and reading it at 2 AM makes it all that much creepier!
MORE!! :flutterrage:
*faves*

Sex tag. Gore tag. Okay, I'm in.

Whoa...what the hell happened here? *Tracked*
Looking forward to more, more, more. :D

Have a good one.

In the town of the forsaken, nopony can hear you scream.

Good start, will be keeping track of this one :pinkiehappy:

Applejack, keeping ponyville safe.
Its interestring story and I wona see where it goes.

I'd expect Celestia to arrive near the end of the story, when some way to.. deal with, the inflicted comes about. Thought I have a feeling there is plenty of tragedy left for Twilight to deal with. Here's hoping Celestia's rescue comes on time and she doesn't end up simply "recovering" the body of her prized student.

"She tried not to think about it...tried not to imagine the gleam that the knives, spears, and swords gave off in the sun."

Huh, this is interesting. So whatever this infection is not only does it drive them to brutally attack anything not-infected but it allows them to create and use weapons; definitely getting Star Wars Deathtroopers vibes here. One has to wonder how long it'll be before the infected learn how to create battering rams or something that'll let them take down the barricaded doors.

I'll also say its safe to assume that there aren't any infected pegasi since they could've just flown away from any ground based infected.

Excellent work, keep it up.

Great. Celestia has created the smart t-virus and Resident evil one is happening.

Hm.

I can imagine a few possible scenarios for the story, and I think I can explain a few things too but there is something I don't understand.

Why those 'zombies' affraid of dark? Why the dark?

This concept... Affraid of dark instead of light... This makes the story special.

Instant track and like!

So, how did Gen 1 names get into the story?

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It's an April Fools thing I think, just got to wait for it to be over :derpytongue2:

390966 Aaaaand now my hyperactive imagination has cause the story to be thus "Virus wipes out everything so Generation 4 can arrive." Or something like that. X3

390966 Ah. Thank goodness for this event only being temporary. Heavy will no longer freak out now :3c :twilightsmile:

28 days later type story. Keep going

Bravo
Some nice explanation of what's going on and a little bit of action. Although, "she concluded that her basement was far enough underground that the noise would not be audible to those above. Unless somepony screamed or made hot, bodacious love on her table..." this is probably going to come up REAL soon.

Hurray for the brave hearted!
I hope after all this misery and death there will be a happy ending... even thought I doubt it...
Nice plot development and all of that mumbo, I haven't found a grammatical error, yet, and it is just the right amount of Dark to be a good story

Happy writing!
-smith,smith

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Zompony Apocalypse Good

Although I can see Twilight saying fuckasses, I can't see her saying "OI." Seems weird.

Twilight saying OI! FUCKASSES reminds me of something from somewhere but I can see soemone saying that in a zombie appocolypse.
I love it too.

only if they had diamond dogs with them, just dig a tunnel out.

Badass Twilight is FUCKING BADASS! Nice there. Good for Twilight going insane and save a filly :D

I like what you did in this chapter to explain what was going on and how it all started, it was well done and didn't stick out like a sore thumb or anything, actually it reminded me of I Am Legend in a way when whatshisface would record his findings and make a log out of it.

Well, we know where Rarity, Applejack, Spike, and Fluttershy are. What about Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie? Also, why haven't they tried digging tunnels underground? There hasn't been a mention about it. I mean the basket system is clever, but I was surprised that Twilight didn't elaborate on the tunnel idea. Scared that the noise would attract The Afflicted I guess?

All in all, a nice chapter with a nice development at the end with Twilight saving the filly. It's nice that she now has some company in that lonely tree house :D. Also, I think that the mention of having to have your leg chopped off to escape becoming affected it going to come up later and I'm not going to like who it happens to :c

Have a good one.

Holy Celestia...it's all gone wrong :raritydespair:

394938 Shawn of the Dead?

Twilight...you crazy, brave, wonderful pony!
:twilightsmile:
I do wonder though...it says they're attracted to magic....why doesn't Twilight just grab them with her magic and crunch their heads in or toss them away or something...then again, there'd probably be too many to deal with

Jeez, what a story you got yourself here!:rainbowkiss:

Very nice. Please continue. Somehow I can picture one or more ponies getting fed up, grabbing anything they can use as a weapon, running outside and yelling, "Here I am! Come and get me!"

Awesome chapter and a very well written chasing'n'saving scene, congrats man, good job!

Damn this is good, but I agree with V-pony, unless they shoot pure antimagic or something I think a rage mode Twilight would be able to take on quite a few zombies. :pinkiehappy:

I have to admit my adrenaline was indeed going by the time she got into the alleyway, well done.
Those pictures also scared the shit out of me after reading that.
Rule #10: Check any survivors for cuts and bruises just in case they are a time bomb.
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Rule #34: If it exists...

Maybe Celestia is one of "them" as well :eeyup:

this story is very good:pinkiehappy:

Very nice.
But please, no more pictures, they shouldn't be needed for a writer of your caliber...

Now I'm excited for the next chapter.

Man, what happened to Catie's parents, that just sucks man T_T
Pinkie made it out with the Cake's babies :D (well, that's what I'm hoping anyways)

Whew, when The Afflicted broke into Twilight's house, you had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see if they made it out. Genius using the basket system to get over to where Big Mac(?) and possibly others are :D. That was quite badass with Twilight manipulating the knifes and using them to defend herself and Catie from The Afflicted. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

Have a good one.

HEAVY LOVES DIS NEW STORY! ;3 He cannot wait for moar updates!! :yay:

Oh shit man... I'm out of breath... I was on a fucking adrenaline rush... This was insane dude... This had me more on edge than Leap of Faith: Twilight vs. The Great and Powerful... I mean holy shit... This story, kicks hardcore ass. Nothing I've read can come even close to anything I've ever read. I mean even published books by people who made a lot of money on their books. You better not stop writing this story, or I swear by Terrato's beard I will hunt you down. Seriously, I will hunt your ass down. o.o You rule, in all honesty. This story man.... I don't know what else to say. :rainbowderp:

If this is any baseline as to how impressive your writing skills usually are, you could seriously make a living off this quality of stuff. Not that I'm complaining that you're writing fan fiction, but with your skills you could, in all honesty, publish some world class horror stories; stories that I would totally buy.

tracking this story and checking up on it every day, some things are inevitable (I.E.) at some point they are going to most likely end up in a large scale combat situation (Possibly featuring the inflicted using some mannerism of weaponry and/or Projectile vomit?)

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in the words of some random guy at a theater "Dis Gun'Be Gud"

396944 Condescending Discord?:rainbowderp:

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