I told you once, I'll tell you again:
This right here is a healthy D/s relationship. Using the safeword when unsure, the giving of trust. It's all very naturally written here.

Also, my favorite part will always be that ending:

Wait. My hooves are caught! I take a look down, to see my hooves trapped in a much stronger version of the magic that held her toys.

Oh, princesses - she didn't call the safeword. We're still on!

"Now, for your fourth punishment," she purrs huskily, a devious gleam in her eyes. "There's the small matter of all your overdue library books..."

That is a great ending, and totally Twi in my opinion. You get 6 out of 5 spikes

That ending... Well that was excellently done. Very intense without being overwhelming.

Oh, Spike. Poor, poor Spike. Believe me little dude, if you couldn't be the dragon of Rarity's dreams before, you definitely don't qualify now! Well, unless you don't grow ginormous and learn about BDSM like it's the back of your claw.

This was absolutely wonderful. Glad to see I'm not the only one that thinks Twilight has that inner dominant hiding away inside of her! Then again, it's always the quiet ones with plenty of time taken to think about their feelings that manage to find their inner bedroom freak....and I mean freak in the kindest and most praising sense of the word.

Eeeeeeeeexcellent.

Wow, I want one of those inverted Gala dresses for myself. Wearing one of those would make me hot as hell.

Wow, I love the way you write amigo. You're writing style is magnificent, and the attention to detail is perfect for a Twilight and Rarity story. Muy bueno.

I enjoyed that quite a bit, kinky bastard that I am.

another good read I feel It had a lot of hart with it. It was a nice clopfic but a lovely love story with a sexy ending I will give it 7 harts out of 5

rarity...you just made a monster

I loved it, so good!

That was surprisingly fun to read

"Now, for your fourth punishment," she purrs huskily, a devious gleam in her eyes. "There's the small matter of all your overdue library books..."

Of course... XD

My goodness this has to be the best literary depiction of kink I've read in my entire life. It's so pure and wonderful and Rarity is characterized so well and I just so dearly love this insofar. I haven't even finished the darn thing and I've already felt so much joy at reading this I've physically clapped my hands several times. I even started jumping a little. It's so funny and lovely and warm and concise, yet paced so well. This feels so believable and so sweet and I just can't stop gushing about it.