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I've been busting my butt off on this the past couple days, and as the first arc is almost complete I figured now was a good time to premier this:
The Pumpkin's Pounding.
It may seem like a clop-fest and a alf, but it's main intent is a vanilla love story that hits a few rough patches. Give it a try, and I think you might enjoy it. Or burn it in a fire. Don't know until you try it.

I was hoping to get some support for my mainly Original Character Stories. Due to the fact I'm not using the cannon cast or exploiting existing frame work, my views have been low. :fluttercry:

Hole Hearted"Click to Visit!"

Zig Zag Love"Click to Visit!"

Here's mine:

The Price of Peace

Hope you enjoy it and it get's considered!

Been working on this pile of crap masterpiece for a few months now:

Beneath the Mask

Please peruse it at your leisure. :ajsmug:

Just started writing the other day. I Pumped out this bad boy fairly quickly on a Red Bull and sleep depravity.
When Skies Fall

Any helpful comments and critique would be much appreciated. I'm going for an apocalyptic survival feel.
:twilightsmile:

This is a great idea.

Between Magic and Science

Hope you like it. (along with the 200+ other stories here)

I know that Kori's Tales is a very long story yet I try my best to get everything I want for the characters while adding more. I have most of the very popular characters from the show missing just a few that I will add later on.
Feel free to say what you want about it for everything helps. :pinkiehappy:

Heck, I'll go for it! What have I got to lose?
Here's mine:
P-Theory

Not the most original concept but danged if I'm not working hard on it and trying to make it feel unique. It's just getting into the real adventure-y stuff with the chapter coming up.

Do you accept finished stories? I made a story called The Tale of Crimson Gaze the Dreaded. It's mostly humor and what not, but it seem to cause lots of hate. Either by typos or Fallout Equestria fans (It was once Red Eye) it generated a lot of anger and killed what enjoyment I had in writing. Maybe it deserves a second opinion, maybe not. Just putting it out there, I mostly liked the idea of Ork dogs.

Well I just added my first comedy one shot!

What Happened to the Orange Frog?

The story is exactly what it says on the tin. It specifically refers to the poor frog from the Too Many Pinkie Pies episode. Its about 8000 words, please let me know what you think when you get the chance.

Everyone loves a Vinyl and Octavia romance, or rather, Vinyl and Octavia learning to not hate each other when a Foal ends up on the house they are sharing.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/114434/evaline

it's started off reasonably well, but I do think it could be doing better.

An Adventure/HiE and future Romance story that is my first on this site. Luna's Crusaders CC is always welcome!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/113302/wander

It's a post-apocalyptic adventure fic set in a land far from Equestria with the mane six acting as secondary characters in the background. I hope to build it into something grand and only have the first few chapters up as of yet, but future installments will differ greatly in length.

Description:

This is a tale with its origin set in a land, not in Equestria, but one far from it. Miles beyond the Southern Celestial Seas rests a kingdom stricken by industry, ravaged by time and the sky itself. One of limitless magical potential bordering on the edge of the world, where blood runs and melds into the brilliant colors of a new, red dawn:

Canteralla.

A lone pegasus stallion without a name, cutie mark, or purpose wakes up with nothing more than a giggling voice in his head, telling him that they are coming.

And they are going to kill him.

Stop on by to read the intro and tell me what you think.

The Changing Lives of the Changeling Hive: A Documentary

I don't really know why I'm putting it up here, but why not right? Basically, a documentary crew (composed of Raindrops, Derpy, and their changeling guide Larvas) are invited to film a documentary in the changeling hive. I don't want to go into details, but do give it a look, and please don't judge too harshly on the author notes (especially the first one)

Change-Ling Your Attitude

Changeling and anger management.

And here's FlimFlam story for ya!

Barnyard Bargains: A Documentary

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/117143/my-daughter please read this story by Alex rey called My Daughter.
This guy is talented I tell you!

Racer And The Geek

(URL: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81159/racer-and-the-geek)

Description: Sunny Breeze is living a quiet life in Ponyville until one night, Rainbow Dash suddenly appears at his door! What does she want? What's really going on here? What are her true motives? All may not be as it seems, especially Sunny himself.

Comments: The first couple chapters make it look like standard OC x CC romcom fare. However, the further you go in the story, the more interesting things get, with the characters and their tales becoming the real focus.

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Stacking The Deck

The first book of a trilogy I'm writing. :derpytongue2:

Hope it gets featured :pinkiehappy:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/118208/scattered-thoughts

First two chapters of a fic im working on.

Basically a sad/slice of life type fic where a pony reads his old thoughts from his notebook and such.

If you have sex with a changeling that looks like your beloved and you didn’t know and you end up having a child together, does it count as cheating?
Shining Armor awakens one night to find a baby pony/changeling on his doorstep. A baby that is apparently his as well as Chrysalis's. Can he keep Cadance in the dark? Can Twilight help him? Is the queen changeling herself going to make an appearance? How many OCs will there be? Will everypony be in character? Who will cameo? And most importantly, was he technically cheating?

Read and find out.

I've been told this is the longest Title on FimFiction and I welcome any challengers.
Enjoy!

Here's my Star Trek Story for now, i'll post the other two i want on other times.

Star Trek Equestrian Rescue

The year is 2414. The Federation is alive and well. The Klingons back to being the Federation’s Allies, the Romulans power diminished, the Undine now an Ally, and the Borg all but washed up. And by now the Zeta Andromeda Galaxy had moved close enough to the Milky Way to allow a Transwarp Gate connection. Starfleet has jumped on the chance and is now exploring the new Quadrant. Leading the charge is the Temporary Federation Flagship U.S.S. Evans-A, veteran of the Klingon-Federation War, the Borg’s invasion of the Alpha Quadrant, and the Romulan-Reman Civil War with Vice Admiral Blaze Johnson at the helm, the man who destroyed the Borg H.I.V.E.
Arriving at an uncharted system, Blaze and his loyal crew find a mystery. A planet that is the center of its system, surrounded by Spatial anomalies, and the primary species are Ponies? Defying the Prime Directive, Blaze goes and explores the planet. But there is more on the planet than its ultra friendly inhabitants. What he finds there could threaten not only the planet called Equestria, but the Federation, and both the Milky and Zeta Andromeda Galaxy.

In this case I will give my most recent story a chance. :pinkiehappy:

Here you go with Bloodline

Enjoy!

Here's my Story With the white berets
Hope you enjoy!

Hello everyone. I'm just dropping off my current work here, since I've put my comedy piece before it on hold for a little.

We Met the Team

I've wanted to try writing a crossover for quite some time, so I settled for everyone's favorite psychopathic mercenaries in Equestria. (Team Fortress 2.) I can't say I have an end-game plan for this story yet, but I'm more interested in keeping all nine mercenaries in character more than anything else. So far the story is going a little slow, but I want to legitimize their reason for being in Equestria rather than simply popping them in unannounced.

Any thoughts or constructive criticism, by all means leave a comment.

SHameless self promotion tactic go! I got Three:

Like a Bullet From a Gun

A flight squad of four get stranded in Equestria after a teleportation experiment gone wrong. Armed with weapons and bland personalties, what will they do? Rated Teen

Whatever Happened to the Shadowbolts

Side story to the above in which the Shadowbolts, tired of being unrecognised, decide to assault the army base close to the one the air squad just took off. Rated Teen

Ejected Casings

Unfinished sequel to the first. After one of the members of the flight squad starts having a set of disturbing recurring nightmares, he sets out to out what is wrong with his head. It doesn't help he has a pair of wings growing on his back either,

Shameless promotion time!

Broken Promises

When Rainbow Dash didn't write while she was away at Wonderbolt training camp Pinkie was hurt. When she didn't open her care package Pinkie was crushed. What will it take to make things right between the two again? Rainbow must overcome her fears if she wants her marefriend to trust her again.

The Chase
Fluttershy is hunted through the forest by an unseen foe, like so many before her.

Hello friend and amigos, here is my story. Hope you like it!
Behind the Masks

Twilight begins to see the inner demons of her friends.

283308 I would like to post my story, The Show Ends with You. It is a crossover between TWEWY and MLP. Twilight Sparkle has to team up with other ponies, something that she would never even think of doing, in order to survive the deadly Pegasus Challenges.

Hey, it's worth a shot.

She Wants To Know What Love Is is a cute little story starring Twist. :twistnerd: She gets the advice of various mares before approaching a young colt in her class.

Dude, I Am So HiE Right Now is a parody of Human in Equestria porn stories. (Yes, it's filthy.)

HiE Powered is a parody of Human in Equestria soldier stories.

I'd like to put in my story Guardians of many Hues about Rainbow and Scoots.

Hope you like it!

I have two stories that I'd like to be considered:
Was I So Wrong?
and
Every Game Must End .
I hope you like them!:pinkiehappy:

I would like to post my story Sunset of Time to be considered.

Also, are we not allowed to post our own threads for self-promotion?

Duskfall

Duskfall is an adventure/drama set in a dark universe where Celestia has ruled with an iron hoof. However, when she dissappears, the sun follows. Darkness and war envelop Equestria. The only hope for survival may be uncovering the truth of her downfall, but the secret is held tight in a strange pegasus named Dusk. Even if she decides to, can she save the world?

Can the sun again be raised?
Is tyranny better than extinction?
In a world where friends are enemies, what magic is left?
And what has Derpy got to do with this?

Why not? I'll throw my hat into the ring.

A Simple Mistake

Leaf and Sap, Blood and Fire

Alpha, an ancient timberwolf, wants nothing more than to lie in the sun and wait for his mate to return with what may be their final litter of pups. But when his pack is attacked, he's forced to lead them in battle against their long time foe. A dragon.

Might as well do mine... Nightmare's Heir Hope you all enjoy it.

Comment posted by Queuefka Palazzo deleted Aug 12th, 2013

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I'm just starting this, so it's not very long yet:

The Pied Peter of Ponyville

Tags: Comedy, Adventure, Human

Characters: Twilight, Spike, Pinkie, Mane Cast, OC

Cover image:

Description:
This is the story of a man named Peter, who has yet to realize his destiny. He also has earworms.

As the narrator I can assure you his destiny will be mired in extremely complicated and boring legal disputes. This story is not about those legal disputes. This story is about a man, who has yet to realize his destiny.

There's also a side story about a guy name Bobby Bonkers, who keeps being reshelved in the manyverse.

Eh, I'm up for some shameless self-promotion. Here's some of my fics, in order of my personal favorites in descending order. (Highest fic=favorite, etc.)

Frozen:The day the sun died. (Dark/Adventure)

Zecora's delicious dilemma. (Comedy/Slice of life/General silliness)

A changeling holiday. (Slice of life, feel-good holiday story.)

I have others, but I don't feel they are worthy enough for consideration. Thanks in advance for checking them out!:pinkiesmile:

Neither Created Nor Destroyed

Short Description: "Abduction, war, and extinction. Twilight and her friends definetely have their work cut out for them this time."

The story has quite a few locations, villains, and characters. It was all planned out in its entirety before I began writing it, and everything that happens in the narrative has a purpose by the end. While there is action and a bit of humor, the story will also focus heavily on interpersonal relationships between the Mane Six and others, as well as the way Twilight and her friends adapt to being stranded in distant locations apart from one another, the way they each go about handling conflicts between opposing forces that don't understand one another, and how they ultimately deal with an antagonist who can't be reasoned with or beaten via conventional means. It also includes its own explanation as to how the world Equestria resides in was created.

Okay, I'll give it a shot (if I haven't already, my memory's bad): Maternal Instinct

My little Crusade
kinda cliche i know but I'm terrible at names

Dreamscape

One thousand two hundred seventy six years ago, dreamwalking was discovered by Princess Luna, a magic which would allow one to enter another’s dreams. In it’s infancy few knew of it, and even fewer could understand it. Sadly, upon Luna’s banishment, this knowledge was lost to the world, never to be found. Over a thousand years, truths became myths, and the myths were eventually forgotten.

However, upon Luna’s return, she discovered it had not been misplaced or hidden away, as once thought, but stolen. Dreamwalking had evolved from a magic of true inspiration and wonder, to a magic of deception and suffering. Criminals had made use of the magic to torment poor souls and retrieve secrets for themselves, all beyond the vigilant gaze of the Royal Guard. By the order of her majesty Princess Luna, a new division was formed, one whose jurisdiction would fall beyond the physical world to combat this corruption.

Dreamscape

And another

Adversity

The Royal Guard is the force that ensures the safety of all creatures living inside Equestria's borders. Everyone in Equestria admires their strength and courage. They stand strong and resolute as Equestria's first line of defense against the many threats to her sovereignty and to her rulers. Sadly, the glory days of the royal guard are now past; both the Solar Guard and recently reformed Lunar Guard a fragment of what they once were.
Awaking from a near-coma state brought on by a devastating injury, Oak Leaf proceeds to follow his half-remembered goal of joining the Royal Guard. However, as the earth pony’s fractured memories begin to reassert themselves, doubt is cast over his motives. In the face of a rising threat, the Royal Guard hardly has time for such hesitation. But would they want him anyway, considering there hasn't been an earth pony in the Royal Guard for over three hundred years?

Here's a crossover story with some anthro ponies. (Don't worry, it's rated teen).
Bully: Manticore Academy

Well, let's try this.

I Dream of Twilight Sparkle

Ever see any stories that take place in Saddle Arabia? If not, here is one! It's pretty long at 7 chapters, but it still has a long way to go!

Love: It turns the world in an ever-encapsulating whirlwind, a tornado that is as viciously passionate as it is voraciously horrifying.

Belief: That which some ponies rely their whole lives upon, for sometimes, seeing is not always believing.

Me: A word that stems from the mouth of the user, to describe him or herself in a simple phrase. A phrase that knows no description, no discrepancies, no gender, and is only in the eye of the beholder.
The beholder, of course is "me", "myself", and "I".

These words all mean something to Certain Pony.
To Another, they mean not a thing.

But, what do they mean to the world as a whole, in the eyes of one who sees all in the light of beauty and magnificence, and the other who sees but only darkness and sadness?

What, do they mean to Certain Pony and Another?

This is the description of my experimental one-shot, dealing with duality and our perception of reality.

Believe In Love; Believe In Me

See the story, and believe what you wish...

Love always and forever,
-Ghost

I've had a fic posted to this website for a while. Several people have read it and, according to them, it's pretty good. I'm not sure about the standings you guys have on the cliche NLR fan fiction, but it's more focused on the main character Shiloh. I would greatly appreciate it if you would consider The Messenger to be featured. Thanks again for this opportunity.

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