Talon , an immortal being of great power is betrayed by a close friend, sent into a void with little hope of escape. He meets an Elder god, and is informed of his new godhood, what is a fledgling god of light to do with an eternity at his disposal. One thing's for sure, he's not just going to sit around. It's time to prepare his new realm of Equestria for the dark times to come, and what better way than with some 'small' tests of his own. Maybe even he'll learn a thing or two.

(despite what this sounds like, this isn't supposed to be a comedy it should have some humor, but no more than necessary)

Teen for language and violence

My name is Max Porter. To every one who knows me they see a Recluse, a person who likes to live away from society. However that isn't the true me, not anymore. And to think this all started with a totally unexpected visit.

(Hey everyone I decided to go through and do some minor editing to the story, it kind of strayed from my original plan, but these things happen, and hopefully the story will be better for it.)
Oh and don't forget to leave comments, if you like something tell me what you like. If you don't, same thing. I'm serious people, even though I have an idea about what I'm doing if I don't have people commenting on my work how am I supposed to improve it?

Talon James Eques, a young Captain in the E.I.N. (Earth Imperial Navy) has fought the evil of the
Shadow Spawn for years. When he receives a vision of the shadow spawn attacking an Innocent world, he immediately rushes to their aid. As he touches down on this new planet he is immediately caught up in a battle between one of the rulers of this world and a shadow spawn legionnaire, he lends her aid and begins a counter movement against the shadow spawn who are already beginning to spread their corrupting influence across this peaceful world.

Talon already harbors the power of light, the ability to sense and actually harm the shadow spawn, but will that be enough to turn the tide in a war against an evil that has existed since the beginning of time? Will his power alone be enough or will he have to accept help from the very beings he is attempting to protect? And will the biggest question he has about the situation be answered? (What's with the multicolored ponies?)

A crossover from a story I wrote a while ago but never decided to publish it.
Will probably be my main focus for a while.
Talon is a character of my own creation.
The Cover Art is my Visualization of Talon Wearing his Armor. (I drew it myself then messed with it using photoshop. I'm not very good with backgrounds.)

(I would like to inform every one that while I enjoy comments and remarks or getting praise, encouragement, or ideas, advice on how to improve my writing, or hearing some good natured banter between readers. I do not however enjoy getting what seem to be rude or hurtful remarks. All I'm asking is that everyone that posts a remark keeps it polite and if you don't have any comments that are don't post them. Thanks)
P.S.
If you notice any mistakes in terms of spelling or punctuation kindly point them out so I can try to go and fix them at a later date.

April 2, 2014

Well I'm Back, Finally! Now I went through both my stories that I have here but I'm going to focus on this one for now, truth be told I kind of rushed into this one a bit, now that doesn't mean I'll quit writing this one just yet, but I also have a possible rewrite planned for it. Now this is where I'll leave a question for everyone who reads this. Should I rewrite this story or keep going with what I have, If I keep going I'll try to plan out future chapters better. If I rewrite this it will go int a little more detail about the characters as individuals, the chapter lengths will probably be a bit erratic, and I won't post it until I'm happy with what I got written so far. But I'll try to keep updates persistant. So everyone leave comments or suggestions after you read this story so I know what I'll have to do.