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what is he?
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All in good time.
I'm shocked at the low rating. This is pretty decent for a dark clopfic. I hope there's more in the future.
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Cheers man, I'm glad you liked it. Chapter 2 is currently in the works.
>Looking forward to seeing what Twilight is like now
>Deenergized
>Not devoted minion
>Don't get to see Applejacks fall
On the upside, you certainly know how to set the stage, so I'm hoping there's some grand design in place, and I'll get to see some delightful corruption.
Seriously, amazing work. One of the best stories I've read in a while. Can't wait for Chapter 3!
Only complaint is that it's a tad unclear why sex is a necessary part of the corruption. I can imagine some reasons, but I would eventually like details on what's being done to them. Twilight seems less corrupted and more drained of life (her only act so far was to warn a friend), but it's implied that was a mistake on his part somehow.
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Never fear, there's plenty more to come. As Starbright said, Twilight was a mistake.
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Thanks a lot!
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Answers are forthcoming, sooner rather than later.
This is moving along nicely. Some explanation, and some opposition to the villain, too.
If disintegrating the demon was an option, why wasn't that done by Celestia long ago? Typically demons are kind of defined by an inability to be redeemed (though I suppose that's not always the case)...
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Well caught! Without giving anything away, it'll be explained next chapter, so stay tuned.
Ooooooooooooooooo shit
I like this story. I hope Spike finds a way to rescue the remaining bearers and save the corrupted ones.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it, though I'm afraid I'm putting it on hold for a little bit while I work on other things. Should be back to it before too long, I just need a short break rather than devoting all my time to this.
oh....fuck...
And I really really hoped Zecora was an ally to Spike. With the elements corrupted Spike will never reach Canterlot alive to warn Celestia. And he even doesn´t know of Luna´s treason. But if for some reason, Spike manages to inform Celestia and save the day, they can give Luna a bullet with a moon symbol from me.
Well written so far.
3186195 I can understand.
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Then I will look for your new story. In the Meantime I really should start with my own two stories. Only to find a good start >.<