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Aww i was hoping for some cool story...but all i got was mindless clop.
Alternate title: 50 Shades of Green
man that cover image is becoming overused on this site....
5630356 good that's exactly what i want , if you want a cool story go read who rules.....
5630555 Have they come out with a new story yet?
5630562 a month ago nom started the seventh book in the series , it has 3 chapters already.....
This was surprisingly sweet! Very erotic, but the feel of a real couple going through some experimentation. I like it! And Now I think I support ChrysLestia...
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5630576 indeed.....
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Hm, I'd not seen it before, but maybe I'll change it. I had another lined up to start with, but it was somebody's commissioned piece and I'm not really comfortable using something like that. Blame the lack of decent Chrysalis+Celestia pictures.
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Thanks man. The world always needs more ChrysLestia (or whatever you want to call this pairing). More Chrysalis with any character is good, actually -- I'm a sucker for redeemed villains.
5630610 i know a few decent chrysalis + celestia pictures...
*ifyouknowwhatimean.pgj*
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Ah, but they have to be croppable to a SFW standard too, which is easier said than done. I know 'cause I tried. ;-;
5630681 it's not that hard with ms paint....
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I mean finding a decent picture where they're posed in a way that it's possible to show both of them without any naughty bits involved.
5630723 ah lol.....
Nothing mindless about this, it's a little loving roleplay sex session between an apparently happy couple. Mindless clop is "Oh hello, what's your name? Know what, I don't care, just stick it in!" People need to learn to differentiate these days. Just because the story is about a sexual encounter and not just a footnote buried inside of a shipping story or some adventure fic doesn't mean it's mindless clop.
5630851 Indeed, I loved the little breaks in character as they warned each other when the other went too far, or not far enough. There is clearly story here, even if most of it is implied rather than told. Their play speaks of long familiarity, a good deal of trust, but at the same time they clearly haven't worked out every kink.
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The problem is trying to imply something requires people to think, and most FIMFIC readers don't like to think (at least not with any real depth). Think I've had to beat that into the heads of some of your readers, too.
For those of us who actually know how to fully enjoy a fic, there's quite a lot to be learned about both characters just from their interactions, and their relationship as inferred to how they speak to each other and when - along with the situation as it evolves providing tone and proof of bonding.
This is a mix between 50 shades of fucking gray (albeit this has substance......anything has substance compared to 50 shades, except Twilight) with the insane fame The Enemy of My Enemy.
Good clop, awesome story and char development in between the lines and showcase a somewhat rather romantic sexual encounter.
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One of the hardest things about reading is getting what is implied. And, from what I hear, it is also really hard to write. Kudos to any author that has the ability to "show" the reader instead of just "telling".
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Yes, it can be difficult to probably 'show' the readers, whether they pick up on it or not is up to them and should never be held against the story or writer. Unfortunately, then you get the people who demand the rarer or harder skills in writing as baseline, and the people who listen to /those/ blindly. Ugh.
Writer's doing a good job! Keep it up, and don't let people jiving in the comments ever get to you, even under the guise of criticism.
Well, that was fun. I forgive you for this not being a new chapter of miss-shapes, but please do get on with that asap.
Now I'd like to read the one with celestia in charge and the dungeon thing...
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same here *Looks at Nightmare Moon*
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I mean, I think one of the biggest mistakes writers can make is treating their readers like they're stupid. You don't need to spell everything out, or it loses any subtlety and feels like the author's trying to beat you over the head with it. That's all "show don't tell" is in practice; the last thing you want is for the reader to be saying "Yeah, alright, I get it".
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It's coming. The latest chapter's been hard for me to work on for a number of reasons, but I'll say without a doubt that it'll be the next thing I post here.
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So would I! Unfortunately, it was never written, and probably never will be. Not by me, at least.
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I've done a Nightmare Moon redemption story! Kinda.
At first I was like <<Ho a common futa-rape -fic, meh nothing to see here
>> But then I saw the romance tag and the absence of a dark tag so I was all like <<Wut? 
>> then I started reading and it was fun....
Good job go get yourself some nice cookies
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Thanks, I'll do that! And yeah, I'd never be able to write a straight rape-fic, that's really not my speed. Consensual pones are best pones.
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I know exactly what you mean. Which is why I'm so frustrated when I see so many people confusing themselves over something easy, or having knee-jerk reactions that they assume to be true regardless of discussion or argument to show them the inferences and conjectural comprehension behind actions and character decisions. Been pleading, explaining, proving, showing, and yelling at ungodly hordes of people on Fimfic for years trying to talk sense into them. To very little success!
So... never let someone who's making shitty assumptions or just confusing themselves make you doubt your work. It's their fault, failing in their duty as the audience to use higher thinking in order to reason out and understand what's been shown to them instead of demanding everything spelled out at face value in fear of riot.
I think you meant Celestia.
An enjoyable read
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Oops, thanks for catching that, it's fixed.
I wish I could see more chapters of this. maybe even with some Twilight joining in it.
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I want so much more of this.
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Unfortunately I can't see myself doing more of this. My one-shots are all ideas that I really like, and I hope I do them justice, but then I've done the idea and anything more would be overstaying their welcome. That's not to say I won't ever do a Celestia x Chrysalis fic again, or even that I won't do something more in this 'universe', but if I did it wouldn't be another sub/dom roleplay because it'd just feel like I was writing the exact same story, and that'd be boring both to write and to read.
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Ah well. Still a good read though.
5638403 True True, maybe later down the road, you could have Chrysalis instigate an embarassing situation where Twilight is convinced to join in the action.
Damn it! Get's me every time.
In all seriousness though, great little bit CxC action
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YES. ALL OF THE ANGRY, BDSM SEX FOR THIS SHIP.
EDIT: Now that I finally, properly finished reading this, I would graciously request a sequel or perhaps a series of these two meeting up to get it on with steamy, sweet, sultry sessions. Please. I shall give you Internet cookies.
5630429 You bastard.
although if 50 Shades of Grey had Christina Grey and Anastasia Steele maybe then i would go see it...
This shoukd have a comedy tag as well.
5653350 Ermahgerd, cherngelerngs!
fun times were had , ima add this to my group.....
So much the goods!
I like this story thiiiiiiii (insert a lot of "i's" here) iiis much!
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I found this way too adorable, I enjoyed it
This was just plain awesome!
Good stuff.
now write more mis-shapes5679374
Yeah, I know I've been neglecting it, but god dang it I just wanted to write something where the characters aren't completely miserable. The next chapter of Mis-shapes certainly ain't that.
Weird.
Have fun.