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1797795 Anything not FoE?
Gos damn, I have never met someone with a less narrow perspective.
1798334 Best book I've ever read? Rumo and his Miraculous Adventures, hands down. I learned German just so I could read the original version. Walter Moers is the greatest author to have ever lived.
I love this.
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NOT YOU TOO! oh noes!
Major Mare? Is Ponyville's municipal government run by the army for some reason? Or did you mean "Mayor Mare"?
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Lol. How could I make such an elementary mistake? Very sorry on your behalf for having to read that.
Oh no! This story is fading away! Wrrryyyy
2674758 summertime, had to work. Probably should have posted a diary update but i forgot.
Oh. That's ok then. I guess I was just momentarily sad for having seen such greatness fading away. Now I'm all better!
Best of luck on your work!
I see a few blog posts about the status of your other story, but never this one. I for one am really looking forward to finding out the 'aftermath' in chapter 3...
5159926 haha. Yes. I can make a blog update, or I can just post chapter 3 ;p
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I'd certainly be happy if you posted chapter 3. ^_^
5167042 chapter 4 is out now.
Nice chapter. I do wonder what is going to happen at Sweet Apple Acres. I also wonder if Mr Cake will also corrupt Big Mac as well as Apple Jack. I would laugh if Mr Cake used corrupt Mac,so while Mr Cake takes back, Mac takes front. Also since he reprogrammed the Spa Twins to that, if he reprograms Mac, how will he reprogram him. To to mount any mare he sees, mounts his family, reprogram Mac so he wants Mr cake to mount him, or to become his disciple.
Or it would be funny if Mr Cake breaks appleJack, and then she and force herself on mac,and once she forces Mac's cock into her, he starts to become corrupted.
5910139 I wouldn't know what to say to all of that except that I'd say I want to make use of the pawns he has acquired, and so this will be much worse than what Cake can accomplish on his own.
5911454 With that in place, Somepony needs to get Mac or AppleJack and then corrupt them and let that Spread. I can see Mac getting a check up at the hospital and getting raped their or Pinkie going after Applejack. Also maybe pinkie delivers cupcakes to the Apple family and let them get corrupted over dessert. I guess the next chapter will reveal what happens.
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You're getting closer, but there is more to the Apple family than those two. xD
No need to speculate overly much. The next Chapter is on it's way.
So this is labeled as a slice of life, comedy, and romance but after all of these chapters I still don't really get that feeling. It should probably have the dark tag somewhere, anywhere. Also this is reading not unlike a "no fucks given" run of corruption of champions. Back on topic though, why is there a comedy tag there? I can only assume the romance tag is there because Mr and Mrs Cake are characters, even though the interaction thus far between them has been minimal and not really romantic.
6080868 You'd be correct. I will try to correct the tags to make it less misleading.
As a minor edit of this comment. The tags were appropriate when I started planning the fic, but it didn't work out that way.
6084443 I see, well thank you for the fix, when I stumbled on this fic I thought it was going to be a crackfic because nothing was adding up and there was a comedy tag. Anyway, would it be correct to assume that things will be getting darker from here? Just want to know if I should continue reading.
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The intent is to continue down the same path, adding more locations, and inevitably end up with Cake as ruler of a wholly corrupted Equestria yes.
Hmm, just read the latest comments. That's... disappointing.
I will in no way tell you what to write of course, it's your story. I will however say that I wish the original tags for the story had worked out. I was excited to see a set up like this played for laughs and romance, and seeing it go the same dark route other fics like this is well... honestly a tad depressing.
Oh well, I'll always have the first two chapters.
hoping more will be coming!
When will the story continue?
6742284 I have no date, but the next chapter should be out before december is over.
It's been five years, anything about the fic?
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Are you planning to do more chapters?