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Izalith
I can hear the wind speaking to me, they say hello and goodbye.
Izalith
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More please.
I agree, please post more. It's getting exciting now
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I am working on the next chapter as I speak, and it does get more interesting. A lot more.
Dis is gunna be fun I can only imagine what pinkie pie is gonna do when she sees a Titan ...
ERRMAHGURRD
TITANFALL X MLP 
WOOOOHOOO LOVING EVERY WORD OF THIS!!
NO BACON CHEESEBURGER!!!!!! I CAN NOT SURVIVE!!
I saw what you did there.
This is an awesome story so far. I hope to see more updates in the future.
4624157 I am planning on releasing a chapter tonight, and a few more in the following days leading up to one on the fourth of july.
4624237 yay:)
What part of, "DON'T FUCK WITH MY HEAD!" does nobody understand? lol Don't poke the dog.
Is that an Independence Day reference by chance
Luna should take some lessons on telepathy from Sir Patrick Stewart.
4625964 Yes it was.
4625340 It gets better.
That seems really stupid. For a variety of reasons.
One, he is in a sovereign alien nation. A guest. He needs to walk on eggshells. And he's already tied up, attacked and harassed people sent to simply investigate his presence, and did nothing but insult them and treat them like lesser beings. Plus his attitude indicates a certain degree of mysoginistic attitudes. I don't think even Rush Limbaugh still uses the term "sugar tits". And then when someone tries to reach out to him in a nonviolent fashion...he attacks them. And not just anyone, she's the co-ruler of the land.
Their hoof should go so far up his ass his breath should smell like horseshoe.
4626566 If you have just barely survived an explosion that has reduced everything and everyone around you into radioactive vapor or in his case and nine others a high dose of radiation that he just barely coming down from with the medicine he is taking, what would you do.
He is seven shades of fucked up for a variety of reasons, all of which are being explained bit by bit, and he was never one to trust those outside of his command or those holding his leash or his paycheck.
The reason for his attack on them? He does not know if they are with the Frontier Militia and he doesn't know that the ponies know about humanity let alone the war going on in the Frontier.
Him insulting and treating them like lesser beings? That is because they are his prisoners and seeing how he is in substandard conditions that are steadily improving he is only thinking for himself, he could have just as easily killed them off and used their heads as a warning for those that come near risk the same fate but he didn't do that because he knows about using people as leverage to get what he wants.
Attacking a Co-Ruler? She invaded his dreams which to him is the equivalent of mind rape and she saw things she shouldn't have seen which she could use against him when it comes to the talks, he had every right to force her out of his mind by any means necessary.
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It's called genre savviness. Never assume, always be cautious in a foreign land, and don't shoot unarmed people when they try to offer advice. Someone from the future should know that.
And they're a completely different species on a completely different planet. Why should he assume they know of the war?
4628737 As I had said earlier, he is seven shades of fucked up. Ingame it said that Regeneration would just rebuild the body and wipe the mind of all combat experience but for this story I am saying that every time they wipe your mind there is always a chance of something going wrong, and for him he drew the short end of the stick.
Well at least the language barrier has been lifted. I wonder what shinnanigans Ramsey will indubitably get himself sucked into?
4630169 Things he rather not get sucked into. IE. Pinkie Pie stuff.
Something tells me Ramsey is going to have a lot of trouble dealing with twilight and her want for knowledge.
4631435 You have no idea.
4632705 I feel sorry for him now...
4632710 Soon even Spike and her friends will feel sorry for him.
Grate chap and story
love to see more 
Yes. Her sister was the aggressor, who tried to cast all Equestria into eternal night, put a curse on an entire race of ponies, almost brought about the enslavement and genocide of countless innocents, but no, no it's CELESTIA who you think is a c--t after you attacked mere scouts who were just examining what the giant, deadly robotic thing was, in a country that is not your own, yet YOU demand of HER when you're a guest in the country and should be begging for forgiveness after attacking her sister for trying to help you in your dreams...
But no, no, no. Celestia is a total bitch. Yeah. SHE'S the one who's at fault.
Let me turn this around. If an alien force landed on earth, we had a few army scouts check out their ship and the alien attacked them, took them hostage, and then demanded of our president "I want this, this and this", you know what that would be? Terrorism. And we'd shoot his legs out for starting it and then having the gall to demand that he, the guest, the invader, get to get his way with no consideration for the planet he's landed on.
But no...no. Nah, Celestia's a c--t.
The longer this story goes...I mean...really? He lets a vampire just bite his arm with no plan for what happens if the vampire pony goes feral or anything. He nearly causes an international incident...twice. And the problem is...this isn't a comedy story. You're playing this straight. There's no way to enjoy this ironically. You expect us to like this guy, but he hasn't proven likable.
4637902 You know, the longer I have you on here the longer it seems your just nit picking at every little thing I do that you don't like. I mean almost everyone that reads this likes it so far but you, there is nothing that I do that pleases you. I bet you wouldn't like it if I nit picked your story about some beast from space that eats everything that isn't strong enough to fight back. Hell at least I have control over my grammar. So if your going to nit pick my story for what you think is wrong then it seems I am going to enjoy tearing your one chapter story apart.
lets see where it goes
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You think I mind? Grammar, bah. I can overlook. A terrible protagonist who seems to have issues with women, has terrible impulse control and thinks OTHER PEOPLE are wrong for responding to HIS bad decisions? Whom you've hung the entire story around?
He's too rude, cynical and bitter to be funny or likable. And his first response to someone trying to get him to move past the horrors of his past and to look to the future was to, I remind you, SHOOT A DEFENSELESS PERSON IN HER HEAD. And then HE makes demands of the people HE attacked? When he's done nothing but be a dick to them?
Why should I give a damn what happens to him? He's not smart. He's not got much empathy, blaming others for what HE does, and he's and overly cynical soldier character like the ten thousand other human in Equestria stories. I was so excited when this story began because I thought the idea of having a human survive on his own in Equestria, slowly but surely learning more about it before finally getting to actually interact with its people could make for a fascinating "outside looking in" tale. That we could see him studying these people, contrasting his own life with theirs, his own experiences with theirs. Drawing parallels.
Instead he's just a jerk. And a mysoginist, evidently. Who likes saying insulting things to women. And it's been over 50,000 words. I thought he would have softened a bit. But no...still a jackass.
4638225 If you don't like my story that much then how about this. Stop reading it and getting all offended about the OC not changing his ways. Change just doesn't happen in minutes, hours, days weeks, it takes time and probably years. And note the dark tag, it might help you.
Not every story has its happy endings you know, I am focusing on the more grey/black side of the scale so if you think this story is going to have much sun shine and flowers then you have come to the wrong place.
He is going to have his own moment of truth for when it happens, which you would more than likely tear that apart with your critique. And if you were so excited you should have seen coming that he is a soldier, any other story that has one as a main person always has a problem but the difference between them and him is that they have a passionate side that can be coaxed out, his got stamped out by getting mind fucked through each regeneration.
If you wanted that story you have been oh so craving for then I will do it, I will be pissing and moaning about it but I will get it done if that will please you oh powerful overlord.
4639076 Ya pretty much.
DOCTORS
Pen Stroke PLZ
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1 - I believe that somewhere in the 2nd to last chapter Celestia stated said that she doesn't consider the everfree as part of her country.
Here, i went and found the passage for you:
2 - You seem to be a bit too emotionally invested in this. Might want to take a bit of time to yourself after reading and take a mental step back.
Besides the last time i checked people are allowed to feel however they wish to. This is especially true when there's someone from one of those sides there explaining it to them who they can form both sympathetic and emotional connections with thus causing them to lean more to their side. You need to try looking at things more from the characters perspective instead of your own.
Ok 1 oh how I love this story,2 oh how it is funny. Also Imagine if one or two generals get cocky and decide to attack him.
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Its the bad boy that always gets the woman 90% of the time. Also, in my time writing I always found it nice to have a story 50% fact and the other half up for the reader to figure out. Not everyone sees a story the same way.
4806069 a digimon that write stuff now thats something you dont see everyday
4830306 Its...annoying with only three fingers on each of my paws, my claws are killing me.
4830306 Miraak I thought you were dead when Mora killed you. And Renamon shouldn't you be saving the world or something.
4830816 it was a copy do you really think i would get outsmarted by a tentacle god please beside i'm viseting your earth right now quiet nice to be honest.
Dude, i can't wait to see more...
some error word.
Well, keep it up
when is the next chapter coming out?
4958279 Soon
4959640 thanks
I hope Ramsey ruts Blossom really, really hard.
That gif sums up what my GF would do. xD Also good chapter.