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Helljumpers. Little Imps. Or just ODSTs. It doesn't matter what they're called, they're some of the best units in the entire UNSC, aside from the remaining SPARTANs. They've gone through rigorous trials to get to where they are today.

Over New Mombasa, this group of Helljumpers don't quite make it to the ground. Instead, they arrive somewhere none of them can quite identify...


Currently undergoing rewrite.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 23 )

Nice start :rainbowhuh: Let's see how it will evolve...

I look forward to this.

4996451 hello!

4996875 I was legitimately just watching Halo CE Anniversary Terminals. So the reclaimer thing totally spooked me a bit.

You have my attention! :rainbowdetermined2:

nice start, but there was a total of 3 sentences about being in the wrong place. no one tried to contact command, no one wondered where the hell they went... I mean, going from an enormous, war-torn city to a dirt field is pretty weird. it would make more sense if they were dropping down to the cruiser over new Mombasa and were pulled in to the slipspace portal. course, its your story, but that would read a lot better for me. otherwise, good start.

Wow! One of the best stories I've read on this site reguarding the knowledge of the Halo Lore! Well Done! Please continue this. I'll be happy to assist in anything.

4996415
Totally wasn't expecting you here! :pinkiegasp:


5000511
It was over New Mombasa, and I forgot about the radio thing. I'll put that in next chapter.


5005638
One of the things I hate about crossovers is that people don't give a shit about the lore of a universe.


Also, this will be updated every other week, if not sooner.

5011237
in that case, might want to fix where it says New Alexandria and Reach, as New Mombasa is on earth.

5011262
Yeah, I'll edit it a bit later.

5011237 Still, if you need help with the Halo Lore.
Just ask. :)

Alright, I'll stay for this one. Can't wait for the next chapter.

5014034
I'm not one to shun help, so I'll come along when I need it!

5061208
Honestly I'm surprised by the good feedback I'm getting here.

Good its much better than good +1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 over good plz continue

5014034 there was this halo fic i read the spartan II told classified info got misty eyed and got super bud bud with every one :facehoof:

5173309
I.... I have no words.... Only rage induced shaking.

What in the..? Who woke up the necromancer again?

It's alive! ALIVE!

It lives, yay!
It's slightly odd how not-paranoid and unworried the ODSTs are after being at war for so long (Particularly since they were jumping into a combat zone), but I'm curious to see how it will go.

you do live c:

Well, tracking random stories in the hope they update paid off

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