This is nice as well! both really great endings, i think you should make sequels to both endings, i really really like this idea and wish for it to happen more it as the possiblity of becoming something amazing!

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While I thank you for the compliments, this wasn't supposed to really go anywhere other than just a one shot. The people I write for wanted "Nightmare Moon Anal Clop" so I gave it to them.

2276540 Still i could see a lot of potential in the story, it might just being a good person with imagination, but i still could see alot you could do it ! its a nice idea so maybe thats why ^0^ anyways enough babbling from me just know i could see something that could be awesome if done right ^.^

Personally, I like this ending better, I don't like it when a pony in my Top 10 dies.

I liked it, both endings where good but I prefer this one, I loved when villains had their change of hearts, and I will like to see the continuation of this ending, perhaps in the future Annon can convinced Nightmare to start bringing back the princess starting with Luna and in return it will be like Nanna Macbe where her scar start to erase as she become a good pony.

And she can become a princess and goddess of the dreams or something. Bottom line, if you can think of an idea for a sequel please continue the story

Yeah i agree with the author
this ending made no sense

2276540 This was so much more than just a clop story, fucking great.

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Oh... So that was the alternative ending, I spoke too soon

YAY!
Awesome, bro, good job. I love stories like this.

well, that was unexpected.

good story good alternate and it was funny.

but i don get the big spoon part

still you got a follow a like and a fav

Both endings were great, but I prefer the first. Too many people go for happy endings these days.

2553403 Although i am usually one to go for the happy endings, i must agree. The dark ending fit much better, and was really well done. I am a bit confused at why anon was executed, if nightmare was using fear to rule why would the people be mad at him. Especially if there was eternal night i am not sure how anyone would be loyal to her

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Indoctrination. They weren't freed from it upon her death.

I gotta say I like this ending way more than I did the other that's for sure.

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Spooning is, basically, cuddling. "Big spoon" and "little spoon" are the positions.
"Big Spoon" is whoever is behind the other person, sort of hugging them from behind.
"Little Spoon" is whoever is in front of the Big Spoon, being hugged.

2276540 please do a sequel to this story's ending please

The story is really good and the first part is like a custom tailored first chapter to an epic story

EDIT: holy crap this story is old

Call me cheap but i loved the quick intro and the two alternate endings. Bad girls are always a good lay... Tyrannical ones even more so. Liked, faved, and followed.