A short where you were a rebel intent on freeing your friends but after you're failure you become a tool to oppress them After Nightmare Moon comes to power she defeats you and forces you to serve her but if she think's you've accepte
it feels like if its done right it could be a AWESOME story. i do feel however like you said " it is rushed" though im definetly no writer i would probably have gone more into detail about the attack maybe the actual dialogue, just to help give the story a bit more life you know? but again im no writer so i dont know what im doing ^0^ still love the idea! cant wait for another chapter!
I liked it, please continue, I want to know what happen to the main six. Also you mention clop, those that means that Annon will have a moment with Nightmare?
I have no idea what to think about this fic....
So I'm going to judge that it's amazing.
it feels like if its done right it could be a AWESOME story. i do feel however like you said " it is rushed" though im definetly no writer i would probably have gone more into detail about the attack maybe the actual dialogue, just to help give the story a bit more life you know? but again im no writer so i dont know what im doing ^0^ still love the idea! cant wait for another chapter!
I liked it, please continue, I want to know what happen to the main six.
Also you mention clop, those that means that Annon will have a moment with Nightmare?
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This is a clop oriented short story.
The mane 6 won't be mentioned because it's not the focal point of the story.
i like it