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so far so good friend look forward 2 more
nice made me chuckle please continue
Not bad. Not bad at all.
Well, you got me hooked at HumanXNightmare Moon. I also like Nightmare's personality here. She isn't a heartless bitch who kills everything she sees. She's not pure evil. She got a little bit of innocence in her.
PS: The human is an asshole though...
So I finally checked in on this fic and holy shit. Already at 40 favorites and 24 likes. Thank you all for your support, I will definitely continue this. Not exactly sure when I'll get the next chapter up but rest assure that I am working on it. :)
Huh, asshole humanxnightmare moon. This looks fun already.
Might want to get an editor or pre-reader. Its not illegible, but some parts of it are either rushed or lacking. Other than that, good story. Liked and faved to follow.
2897146 I wan't to get an editor but one: I don't really want to bother anyone with it and two: I don't know anyone to that could edit for me.
2897611
All you need to do is post in the story description that you're looking for one. If anyone is interested, they'll ask, if not, just keep writing as usual.
2897718 alright thanks
First of all I love this just thought you should know second is Derek wearing a Slipknot shirt cause cause I'm thinking its either that or a reffrence to Majoras mask
2899446 slipknot for the win my friend
Yes,this goes well.More plz
oh yes main charicter is a jerk and a atitude that makes you want to punch him I love it already cant wait for more.
I like it and look forward to more.
Oh my god AWSOME
beautiful
Dark Descent-Beginning. this should satisfy your gory fic needs
Yes! so exciting!
Ah love, the great thing that can lead to the greatest joys, and the most painful falls.
*Canterlot voice* SO EXCITING! WE MUST HAVE MO- *cough cough cough* *normal voice*.... Sorry, I meant, I must have more.
2975759 AND MORE YOU SHALL RECEIVE!
beautiful.
The story is doing great! You earned a fave good sir!
I can see Luna's face when she sees him.
I'm glad that this chapter has positive responses considering this is the first work (or rather chapter) I had a chance of editing. I was worried that I may have done too little or that I may have overstepped my boundaries.
In short: "I'm glad this chapter turned out well and you enjoyed it."
Just thought I would let you all know that I'm taking a short break from writing. I will start writing again this weekend.
WOOOHOOO
AWESOME, please update it soon.
BROHOOF
WE NEED MORE BUCKING CHAPTERS
Ps. ik u are going to make this into a clpo fic i saw u put sex option for the story
What happened to her wings?
3029857 what do you mean?
So yeah minor setback, all the work I did is gone because my computer decided to say "fuck you" and turn off without me saving so yeah its going to take longer to finish.
bow shicka wow wow just kidding never read a fic with nighmare moon or celestia having a relationship its new and i like it
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGG!!! THE FEELS!
Moar pweese.
3127898 Your point being...?
I am normaly a calm person but when that knife scene came up I just about CRAPED MY FUCKIN PANTS
very very lovely.
BROHOOF!
HELL YEAH, I like this chapter. WOOHOO!
Ahh, good ol' Derek. Still being an asshole even on the face of danger. Well, once an asshole always an asshole.
I think Discord would get along with him just fine.
damn gotta love those cliffhangers
Busy again?
3275082 Yeah im in the process of moving
awesome story. looking forward to the next chapter.
Update?
3442179 slowly coming along.
So I have the chapter finished, It's in the process of being proofread and edited. The next bit will be a two part. Before the second piece will be uploaded, I am going to put the story up on hiatus. If you're upset, I apologize. I just have quite a bit on my plate and I have another fanfic idea that keeps interfering with my work on this story.
Instead of just leaving you hanging, I wanted to do something special to thank you all for the support. Unfortunately there isn't much I can do other than a Q/A or, only because i'm I love games and love interacting with people, play some video games. If playing games with me seems strange or just flat out dumb, I apologize, I am completely new to this. If any of you would be interested in one or the other, or possibly both, let me know in the comments.
'Til next time everyone.
very clever nice chapter.