• Member Since 27th Dec, 2012
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Aetherpony


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This is pretty disgusting even by my standards. I think you have some daddy issues bro.

Fantastic! This is a amazing story! You should be commended for your literary prowess.

Your not alone brother, These kind of stories intrigue more than the fools who can adhere to their logic. Incest is only wrong because the world makes it to be wrong by random. When in actuality incest is natural and part of survival of the species especially when there is nothing else, or should I say no pony else?

This... This is a really sad story... Thank you for that this is pretty bad ass. It's also so true for many people. Here you might like this.... Here

good story so far

Favorited. The premise is just too good to pass and the execution is masterful. Also, Daughter/Father relationships are a interesting subject that I like to study... :moustache:

Regular people don't get to go to Elysium! This story is messed up!

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That's where this story comes from...

2053114 Holy Shit! I am the one who wrote the Pinkie Pie fanfiction from Oedipus # 5! That is crazy!

2052883 Daddy are best issues.

Not bad. I encourage you to keep going. I eagerly await the next chapter.

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Can't tell if trolling from name or what. If not thank you if so bad troll is bad.

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It's just a story to me. I chose the genre due to the taboo. I felt it'd be interesting to write about it.

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As Wuten said this was posted in that thread. The name Aether should have been a giveaway lol.

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Thank ya.

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Masterful? :pinkiehappy: I don't get that often.

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I felt Elysium would have been better than Tartarus.

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If things go as planned the story should be done by tonight. The last portion will be added to this one.

2054271 Asphodel is where regular people go. Elysium is for the heroes, like Kratos! Oh, wait...

the cover pictue creeps me out

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I uh... I think I saw what you meant by that... changed the cover art to something a bit better.

much better thank you for changing it,but sorry for complaining

why does this seem like a "don't drop the soap" kinda thing only anon is the skinny white guy and vinyl is the 6foot 2 beef steak with loneliness issues...and hes a rapist:eeyup:
neat story hope they dont get caught

ffffffffff wtb!!!! moarA!!! noa!!!

"When noon came to pass..." until "...ponies, gryphons, and the like..." gets repeated. Copypaste error I guess.

Damn you! This got me...excited, then I find out that the next chapter isn't here yet?! :flutterrage:

2054990 What the hell? That cover art was perfect for portraying what you were selling in the story! Why did you remove it?

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Bah, you can't please everyone. Screw it I'll flip a coin.

Very good buildup and story premise. I'm not a fan of non-consensual sex, but this story does have potential. I eagerly await the next chapter!

well now that shes famous and rich he cant exactly get away from her, she'd just follow him...so anon you're just going to have to roll with it and hope no one finds out:moustache:

More of her liquid need bastes your throbbing erection.

Basting? :rainbowlaugh:

This was romantic, forbidden lust is great.:heart::heart:

morally I could say "oh noes incest" but logically speaking he didn't take advantage of her at a young age, she made all these decisions on her own and its consensual so as long as she doesn't have a baby (cause of the chance of birth defects) then fill yer boots as they say:moustache:
this made me feel lots of stuff man..good stuff:pinkiehappy:

Since this has a pleasant ending it doesnt really fit the tragedy tag. Otherwise very good.:pinkiesmile:

2071167 A tragedy is something where the outcome is... well tragic(think Macbeth). The wife dying in the beginning is just sad.

Lack of commas, but pretty hawt.

This was great, although I do agree with 2073126 here. "Sad" is better than Tragedy. A tragedy is when there's a little spark of light, a bit of hope through a terrible existence, and they ultimately fail in the end to achieve it.

I..... actually want to see where this goes.:pinkiehappy: Next chapter HO!

B-but the next chapter is already up...:twilightoops:

About 11 months later....................waa waa waa waa waa waa you now have another daughter :twilightsmile:

Jesus Christ.....
This story is good and yet so wrong and weird in so many ways.....

But yet, it's still good...

I know that some people will probably say that I'm sick and need therapy, but this is by far, my favorite clop story on fimfiction.net

Everything on it screams perfection for me, so thank you for creating it. :ajsleepy:

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I strive to create quality clop for people to enjoy. :twilightblush:

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Not really man, or woman. Incest as a taboo only really came about due to the genetic defectives common in the children from said coupling. Avoiding procreation and the two participants are willing and understanding, while being of sufficient age, I don't see how I can protest against it.

As for this being the greatest clopfic on Fimfiction, I can only agree with you. The plot, both kinds, was excellent and I really got into the emotional bits. I just wish that there was a bit more at the end that explores their relationship.

And to the Author, excellent work. :twilightsmile:

I don't really like 2nd person, but I gave it a chance and I'm not disappointed. Good job.

Enjoyable read :twilightsmile:
I liked how you reasoned Anon's train of thought leading to his final decision.
He could either lose his morality as a parent, or lose the bond with the only important pony left in his life.

This has earned a like and a fav from me, well done!

Brace for carnage...

Later...

Hmm.
Well, I'm not gonna say this is a bad story because I'm not a lier. But...
It's not my cup of tea.
Anyway, great job. While... questionable, it was pretty solid. Well done. :moustache:

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