I like it!

it was good

More of her liquid need bastes your throbbing erection.

Basting?

This was hot on so many levels

This was romantic, forbidden lust is great.

morally I could say "oh noes incest" but logically speaking he didn't take advantage of her at a young age, she made all these decisions on her own and its consensual so as long as she doesn't have a baby (cause of the chance of birth defects) then fill yer boots as they say
this made me feel lots of stuff man..good stuff

Since this has a pleasant ending it doesnt really fit the tragedy tag. Otherwise very good.

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His wife died...

2071167 A tragedy is something where the outcome is... well tragic(think Macbeth). The wife dying in the beginning is just sad.

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Bah, details details.

This was great, although I do agree with 2073126 here. "Sad" is better than Tragedy. A tragedy is when there's a little spark of light, a bit of hope through a terrible existence, and they ultimately fail in the end to achieve it.

B-but the next chapter is already up...

About 11 months later....................waa waa waa waa waa waa you now have another daughter

Jesus Christ.....
This story is good and yet so wrong and weird in so many ways.....

But yet, it's still good...

I know that some people will probably say that I'm sick and need therapy, but this is by far, my favorite clop story on fimfiction.net

Everything on it screams perfection for me, so thank you for creating it.

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I strive to create quality clop for people to enjoy.

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Not really man, or woman. Incest as a taboo only really came about due to the genetic defectives common in the children from said coupling. Avoiding procreation and the two participants are willing and understanding, while being of sufficient age, I don't see how I can protest against it.

As for this being the greatest clopfic on Fimfiction, I can only agree with you. The plot, both kinds, was excellent and I really got into the emotional bits. I just wish that there was a bit more at the end that explores their relationship.

And to the Author, excellent work.

I don't really like 2nd person, but I gave it a chance and I'm not disappointed. Good job.

Enjoyable read
I liked how you reasoned Anon's train of thought leading to his final decision.
He could either lose his morality as a parent, or lose the bond with the only important pony left in his life.

This has earned a like and a fav from me, well done!

I actually would like to see what happened after all this. A sequel where You and Vinyl end up having a foal or are on the brink of having one. It would seem very likely. Sequel please?

I can't find anything about him taking off the blindfold, and yet he can still see.

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Ah, thanks for pointing out the mistake. I'll fix it here soon.

I really wish there was more of this its really well done.

very good story but in my opinion a bit short

I loved this so much!!!!

so hawt!!!

My overall reaction

... T-this story broke me

2625371 Make a sequel about Vinyl getting pregnant.

im do not like this sort of thing however in VERY RARE cases i do and i must say i enjoyed it all the way through i almost had a heart attack near the end of this part but i loved it it amost broke me to read it though

I came here for clop. I expected to read some hot incest with Vinyl read to me in second person.

Do you know what I got?

Feels. Sad feels. Confused feels. Morally ambiguous feels. Lots and lots of damned feels. Feels that are going to make my libido dead for the next few weeks.

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4818429 The term hand(s,y) is used in the show, with the same meaning as in real world English... The original etymology of the word hand isn't rooted in the appendage, the appendage is named (roughly) after its functionality matching the root word(i.e. a hand as an appendage is named so because it is 'handy' not the other way around ).

So it's not really out of place.

"Looks like you’ll have your hands full now." The idiom is somewhat jarring though.

6238942 Quit stalking me!