Scratchy Acid
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Well that escalated quickly.
Was this humanized?
Good story, I give it a 9/10 could have been longer ya'know
Good work there, I like it.
I was immediately reminded of this:
2141866 Oh god what XD
Her breathing is slightly labored, and she grows hot with anticipation.
other wise, great story.
2141866
What.
The.
Fuck.
2145168 Oh, thanks! I'll go fix that now!
2140340 Nope.
Well it needed to use pony words not human words
I.e. Marefriend not Girlfriend
It was good though :-)
Pure Sparky wants!
It was really good. I only ran into one sentence that didn't sound right but I think you should keep writing. I like how you tell the story.
I liked it, Roseluck needs more stories.
10/10
This was awesome. Thanks for making the protagonist a pony rather than human. Most of the second person stories I find are with a human protagonist, Which there's nothing wrong with, I just greatly prefer pony.