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Doctor Who?
"Messing with this reality will have to wait." That is seriously unethical. Actively altering another reality just gives other people who can travel between dimensions just as much to travel to your reality and fuck with it.
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Yes, he is a bit unethical when it comes to reality warping, but I can assure you that he doesn't flat out destroy or mess up other realities on purpose. He only likes seeing what each reality has to offer challenging wise.
Uh, put hide before thong. That’s all continue the good work.
8804839
Thanks!
Ugh, I know its your story and you can do whatever you want, still don't like him actively interfering with other realities development.
Cant wait for an update.
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Because I thought it would fit Celestia better then say a creature like Atone. But there is a deeper reason to why she is there.
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What?
8859015
Then would you rather have that reality become like the breaking of the sun comic.
Cause if so then you can say goodbye to your precious Equestria and say hello to a caribou run country that is pretty much a giant brothel.
9268493
That actually sounds quite fun. Instead of interfering with the progress of that reality, I'd have just watched or maybe even asked if I could join in.
9314713
It's a little messy, but it's being split into two stories that are seperate, and apart of the same time line. Shadow and Nightmare Moon's storyline. They are both in the same universe just have there own part in the bigger story itself.
Edit: Which means there are two story arcs happening at the same time.
Who killed zecora
9410440
That will be explained in due time, my friend. It's really close in that direction right now. Thanks for the comment too.
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Your welcome
Can't wait for the new chapter
Will this only end the Story arc or the whole story?
9452124
The whole story. I had another story arc in mind for this one, but I will just count it as an entirely different story when I get around to making it. For now, next chapter will tie all previous loose ends.... and something small to chew on.
9452195
So your "whole Story" is my "Story arc"? I'm happy that isn't confusing.
9452327
Yeah. Sorry for the confusion that has been going on for a while now. I've had a rough time with this story. Especially with new ones piling up in my head. To be fair, I believe I messed this entire story up doing different things in perspective compared to the original I did. Regardless, I hope you're enjoying the story still!
So no third Part? :(
9478954
Sadly. But I do have plans for the different characters in the story, don't worry. It won't be the last time you'll see Shadow. Just in this particular storyline.
*sigh*
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I sense more to this comment then you're letting on.
9628514
Just. Seriously. Wtf is going on with Celestia? I have seen fanatical Celestia. I have seen Trollestia. I have seen goddeslestia. I have even seen Solar Flare. But never have I seen anyCelestia like this one.
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That's actually quite surprising to hear. I didn't honestly expect this Shadow canon Celestia to be vastly different from her other base forms in fan fiction. She just kind of grew like that, I suppose. And her flaming form is supposed to be Daybreaker, but as you read, with a huge twist.
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I guess that just speaks of your experience as a writer. And yeah, I have seen daybreaker. I personally find Celestia having her own darker half to be quite a fascinating thing. I do believe the way that one of thise came about was Celestia being put on a high enough pedastal that she felt too lonely, then she came down and something happened that made her think someone was ouf to get her, thus Daybreaker/Solar Flare. Either name kinda fits though my.
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Thanks! I try my best to make quality stories over quantity in chapters.
I've imagined that being the case for her. I pictured that when I first began writing this series.
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Np.
Yeah. It even makes sense. Can't exactly copy-paste Luna's fall onto Celestia.
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True. Just curious. How was the two books? I haven't got real feedback about the concept of these storylines yet. I do everything myself. That includes editing, so I don't get second opinions too often.
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Well, the pov switches between Shadow and Nm are kind of annoying, but that's just me. Other than that, I have only read up to chapter four, but I'm liking the whole thing so far! No complaints other than the pov thing, but I'll get over it with Foddy.
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Yeah, the POV switching like that was an experiment gone wrong. I haven't changed it due to how important some of the chapters are. And it's the reason why I didn't make the story longer actually. I'm currently on a sort of third one part to the series right now.
Edit: Foddy?
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'Getting over it' with Bennet Foddy?
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Ah. I must be lacking in the youtube department. I have those moments of not getting something. Anyway, thanks again for the updated responses. I always enjoy reading comments. And it'll get better as you continue reading.
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Heh. I do that as well sometimes.
No problem! A good author keeps an open ear!
I cant believe zecora is dead :(
What is wrong with celestia she needs to be stopped
I hope Celestia gets stopped