So no third Part? :(

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Sadly. But I do have plans for the different characters in the story, don't worry. It won't be the last time you'll see Shadow. Just in this particular storyline.

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Just. Seriously. Wtf is going on with Celestia? I have seen fanatical Celestia. I have seen Trollestia. I have seen goddeslestia. I have even seen Solar Flare. But never have I seen anyCelestia like this one.

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That's actually quite surprising to hear. I didn't honestly expect this Shadow canon Celestia to be vastly different from her other base forms in fan fiction. She just kind of grew like that, I suppose. And her flaming form is supposed to be Daybreaker, but as you read, with a huge twist.

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I guess that just speaks of your experience as a writer. And yeah, I have seen daybreaker. I personally find Celestia having her own darker half to be quite a fascinating thing. I do believe the way that one of thise came about was Celestia being put on a high enough pedastal that she felt too lonely, then she came down and something happened that made her think someone was ouf to get her, thus Daybreaker/Solar Flare. Either name kinda fits though my.

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Thanks! I try my best to make quality stories over quantity in chapters.

I've imagined that being the case for her. I pictured that when I first began writing this series.

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Np.

Yeah. It even makes sense. Can't exactly copy-paste Luna's fall onto Celestia.

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True. Just curious. How was the two books? I haven't got real feedback about the concept of these storylines yet. I do everything myself. That includes editing, so I don't get second opinions too often.

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Well, the pov switches between Shadow and Nm are kind of annoying, but that's just me. Other than that, I have only read up to chapter four, but I'm liking the whole thing so far! No complaints other than the pov thing, but I'll get over it with Foddy.

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Yeah, the POV switching like that was an experiment gone wrong. I haven't changed it due to how important some of the chapters are. And it's the reason why I didn't make the story longer actually. I'm currently on a sort of third one part to the series right now.

Edit: Foddy?

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'Getting over it' with Bennet Foddy?

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Ah. I must be lacking in the youtube department. I have those moments of not getting something. Anyway, thanks again for the updated responses. I always enjoy reading comments. And it'll get better as you continue reading.

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Heh. I do that as well sometimes.

No problem! A good author keeps an open ear!