Hello all! I am and Englishman who had now began to write and has just stepped out the proverbial broney closet.
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Ok... Ok...
A. I didn't expect it to be that dark either!! xD
B. Oh Lord what a chapter.
C. I quickly wanted to comment well I remembered
D. Great!
E. I currently am almost halfway through the second chapter and I'm still not sure if it's something I will continue to read or not.
F. Hi! Both of you!
I am kind of confused here. I can’t figure out what the point of Demigra torturing the main character was. It seems completely counter productive to getting the main character on his side. Things honestly feel kind of convoluted right now.
Also you kept using the word savior instead of survivor.
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Hi and thanks for giving it a go
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Keep reading and you find out and as for spelling I am not that great so forgive me for that
Is it a coincidence that the title reminds me of the Nirvana saga from Fairy Tail?
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Possibly and I had no idea there was any link myself.
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Nirvana was a power in fairytale that could switch good and evil. I think they actually said something similar along those exact lines of light and darkness
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Oh I see
When you made the 300 reference you forgot to type in the part where Twilight got kicked into the portal or whatever.
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Thank you for pointing that error out, I thought I fixed that.... I really need to get a editor and prereader for this
you do no Demigra was a dick right
Wouldn't it make more sense to give a Todoroki sibling a Japanese name? Just call him Taiyo if you want to keep the sun name.