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Can't form any opinion since the first chapter only showed so much, though i can tell this is going to be quite good.
Liking it so far. But the question remains, what kind of evil will he become?
Let's see, since we got the Big D whit us, and we have a nice Devil Fruit [Akuma no Mi] picture, he gets all DF powers or he gets the Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Satan.
I'm going to say devil fruit user based on the pic.
Can't say too much since not too much was shown but this was pretty good, and I look forward to next chapter. Oh and I hope lock gets to bring his alcohol since he's gonna need it and maybe the devil too
Awesome dude. I finally have something to look forward to.
I just read both chapters just now, and honestly...
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MIND BLOWN!
This reminds me a little bit of a FoE version of the Ghost Rider but without the fiery motorcycle as far as how that played out in Chapter 2. Keep it up, can't wait for more. Now I have 2 stories to keep an eye out for update from. Loving both of them already.
There's going to be caribou chili tonight, boys!
Gluck-gluck-gluck yeah!
Gluck-gluck-gluck yeah!
Oooooooooooooooh caribou!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XEAKXokjwzg
Well, this was pretty damn good.
Tho I guess it's time to raise HELL
Yes, every journey begins with a single step. And this, is step one: Save the city!⚔
Second story and your showing leaps and bounds in storytelling, action, suspense, the build up, and breaking point. I don't know where you came from but you have shown explosive growth. I love the pacing you have going forward with your stories. Stay focus and calm your gonna bloom from a simple flower to a field; Full-bloom across an ever expanding land.
So a mix of 'One Piece' and 'Fall of Equestria' I can't wait to see what happens next.
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I think he needs a weapon of some sort, maybe a sword or something. Also, good job.
If he isn't allowed to interact with the living when on the mortal plain, then how is he interacting with our main character here?
Because like all main characters, Dimitri Lockdrom is special.
Congratz, ya got featured. 3/12/2020
So, a fusion of "Mera-Mera no Mi" and "Gomu-Gomu no Mi". That's terrifying..........for the Caribou.
Looking forward for the next chapter.
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What about a devil version of doom slayer's sword from new doom game?
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Maybe a chainsword.
Chainsaw/sword.
Strong start I like it
This is the kind of content I always hope to find. A wonderful anti-Fall story. Keep up the good work.
I look forward to more AWESOME!!!
Congrats on getting your fan fiction out there. I don't know if you recognize the outstanding talent that you possess. Keep at it young man, you are brilliant. Great success is coming your way.
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I'm afraid I'm gonna have to agree with this.
I really, really, really like this image.
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Shining Armor
I'll admit, you got me to shed a tear.
Rest in peace shining armor.
Okay, well this chapter turned me off, killing Shining Armor off like that.
Slaughter every single Caribou and traitor with the fury of all the forces of Hell. Do so in the name of the fallen captain.
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What did you expect? Three months of nonstop shield casting and all
I completely loved this chapter, the ending tho, damn Shining pasted away that's a hard hitter, well the hand of the devil is gonna be sending alot more souls to hell
What you said is true. Heroes can be remembered, but legends never die. Only your heart can, it can never go wrong.😌
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Maybe he CAN interact, but not in the sense of "oh, lemme remove this living creature" or something. Like, can't kill or disrupt the lives of mortals, but can still talk/contact them. Or maybe, he's incapable of doing so only in Equestria, but this world is more lenient?
Wouldn't that be useful Oh I don't know last chapter.
Great story so far. I'm imagining the Devil as Lucifer from the TV show?
Keep it up
I have one question to ask where is Discord at
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Well in the common cannon of the FoE he was tricked by Daimn into being sealed and his power used for the Caribou.
I like it
It aint the doom slayer, but he's still got the powers of hell, so I can still say this. *clears throught* RIP AND TEAR UNTILL IT IS DONE!
You are bad guy but that doesn't make you "bad" guy
\m/ and there was a fire fight hahahahehehe
That made me laugh
First, there's no world without any drama
Second, after watching episodes he should know better and that there is the drama
Third, the devil literally told him that something bad is happening in Equestria, worse than before
More pls
You know I’ve noticed there’s no mention of the female caribou
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good point
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That could be the price Dainn payed to get him Overlords, 666 females as Sacrifice per Overlord and the remaining females are all for Dainn's personal use to "Repopulate the Race with his Superior Genes".
The legions of hell. “Holy shit he told them” Devil “ hey... where did my prisoners go
He is too "nice" with these ponies
I don't know how to write, it's just......
Like if he was talking to children and exaggerating every word while talking about him being nice and reminding them about it
Just too nice