Hello all! I am and Englishman who had now began to write and has just stepped out the proverbial broney closet.
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Hello, my name is Corrin. Well, it was Liam but that was before getting abducted from my own reality and thrown into a different one altogether.
Well, maybe I should explain how this actually happened to me and how my life was turned upside down in a matter of seconds.
This is the story of how I came to aid one of the strongest forces this new reality had ever seen.
This story Is a Collab between me and Lord Nopony.
A Fire Emblem Fates/MLP Displaced story
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seems good.
i'll keep an eye on this
7521129 thank you
OMG! At last! Someone has made a Displaced featuring Corrin! Shame though too. I was gonna do that! Lol. Either way, I wish you luck on this. I'll be keeping an eye on it!
7522384 if you want you can help co-write it
7522398 Really?! Ya mean it?! I'd love to!
I hope that the first thing he does isn't telling all the ponys that they were a cartoon or stupid stuff like that, but I'm interessted to read it. (I just have things I prefer, so don't take me to serious I guess.)
Do you plan romance for him? I just like to know what I get, so that I don't get the wrong hopes. I mean I want to enjoy it for what it is supposed to give, and I know that some tags doesn't work with others.
7529525 maybe but I have no plans of it yet... he won't really be dating the Princesses if that's what your thinking.
7529858 I would lie if I said it never crossed my mind, but that isn't exactly what I prefer either.
No I actually thought him dating, I don't know someone like Trixie with a bad past maybe, but I still need to find out his position in this world, so that I know what would even be possible.
It doesn't exactly has to start with a relationship, but I like it if it is possible at least.
okay... this seems odd never was one for fire emblam but this chould be good
7530033 one of what?
7530044 one for not one of, i never realy enjoyed Fire Emblem
7530131 oh, I hope we can change you perspective then.
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Pretty basic start for any Displaced story, though I feel as though Corrin could have taken more time with the Timberwolves.
All-in-all, I'll be watching this one... with interest...
7530185 I will try not to disappoint
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I look forward to the next chapter then...
okay I skipped the normal merchant part, and I liked the saving the princess part so far.
Just not to fullfill any chlichees, if you can call it one, that their parents are Faust and someone else.
I don't recall the names, but someone gave their parents some nice names and with that a different personality.
I don't have anything against Faust, but I don't exactly like the idea being overused, and with that her usually being some sort of ultimate being and nothing else, like they would have no different idea for Faust. (no matter what she did, is going to do or whatever)
7530208 on it's not Faust I'll give you that... but you'll have to wait to find out more.
7530016 in the early stages it will not be possible... but maybe he will at a later date.
Excellent work. Looked over the chapter and I must say everything is perfecto! Keep it up!
are they Human with Pony features or a something like anthro level 5 or something like that?
Is he stupid or something? He shouldn't say it at all, if he thinks he is the only Human and if he thinks of himself as being a nice guy. I mean till now he probably doesn't exactly has a reason to believe that the ponys are that peacefull, at least if he doesn't knows about mlp.
I just think that sentence didn't made sense, and that he is only telling them "please kill me because I maybe kill you".
Not bad, I can't explain it but maybe even if they are childs, I got the feeling that some characters could have acted a bit different. I'm not that sure yet, it just felt a bit odd.
I hope he isn't a character that is getting three or four different names, it could get annoying in....a group talk? Sorry I kind of know what I mean but can't concentrate right now. What I know however, is that I don't exactly like it if they change their name after a few chapters, it always makes me thinking why he had choosen the other name before.
7534509 No Liam was his name before Displacement, he only gave Celestia and Luna his old name in case something happened and he needed to hide his new name... like... I don't know people who knew the games, Corrin appeared, for example, The Nohrian family. Also he knew not to lie to the King and Queen and was upfront about his kind as to gain their trust. In terms of the level, I hadn't thought about it too much.
7534529
If Liam is really from the UK, I would think he would use some British slang in his everyday speech.
Not really a critique, just a nitpick. Now let's get some plot in here...
Great chapter! Looks like this chapter is working out well! See ya when it's time to write the next!
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You based Bookmark off of this guy, didn't you?
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7563329 maybe we did Shiro... maybe we did.
7564332
You definitely did...
7564565 ...Yeah we definitely did.
7564613
Who's Port?
7564650 What do you mean?
7564655
Port is Oobleck's rival/foil
The fat one
Well now, this is certainly interesting. It seems another Fire Emblem Displaced has come into play. I'll certainly be keeping an eye on it, as I'm curious to see how this story evolves.
Excellent work! Keep it up my friend!
I read to the second chapter and already I'm putting a stop to it, I won't down vote so don't fret about it. No what's making me stop is the fact that things are progressing too fast, and that not enough explanations are made as to why Luna is already love struck with Corrin, even though not even half a day has passed. So until things change I won't read any further.
Now that being said onto the good part: No major error in the grammar, and only one word, from what I saw, was not placed leaving a blank behind, and thus forcing the readers to fill it themselves.
7718935 okay then that's not a problem but I believe we mentioned why she's like that in the third chapter, also the pace is fast for a reason, things are supposed to be moving fast.
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You glorious bastard you did it...
....Wait 'till they get a load of me. villainous chuckle
Oi.... I'm not that evil....
also, Naotsugu!
...you like pulling at my love of Log Horizon, don't you?
7817801 possibly
7817801 Log Horizon is the Epic... It also needs another season in Dub cause I only like dub for some reason...
Now on to the story!
Edit: Epic story so far Can't wait for more!
Does Liam look like Liam Harper from DC Comics?
Mmmmm~ The info dump chapter~
And the plot thickens like a well-made soup~
Good job feels like fire emblem please countiue if you need someone to bounce ideas with message me please
Hmm.... interesting
I want corrins family to show up and they are the real characters not displaced
Holy shit, it's alive!
9532490
yes, yes it is.
It's nice to have a Displaced that actually TRIES to contact their friends/family back home.
EEEEE!!!! THE BLACK MOTHERFUCKING KNIGHT!!
9595909
eyuup, I feel sorry for the Changeling
may i add your displaced story's to my Displaced Shipping in my group please
group Pure Balance Dragon Council
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go ahead