Commence read.

I like that the whole thing is a bit tongue-in-cheek. ^^

Reading the next one later.

Dont Lie. This chapter and the whole story was just so you could say the line "Of course Pinkie has a fun size cock."

I was sorely disappointed with the lack of food in this chapter.
Plenty of comfort, though.

And just what we need - more clop in the feature box.
...that's humanized?

....
Alright, let's have a look.

2161915 Featured box? Dafuq? Are you sure? I'm pretty sure I never made the feature box...

2162046 Huh. Thought I saw your name in the feature box. Ah well, my mistake then.

AHHH! how did i not know you updated AND made another story!? oh, i didn't favorite. god damn it. well, it'll be interesting to see if you used some of the ideas i suggested.

This is classic

So, if this is the epilogue, doesn't this mean that this particular story should be marked complete?

2164526 Indeed it does. Thanks for pointing that out.

Well, the only one I found:

... “the mess of cum other secretions” – ‘and’ should be placed between ‘cum’ and ‘other’… I mean, besides in my own sentence.

I guess that's it... Heh... This was a pretty interesting take on futa. Admittedly, it's not my sort of genre, but this was played out very well. Not bad, not bad at all. (Can't say much about the story without repeating myself from the previous chapter)

2265651 Wow, I was not expecting such detailed feedback when I posted this story. Especially since I wrote it pretty much for the lulz. (And the boners). I'll have to find some time to go back and fix up all the typos you found.

2266875 No one seems to expect detailed feedback for what is commonly called 'clop'. But it's what I read, so I provide it for the authors I like.

Wait, you did this for LULZ!? Jeez, I wonder what a more serious story would look like from you! I mean, not giving a story your 'all' and having it come across as well-made is one thing, but now I'm just jealous!

2277461 That's because I fixed it after seeing his comment. Haven't had time to go back and make the other fixes yet because I'm a lazy ass.

2277522 I don't want to set the woooorrrrllld ooonnnn faaaiiiyuuurrrrrr.....

Fun sized...
Clever girl.

There are no words that can express the feels that I have right now.....wait yes there is...ffgdihgftudjgdjgcnvbvbngcmgcvnxnvngxngcmgcmbcnvcgmfmvdjftskydrhdmydnvnvsjhhfmgf ect.

2371849
Those weren't words, that was a seizure.

But, Seriously Twilight get a grip on your spellslinging. (Or stop letting peer pressure get to you. One or the other)

2373478this is a word in a made up language known as gibberish ...you argument is invalid

This story was completely ridiculous, and totally fun to read.

Does pinkie's comment at the end count as sleep-fourth wall breaking?

3437214

Note how I said "normally". Normally, as in - what can be commonly expected on average. One out of 300 or 500? Rare enough not to be included into "normally", don`t you think?

4951108 And what fun is there in making sense?

well... that was something.