I like girls with dicks, if you couldn't notice. Also stories that are stupid but amusing. And stupidly amusing stories involving girls with dicks. And sometimes without dicks.
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More people are writing second person fics now. :/
3992439 Don't worry, I don't plan on doing another one for a while. It was more for a change of pace than anything else.
*BOING*
3992649 this
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Said it better that I could have. Goddamn, Cornball-- the only way it could have been better is if she were still Nightmare Moon.
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Its what I do.
Do we get a sequel?
2nd-Person Futa shenanigans with Luna... Yes.
Aside from the few minor spelling errors here and there, I rather enjoyed this and would love to see a continuation with Celly (though, given the description, I can't say I expect one). A fun tale nonetheless!
3994104 I haven't decided yet. 2nd person/present tense doesn't come easily at all (part of why this one took so long is that I kept slipping into past tense and having to fix it). I'd have to come up with a way to actually give the sequel it's own feel without being "the same but with Celestia".
3994120 Care to point out the spelling issues so I can fix them?
DAT ASS
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I'd be totally okay with "the same with Celestia", as long as the actual flow is a bit different. If it's different enough that I can pretend it's new, that's enough. Plus, sunbutt would probably just want to snuggle, for the first hour at least.
Awesome story, do WE get a sequel?
Loved it as usual. A few errors I noticed:
There's also one or two instances where you change to past tense. I didn't actually notice until I went over it again looking for the errors I had picked out. If you want I can give the whole thing a proper going over tomorrow when I'm less tired.
Other than that I don't have much to say. It's well written, sexy clop and I'd expect nothing less from you.
3992439 Personally I think second person fics are my favorites. IF THEY ARE DONE RIGHT. The worst kind of story is a bad second person fic or a bad first person fic. This one was good! Nice and juicy...... ;3
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I agree. They are fairly difficult to write well though.
This needs a sequel.
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I believe that should be "are."
bites*
Those were the only ones I could pick up in my second run-through. I think I missed a couple others, but I'm too dead tired at the moment to find any others. Sorry mate!
what is it with all the futa getting featured
3995383 If you don't want to see weird porn, turn the safe search back on.
The ting is that futa porn tend to be better written than most of the other porn out there. I don't know why, but its a fact. As for features, have you seen anything but porn in the box? (besides X dies, X does Y, X is shipped with Y and HIE stories?) .
TLDR: This is well written, and feature function sucks to find stories to your liking.
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It's Fimfiction's little fetish
Colt coddler and filly fooler sound like pedophilic terms more than homosexual ones doesn't have anything to do with futa just pointing it out
SUY WAT??/
gotta love dat r34 luna cover picture :D
Damn. That cliffhanger. Not to mention the story is marked complete.
I'm depressed now.
3995583 Fimfiction nothing. Derpibooru has over four thousand futa pictures. Bronies are all about the girldick apparently.
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3995106 Depending on demand I may do a followup with Celestia. Time will tell.
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I always found it to be a reverse case. Futa just seemed like the same rushed meaningless situation, but oh wait X character has a secret dick, so it seemed even more unrealistic to me.
If I was a pegasus.... *BOING!* "YOU TRAITOROUS BASTARD WINGS!"
3998056 It's clop. Realism is secondary. Also, the dicks are magic. Hence, realistic.
But seriously, that's the main reason I tend to write comedy.
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I really hope we get a sequel. This was pretty amazing!
Also, I'm pretty sure Celestia'll do a number on his hindquarters.
If you know what I mean.
What a great story. Please write a sequel.
... I have only one thing to say.
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You may not often write 2nd person but you do it very well I really enjoy this I hope ill see more soon
Never much liked futa myself. Never saw the appeal in a penis, but vaginas... that's a whole other story. If there was more focus on eating Luna or Celestia out, would have been better in my opinion.
4003110 Vagina's are pretty great. I should get around to writing a story with more of them. So far, this is the only thing I've done with lots of pussy material.
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The unsaid message being, "You should read this you vagina loving whore!"
Let's see how much I like it while putting off homework.
4003349 Hey, you said you wanted more vagina. Figured if you liked the style of this one, you might like something else in a similar style without the futa. Though the explicit bits don't come up until the later chapters. Don't feel obligated to read it or anything. And I'll readily admit that the ending is kinda rushed.
The guy wasn't pathetic! Perfect!
Please, continue, twas getting fun there.
~OreoKookie
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It is also humanized, I tend to shy away from those. That sort of story can be found basically anywhere else on the internet.
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How is it humanized?
4007944 He's talking about the story I linked above, not this one.
Dude that was hot and awesome! 2nd person, Anon gender, and servicing my favorite princess with the possiblity of a sequel!
SEQUEL, DO IT!
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Answered before I could, damn, I am too slow!
4003349 yes. One of the better ways to avoid homework is to read clopfics.
3998345 When I saw the cover art I had an instant wingboner.
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Anything "pony" seems to distract me from homework.
4025316 ditto again
By the way, I like your profile picture
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Thank you.
I like how your picture accurately displays your love of waffles. Waffles are far superior to pancakes, or as some call them, "flapjacks".
Some corrections.
It was ok, the excessive rimming and the fact you kept on stating that she excretes from it really was a boner killer.