You know the statement Why the fuck not has been used alot, but so has Genius, Amazing, and Oh dear god Why haven't we done this before. And buddy i think the best term for you would be the word Epic
2006502 xD You know what's funny about your comment? Depending on the orientation of comments, yours is either pointing at Chuckward's, or Blake Skies' comment. And it looks hilarious as for me, it's pointing at Blake's, and yours came before his, yet fits perfectly.
Dunno why I had to say that, I just wanted to point that out. And dammit, Pinkie! You'd better show off that dick to Mrs. Cake and Mr. Cake, and somehow get in a threesome!
what the buck did twilight just unleash upon her friends!? hmmmm, is it sick of me to imagine applejack and pinkie pie having sex while they BOTH have penises and a vagina? curse you writer person, you've turned me into a sick sick person. past that, i can't wait to see how this turns out!
I almost want to complain about Pinkie stealing my idea about cumming ice-cream. Then I feel ashamed that I feel the slightest bit possessive over such a concept.
Also, her logic about dick-pudding is strangely rational and practical for Pinkie. It's almost too sensible to be arousing.
You are totally correct. I am dying to see what its like and what she does with it. I hope she uses it to screw RD's brain out and reduce her to a drooling idiot with it, for one.
Okay, so I just got here from "Something Extra". I had no idea the story was finished, and was only around long enough to see the first chapter go up before today. I'd like to think I'm not cheating you out of two reviews because this is a related work.
I was laughing too hard at every single chapter in Something Extra. I could appreciate the meaning in just about everything mentioned in regards to Applejack's dilemma. And your clop writing handled it all satisfactorily as well. That story was faved instantly, and I can't wait to see the fucknuttery Pinkie gets up to in this story. I'm also curious as to whether or not you'll tackle some of the weirder situations in which boners happen, cause those are things too. XD Like when you see a picture that you can't quite understand, but just bam, boner and an urge to go find a quiet bathroom or something.
She can't do Twilight, because even though that would make this fic the most literal candidate for the story group Twinkie, Twilight would be too worried about AJ's feelings in all the time surrounding the act. At least, imo, with the way they acted in the past story.
"Pinkie, I am not going to give you an ice-cream shooting penis. I don't even know if such a thing is possible, and I'm really not inclined to try to do it. If I give you a nice, regular, semen-shooting cock, will you go back to your room and leave me alone?"
Thank you for making this a 90% dialogue affair. I love how the entire story just moved with one of the most Pinkie Pinkie Pie-Twilight conversations ever. Twilight's shock and disgust contrasting against Pinkie Pie's usual brazenness and hyper-activity was godly. I just about lost it when she wanted to cum pudding.
This is turning out to be a very interesting fic. Thank you very much for it.
Seriously though, this certainly seems to be one of the more... interesting forms of 'clop' I've read on the site... I usually proofread and review, but I didn't notice any errors, and the chapters are pretty much all the same with regards to length: Rather short chapters. If I had to comment, well... characters seem to fit rather well with regards to them being IN character, and this is one of the few times where Pinkie Pie dialogue comes across as 'hyperactive and cutesy' rather than just 'annoying' (which I can't help but make her sound like, in my own stories. ).
I'm eager to see how this continues, though. Hmmmmm...
I love you.
What that pony said^ I agree
You know the statement Why the fuck not has been used alot, but so has Genius, Amazing, and Oh dear god Why haven't we done this before. And buddy i think the best term for you would be the word Epic
I lost it right about there
Commence read.
It continues.
Pudding sounds better than Frosting. Though I guess she could still shoot batter, though not baby.
What I want to see of Pinkies is between me and my penis!.....and you, so please, take your time
Oh boy, here we go!
Pinkie being Pinkie.
So... I just found your Applejack one and this is here?
Dammit, I have over 100 fics on my read later list, why am I adding two more?
2006502 xD You know what's funny about your comment? Depending on the orientation of comments, yours is either pointing at Chuckward's, or Blake Skies' comment. And it looks hilarious as for me, it's pointing at Blake's, and yours came before his, yet fits perfectly.
Dunno why I had to say that, I just wanted to point that out. And dammit, Pinkie! You'd better show off that dick to Mrs. Cake and Mr. Cake, and somehow get in a threesome!
what the buck did twilight just unleash upon her friends!? hmmmm, is it sick of me to imagine applejack and pinkie pie having sex while they BOTH have penises and a vagina? curse you writer person, you've turned me into a sick sick person. past that, i can't wait to see how this turns out!
I almost want to complain about Pinkie stealing my idea about cumming ice-cream. Then I feel ashamed that I feel the slightest bit possessive over such a concept.
Also, her logic about dick-pudding is strangely rational and practical for Pinkie. It's almost too sensible to be arousing.
Almost.
Lol this shall be good! And in other words "What has science done?!"
I guess you could say...
Pinkie wanted the dick
YYYYEEEAAAAHHHH
So it begins...
just gonna say this.... penis pudding... that is all
When I looked at that cover pic:
DAT LOOK.
I hope you do this with every character.
Slaanesh aproves of this. and sHe demands more.
Wowzers!
DICKS FOR THE DICK GOD!
Have her do Twilight atleast once!
Ice cream penis. Pinkie Pie, you are SO random.
You are totally correct. I am dying to see what its like and what she does with it. I hope she uses it to screw RD's brain out and reduce her to a drooling idiot with it, for one.
Okay, so I just got here from "Something Extra". I had no idea the story was finished, and was only around long enough to see the first chapter go up before today. I'd like to think I'm not cheating you out of two reviews because this is a related work.
I was laughing too hard at every single chapter in Something Extra. I could appreciate the meaning in just about everything mentioned in regards to Applejack's dilemma. And your clop writing handled it all satisfactorily as well. That story was faved instantly, and I can't wait to see the fucknuttery Pinkie gets up to in this story. I'm also curious as to whether or not you'll tackle some of the weirder situations in which boners happen, cause those are things too. XD Like when you see a picture that you can't quite understand, but just bam, boner and an urge to go find a quiet bathroom or something.
I got my eye on this. Respect, and peace.
P.S. Make Pinkie slap RD around or something with it. It'd be funny.
She can't do Twilight, because even though that would make this fic the most literal candidate for the story group Twinkie, Twilight would be too worried about AJ's feelings in all the time surrounding the act. At least, imo, with the way they acted in the past story.
2006637: That's totally disgusting and I would never even think of putting that into my story! It's not fetishy or sexy at all.
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2006715 denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw4504-abuzm.gif
Also, holy crap how on earth did this get over 100 thumbs and nearly 200 faves in less than a day!?
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Seriously, how does that happen? Not that I'm complaining.
(Joke) Alt. Title: (Funky) Apple Sex Farm II: Sweet Pink Emotion
reads description - hmm i'll get a good laugh by this
reads actual story - mylittlefacewhen.com/f/6117/
anyways, hilarity ensues
2007107 Seed for the Seed Throne!
2008667
i mean of course not.
yea this story is AWESOME
This is perfect, now we get to see Pinkie's Party Canon (bad pun I know.)
Dear god, this is genius! LET THE PINKIE-FUCKING COMMENCE
Yeeeeeesssss...
2010078
Skulls for the skull-fucking!
2011828 What the hell? Skull-fucking for everyone! Come here, ghoul...
...Ice cream? BRRRRR!
What
well...this is interesting. better read the next chapter, you know, for science.
Can you make it shoot pudding?
What?
My dick, I want it to shoot pudding
My reaction
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
My epics. I give them all to you.
And moustaches.
Thank you for making this a 90% dialogue affair. I love how the entire story just moved with one of the most Pinkie Pinkie Pie-Twilight conversations ever. Twilight's shock and disgust contrasting against Pinkie Pie's usual brazenness and hyper-activity was godly. I just about lost it when she wanted to cum pudding.
This is turning out to be a very interesting fic. Thank you very much for it.
Me: "... An' I bet she felt nuts..."
Seriously though, this certainly seems to be one of the more... interesting forms of 'clop' I've read on the site... I usually proofread and review, but I didn't notice any errors, and the chapters are pretty much all the same with regards to length: Rather short chapters. If I had to comment, well... characters seem to fit rather well with regards to them being IN character, and this is one of the few times where Pinkie Pie dialogue comes across as 'hyperactive and cutesy' rather than just 'annoying' (which I can't help but make her sound like, in my own stories. ).
I'm eager to see how this continues, though. Hmmmmm...
"i am not going to give you an ice-cream shooting penis"
classic, but i bet pinkie was kinda sad
2021469
Science... right...
personally, I would like a penis that shoots icing, if I had a dick
the 'never' is unnesesary