Twilight realizes Spike might be neglecting his childhood when she sees how hard the dragon is working to help her around the library, so she decides to send him to school to mingle with ponies his own age. Despite his intellect and maturity, Spike finds himself with unfamiliar ponies, in an even more unfamiliar environment. Can Spike learn what it means to be a child before the fillies and colts drive him insane?
Please Read: I did not mean to take credit for using Mallajong1's title for the "Spike's" series. The similarity was purely coincidental. Sorry for any confusion caused.
Chapters (9)
(singing) Nailed it!
....Was this supposed to be a submission to the Spike's Series?
If you wouldn't mind, could you help me?
>>"Spike's Applebloom"
>>not written by MallaJong1
>>BLASPHEMY
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A Spike's series needs an editor? Well I'll postpone my own one for an hour while I help you out
1835084yessir I really need help contact me
1835126
Sent you a PM about 15 mins ago ^_^ Just let me know when you want my help
Dismantling computers, but got 3 around me so I should be able to work on at least one
1835126
hhmmmm, ....... i like it but it seems a little simple for my taste, try expanding the story so that it takes like 2-3 chapters to start the relationship
i mean this was ludicrous seeing as nobody is that simple
.........yep i'm in love with a total stranger
so yeah my advice; AWKWARDNESS
start anything with a awkward turn of events and you can't go wrong, have them meet in the street and have a prolonged discussion about the history of scales or why purple isn't a very manly color
if i come off weird sorry i'm just a spike fan with ideas but i can't for the life of me find time to do this stuff
1835212
I agree with you on these points. But that would assume that the emphasis on this fic is on Spike and Apple Bloom getting into a relationship. By the looks of it, the author wanted to write about Spike and Apple Bloom while they were in a relationship (See Author's Notes), and therefore perhaps a detailed explanation of how their relationship came to be isn't needed, and the fic can just start with Spike and Apple Bloom already in a stable relationship.
1835126
I'm afraid the Gdocs link you gave me doesn't work as I have insufficient rights to view or edit it. I realize you're 6 hours behind me, but if you could get back in contact with me, that'd be great
1835415
understandable but:
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JK i understand and thats a pretty good explanation
1835500
That image!
Unfortunately the author seems to have disappeared from Skype and Fimfiction.net
And I don't really want to do any editing without him/her, as I have very little idea where (s)he intends to take this fic.
1835500>>1834420>>1834444
After helping Bronymind a little with his ideas, I humbly ask that you reread the first chapter of this fic, and let him know what you think.
1834444
Or just an attempt at using the title to get more views.
Which I have no problem with. I'm a total view scrounger too, so I understand what this guy's doing.
1866900 Incorrect! I have been searching this site for a AB&S fic for days, and I haven't found a good one, so I decided to make my own spike fic, and I was humbled to have Mallajong1 read it, but now I have gotten a editor and its at its best, I have no problem with hate, I am not looking for views, I never cared for it, I just wanted a spike fic for everyone to read.
1866907
no idea what that means.
Just saying I'm chill with it. Not saying I'm going to read this, but I get it.
1866912 and you should read it, it's better now, I would like for it to e a featured fic but I don't care if it is, if you don't like it, I don't mind,
1866938
Oh, I know that feel bro.
I only got featured once and that was only because it's much easier to after the site change. And even then it was only for ten minutes in the bottom slot. So basically nothing. I might just give this one a read, but not right now. I don't read that many fics these days, one of two a day at most. So yeah, probably later.
What the.... no mallajong1?! I shoulda known! It has no apostrophe!
I'll read it, but I don't appreciate using someone else's title to get views.
Edit: Well, I read it at least, I didn't like it but... I'd say it's okay. Thumb up!
1874229 I didn't know that Mallajong1 doesn't use apostrophes for his spike story's I'm sorry if it looked that way, I've already fixed it, but I apologize to everyone who thought this story was by mallajong1 and you should know not to judge a book by its cover, a true reader wouldn't find the mistakes, he follows along with the writers inspiration, and try to overlook small mistakes, and point out large and deemed unworthy of being there. And I know that from experience.
1875788 Well at least I read it anyway instead of disliking, reporting, and flaming it for whatever reason. I gave it a chance atleast.
Edit: I wasn't mad about the name being 'wrong' or anything, I was just pointing that out to differentiate it from Mallajong's series. I wasn't trying to be a jerk.
only on chapter?
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1900311
I figured that someone might say that, don't worry! There will be a second soon, maybe sometime early in February, sorry for the wait
Edit:
Actually I might bring it out sooner, that if my editor comes around, but don't worry, it's being worked up right now, if you want a hint of what's next, here.
"Basically, I'm asking if you want to hang out sometime tomorrow, if you want to of course" Spike asked sheepishly.
"Why sure, ah don't have anythin' to do tomorrow, so how bout noon at your place?" Apple bloom had been waiting for him to ask it for a while, and it's just unforgivable for either of them to reject,
Are you slightly happier?
1889633
Thanks! I'll keep workin, if you got a suggestion for another background scene in the story, just ask me!
I'm staring to like this!
1908959
Thanks! I've been working hard on it, I promise you that there will be a second chapter!
1910672 Well then!
Good luck
1911652 Thank you, I'll guarantee that you'll be impressed!
Hopefully I'll be able to get fuller, more healthier chapters in the future. I did expand on this one quite a lot. I hope everyone feels that everypony's in character.
I know Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, the latter especially, might be interpreted as a little mean to Apple Bloom (particularly as they completely ditched her the day prior!), but I think they needed to be the teasing friends that is commonplace among in childhood relationships.
Please leave your feedback and, if you didn't enjoy it, make your criticism as full and as helpful as possible. I'm working with a relatively new fanfic author to Fimfiction, and I want him to be able to grasp the ropes.
Your help is much appreciated
Wub woo, guys!
1911710 You are going to get so much hate because of the title........ go beg for MallaJong1 to forgive you.
Up next in the Spike's whoever universe, I give you: Spike's Spike. Description: Weeks after the incident with the Mirror Pool, Spike finds himself at the home of Rarity. After being rejected, he goes for a walk and finds himself at the cavern where the Mirror Pool is located. Little did he know that he would find love in the strangest of places
1929560
Sadly the hate seems to be inevitable. The only solution would be to change the title, but that hardly seems fair, since the similarity wasn't intentional.
Hopefully some people will actually read it though, and then maybe then they'll enjoy it
who knows?
1929625 Id change it or ask that guy to aprove of it
1929637
I'll send MallaJong1 a PM. Thank you for your advice
1929584
I've already written Spike's Spike. It's titled Spike's Metamorphoses on my page.
1929707
I may just have to read that
Edit: just read it and that was kinda funny
Something in my gut tells me Apple Bloom's actions will speak louder than words.
I like where this is going!
Wow I was thought this in high school and these fillies are learning it in elementary boy do i feel smart.
I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
Anyway cool chap but I am kinda wondering why this story is in the Spike's harems group
1930580
On the first chapter she is trying to drive the subject away from her and put it on spike, but you know that never worls, and this chapter, I believe that's a typo I'll go ahead and talk to my editor, by I hope you like it!
1930580
Forgive me I imported the chapter from Google Docs, but it looks like I missed a formatting error. There is actually dialogue there, but sometimes importing from Google Docs it can get a little buggy. I did import both chapters only yesterday if you're wondering why it's not been spotted before.
Thanks for pointing these out, and if you spot any others, let me know so I can rectify the problem.
1930936
Forgive me for posting it there! 'twas a complete mistake
It was supposed to end up in the Spike's shipping group, but a few misclicks and now I have no idea how to remove it from Spike's Harem's
*facehoof*
1931268
You fell off Skype, come back on
Please, continue doing what it is you think you're doing.
1931615 working on the third right now!
I love spike x bloom.
I love this story.
I love this writer.
AB rules but i still think shes not AJs sister.
i think AJ and mac had a little too much free time one winter "wink wink" "nudge nudge"