• Member Since 20th Jun, 2012
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MrTyreste


I love MLP, and I love writing. Hoping to read some awesome stuff here. :)

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Johnny is a typical Southern boy from a small town in Tennessee who just happens to enjoy My Little Pony, but hates a certain orange workhorse for her stereotypical behavior. Soon, he finds himself hiding out in an abandoned barn waiting out a storm only to wake up in Sweet Apple Acres and in front of Applejack. Johnny doesn't see eye to eye with her, but when Applebloom and her friends are stolen away from the farm during the middle of the night, he finds out there is more to this pony than meets the eye. Can the two form a fast friendship in their effort to locate the CMC, or will they have to dig a few graves for three little fillies?

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Comments ( 174 )

good job so far. tracking to see where this goes.

Agreed.........I am living in Georgia, born in Colorado. I know how offending it is to see a country cartoon on TV. When I lived in Michigan, country cartoons didn't bother me. Now, I've been living in Georgia for 7 years. With my Michigander and Georgian and Coloradan influences, I also tend to change my accent went I get angry. I love this story because I can relate to it. Living in Georgia longer than Michigan and Colorado ( Michigan-4 years, Colorado-2 years since birth) I easily get offended by "Yeehaw" or "Geddy up". It is very offending for people to think that Southerners are all rednecks and farmers. When I saw My Little Pony, i overlooked that because the crew was trying to put all sorts of people into the show from Southerners to tomboys. I am a lot like Johnny. Keep up the good work.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

889732I get a British accent when I get mad.Thats just plain weird .:derpyderp1:Im not even from that side of the world.

889758 Interesting, are any of ya parents from Britain?

889773Nope,they say there all from Mexico.Strange huh?:trixieshiftright:

889777Then again ,at times I have this sudden urge to speak like a Brit,be lady like and have everything perfect.Like Rarity......and that was BEFORE I even watched the show.......WTB....:twilightoops:

889777And sometimes I say words like 'darling' ,'uncouth ',and 'horrid'........What is wrong with me ?!?!?!:rainbowhuh:

889797 It aight dude. Before I realized I was a Southerner, i was speaking the accent. You never know, maybe one of your great aunts were from britian or you just have a weird British fetish. Either way, it don matter that ya speak like a gentleman, it depends on if ya act like one.

889808Wow, I guess your right..Maybe its my subconcence speaking......OH MY CELESTIA.....THAT MEANS ONE OF MY DEEPEST DESIRES IS TO BE SAFISTICATED.....BRITISH,......I MAY AS WELL SAY I WANNA BE LIKE OCTAVIA!!!!I ....dont even know what to say now.....:facehoof:

889821 I hear ya loud and clear. If you're deepest desire is to be SOPHISTICATED then be it. Nobrony'll judge ya for being fancy. All you need to do is express ya true gentleman.:pinkiehappy:

889836I am a female .:derpytongue2:Anways , I love this community , so goodbye and BRONY PRIDE!!!

889857 :pinkiegasp:oops sorry bout that. Didn't know ya was a girl.

Awesome first fiction :ajsmug: I like how this is setting, but a little bit too quick for me. I love this, Liked and Favourited :pinkiehappy:

Lol I love how the narrator isn't surprised at all really. He's just like, "Yup, average day." I love that xD

The only I don't know for sure.....is he a pony now, or a human still? 'Cause Applejack, Mac, and Applebloom didn't really seem to ask too many questions.

890004 He's still in his human form, just the way the writer wanted it to be :applejackunsure:

I know exactly what Johnny feels, I am from Groningen (not to be confused with Friesland, or I could get pretty mad) :ajsmug:

889758
When I get angry, I don't take on an accent, but my words become indiscernible because I speed up, and start mumbling.

You're rushing it. The alleged dislike is not evident at all, he's being offered a job by the skittish Applejack by the second (short) chapter... Seriously, it started good, as good as this chapter isn't.

Consider a rewrite, my man.

Curious to see where this goes!

im from missouri and i dont realy have an accent. Ill occasionaly say yall but who doesn't in missouri? But several people ive met from out of state have commented on my "accent" when i speek to them in the same "accent" they're using. What the heck?:applejackunsure:

>>Hyper-Insomniac Oh yeah, the narrator is kinda like me, just goes with the flow. :derpytongue2:

"If you had told me a year ago to watch My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, I probably would have called you a faggot and walked away laughing. However, after a few episodes, I was undeniably hooked."
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When will the next chapter be up. I really like this story. :twilightsheepish:

Moar please, and here have a mustache :moustache:

931623 Huh? Lol
924815 I'm actually working on it right now, a long with wavering magic and another little one-shot featuring Rainbow Dash. :rainbowwild:

I like this story alot. you just got a watcher and a favorite my friend:ajsmug::eeyup:

"Hey Johnny?" Speak of the devil, she showed up just as we were talking about her.
"What do you need, Applejack?" I asked her, expecting her to tell me to get to dinner after a hard day's work, but what I got instead was the opposite.
"I want you to leave, now."

AW shit something went down.:pinkiegasp:

that was blunt

why so sudden aj

1147528
Very. And what the f:yay:k was with the two month wait?

1148646 It was my bad, lol. I had A LOT of work on my plate, what with moving into my own place, getting a new job, and so many other things to do. :ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy:

1150493

Understandable, bro, just try to updated the story more often now :scootangel:

Yay new chapter:pinkiehappy:

OR Twilight was jealous, because Applejack had a human on her farm.:ajbemused:
OR she just doesnt know how a human looks :twilightsheepish:

1175033 Oh yeah, gonna start updating more frequently now that I have some free time!:ajsmug:
1175148 It's a little of both, actually. I mean how many fics do you read of someone spending time with AJ? :derpyderp2:

1175256 eeeeyup:eeyup:
besides, have you read: Achievement Hunter in Equestria? :pinkiehappy:

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