Spike knows he has a crush on Rarity. But after a dream, he finds he may be developing a crush on Twilight as well. While he tries to sort out his feelings, he gets help from an unlikely pony.
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And on the heels of the last one, we go to something completely different.
Seems interesting, tracking
Hoping for more.
Original concept. Let's see where this goes.
Oh, and the "Remember what we did last night?" made me
and then 
...
Hmm. You might want to reconsider that picture you used as cover art - it's the same one used for "Unintentionally Yours", which is a bit confusing at first.
En tu sueños, oh wait... Never mind.
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this looks like another story called 'unintentionally yours'......intersting
132229 lol
Thank you to all the people who are tracking, and a special one to those who took the time to reply.
>>MagaSpark
That scene (and a few of the lines right after it) made me consider bumping it up to a T rating. Eventually, I didn't, since nothing is really said, and everyone who reads can make their own interpretation.
>>Ospero
There are very few pictures with just AJ and spike that isn't the almost kiss from the show.
>>Dragon Master Spike
It was meant to be like the teaser before the theme song, but yeah, it is kind of short.
>>Alanthewhite
I hope to live up to your expectations
>>lederp
But without the pairing from that story. I know I used the same picture, but it's for a different reason
You put Spike into a harem anime? huh? regardless this looks awesome. I just picture Spike raising one eyebrow and saying "Ladies..."
great
Looks like Spike may be a little more open to the idea, but finds that Twilight is a bit upset at him. What will happen, and will it affect Spike telling Twilight about his possible crush?
153532 will he fall for applejack aswell i do like spikejack shipping :)
154082
This is not the fanfic you're looking for, then. Spike and Applejack will not be getting together here.
Liking the premise of this, keep up the awesome work!
Always a fan of Spike and Twilight. Following.
My
when will update I been wait for a LONG time dude. 
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Calm down. It'll be updated soon, I promise. But I do have a life outside the computer, and sometimes I may take a break and work on another project. It will be updated when I feel the chapter is done, and not a minute sooner.
Oh Spike, getting into girl stuff
Ohoohooo getting interesting! Just a few grammatical errors I wanted to point out below, unless you meant for them to be like that...
"what anything special for lunch?" what should be want
"After bringing put a sandwich to Twilight" should be something like After bringing a sandwich for Twilight
"He hasn’t totally given up on her, despite these setbacks, and still hoped she’d come around." hasn't and hoped aren't in the same tense
"he and the others come to save her" come should be came
"I horn-write it" should be wrote or had horn-written.
So yeah, I hope that^^^ helped. Good luck with this story, I always love some good Twilight Spikle
or whatever the kewl kidz call it.
I wait in anticipation for the next chapter.
277323 "I had horn-written it." or "I wrote it with my magic." The latter is far better than the former.
278528 I was just trying to keep the horn part in there. I like it for some reason.
I went and made the fixes you mentioned. I'm also surorised I made those errors, since I gave the story a once over before publishing it.
And the "horn-wrote" thing was meant to be the unicorn equivalent to "handwriting", so I left it in.
fantastic
Man I've only started reading this, and I already love it. Keep it up mate!
My home computer died on me. But thanks to Google Docs and a smartphone, I finally was able to get the last chapter to you.
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Is that why this feels rushed?
Aw, sad ending.
Ending felt rather rushed and pretty bad.
Like the idea overall, but I feel there was more potential for that ending if you hadn't rushed it
Interesting so far, gotta read more now! However, I did notice one error that caused me to re-read the sentence a few times. In the end of the story when spike wakes up, you say 'Downstairs, she could see Twilight' but I think it would make a bit more sense if it said 'Downstairs, he could see Twilight'.
Hmmm. Yeah, needs more of an ending... Though it ends how I'd expect such a thing to end. -nods thoughtfully-
However, no matter what, it's deserving of a thumb from me. Nice work.
I'll be honest (which I always am) I truly love Spikelight, and always will, 100% my favorite pairing....even though that has nothing to do with your own story...ahem ,now onto the story itself....
Although it felt rushed for me and Rarity did not appear for him to wonder about his feeling for her more (evn though I hate Spike/Rarity with a complete and total passion) I felt as this was heart warming for Spike to learn of his feelings for his best friend and going to the element of honesty of such advice, it was really well done, short but with a mix that made sure it got the point across...I'm proud to have such such good work, you do have some grammer and spelling errors but everyone makes mistakes, don't stop writing none the less....I'll be tracking this even though it's already done....oh well, at any point in time this was very well made.
Also, Pinkie pie has a seriously bad habit of randomness...make her STOP!!!!
So what was the letter that Twilight send to the princess a Plot device?
Rushed ending. Bad ending. The story was fine but nothing special. Maybe next time.
HEY!
WHY DID Spike get friendzoned!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????
SO UNFAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rushed and horrible ending.
no romance at all.
friend zoned
i feel so disappointed
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Spike can't even kiss a mare in his OWN dream?! Say WHAAAAAAT?!
Total disappointment. This is not romantic at ALL. It's suppose to be romantic. I mean really, if you make a sequel don't inspect me, or many others in that matter, to read it.
TEH COVER IS SO MISLEADING.
............................ I'm sorry what?
Did you perhaps put the ending from another story on here instead by accident? I really wish you did because since you didn't, i'm sorry but this will not receive a like from me.
I came to this story for the Romance, hence the tag. This ending shows that there was none. I highly suggest you do one of three things:
Remove the romance tag, Add some romance between him and Rarity(I will probably not be interested if you did), or, and I do hope you do this one: Change This Ending!
ohhh no this isn't gonna end well for Spike.
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