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After Scootaloo was able to get some frustration off her chest, Cheerilee thinks there is something more going on. While trying to offer advice about Scootaloo's current problem, she finds that Scootaloo's life isn't as happy as she probably thought.
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An interesting start. Favorited to see where this goes.
This caught my interest.
First story I seen with Scootaloo but no RD.
Interesting start... I feel like the whole thing was a bit rushed, but not too bad in the end. Looking foward to more.
Interesting Scootalove without RD... Very interesting....WHERE CAN I FIND MORE OF THIS GENIOUS!!!
"I'm LIKING this idea!" -
I LIKE THIS :) You better continue!
I'm watching this story... just to see where it goes.
I've got my eye on you.
Oh Celestia's Mane... Another one, but this one I REALLY want to see what happens.
Please please, update soon.
Thanks for your nice comments. Hopefully I can entertain you as we move along.
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What do you mean when you say "another one?"
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When i say another one, im refering to the 'Orphan/Abused-by-her-parents' Variation of Scootaloo. Although I dont know which one you're doing, as I said before, I am very curious to see where this one goes. I dont mean anything in terms of offense, I was just speaking my mind because I see alot of the,... ^^;;;
I REALLY like this story, it breaks us away from the usual Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash stories; we never get enough of Scootaloo interacting with other ponies (there was that one story featuring her and Derpy, and I LOVED it).
I REALLY can't wait for your next update and can only hope there will be no tears as I continue reading this story. 
When will you update?
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It'll be updated when I update. It's only been up for three days. Put it in your favorites to keep track and be patient.
965302 oh sorry I though it said jun not jul!
I love this so far! Can't wait to read more.
What took so long?
Cool stuff, keep going!
Sniff. That was sad. That was a long wait for a chapter too, but I'm not going to complain.
amazing you better not take 10 days to make another
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I'll take as long as it takes to make a chapter. I do more stuff in my life than write, and I try to do a good job on it. I'll have the chapter out when I think it's ready.
This can only end well
So far this feels pretty rushed, but frankly we've all heard this story a million times, so I don't mind getting the necessary cliche out of the way if it means getting to a take on this I haven't seen before.
Of course, Apple Bloom. That's what you get for hearing like, what, part of it? People are so easily to assume something before they hear the whole thing.
its annoying
Ah been waiting and I still lovee this but it takes so much time like me
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I'm aware of that. I hope to surprise you in the next couple of chapters, however. And I already made my version different by excluding Rainbow Dash.
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You'd be angry too if you heard that your best friend was stealing from you, regardless of the circumstances.
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While we have you mentioning the time it takes again
YAY
new chapter also i'm happy that your taking your time since you have other stuff in your life and don't worry i'm very patient
Ha, if I had friends.
Who were stealing from me, I'd probably want to know why before shredding them and turning them into muffins.
Just wondering, is this still being written? Will anything further come from it, or have you stopped this?
Considering my last entry was a mere 4 days ago, I think it should be obvious. I may not get chapters out as fast as some writers, but I have every intention of finishing.
That last chapter took way longer than it should have. Part of the problem was that I had about half a dozen ways I could have taken it about halfway through.
One idea had Apple Bloom showing up at the scoolhouse while Scootaloo was swinging, and the two on them make up and become friends again. Another idea included more of what Cheerilee and Applejack said while Scootaloo was outside.
This chapter also had more talking than pretty much any other chapter I wrote, but I thought it was also the best way to introduce more of Scootaloo's past, which Scootaloo told Cheerilee before Applejack got there.
Anyway, hope you enjoy.
Glad to see this continued, although I want more meat to the chapters. Its not bad, just short.
24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lskf3f16eD1r0z1wao1_250.gif YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!
(/ﾟДﾟ)/ I DEMAND MORE OF THIS GENIOUS!!!
I have to agree! Give me more, and you will be allowed to live.
1737956 ...what did you just type?...
1738307 I don't know, but I'm either too scared or too confused to find out.
media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m3f5v6TvFD1r5grlj.gif Why make a cliff hanger there, WHY THERE?
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Why not? The purpose of a cliffhanger is to make you want the next part that much more to see it resolved. Guessing from the GIF, it did it's job.
As a reader I HATE cliffhangers, as a writer I've discovered they're fun to write and even more fun to hear people rage about
I also found this picture earlier:
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Maybe if I finish by Christmas, I can grant that wish.
I see what you did there, Scootalove with Cheerilee. Now think back to G3 and who was Scootaloo's sister again? That's right Cheerilee.
Scootaloo's fanon of being an orphan who lives in the CMC clubhouse makes One Bad Apple kinda depressing when Babs stole the clubhouse from the CMC
More poor communication causing conflict. How accurate
*wipes tear of joy*
I am glad this ended on a good happy note
Very cool story!
That's it? no more? well darn
That ending was great, I didn't know I was capable of such feels
I'm glad it had a happy ending, and Scootaloo being adopted is probably something they could actually work in to the show to acknowledge that she's an orphan, but still keep it light enough. We had subtle confirmation about AJ's dead parents, maybe now we'll get some on Scootaloo's situation.
Scootaloo gulped a bit. It was going to be a long night.
Yeah, winter tends to do that to you... BUT IT'S SUMMER
Awww...now I want more story of Cheerilee taking care of her