I love MLP, and I love writing. Hoping to read some awesome stuff here. :)
Hey, it's Rainbow Dash here. You know, the most awesome flier ever to come out of Cloudsdale? Well today some jerky colt came right up to me and Fluttershy and started making fun of us! And to make matters worse, he started insulting Fluttershy's mother! That was just going way too far, so I decided to take matters into my own hooves and call him out. I think I did a good job, especially since AppleJack did the judging. Haha!
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A for effort
D- for grammar. My eyes bleed.
You made me laugh hard at some of those jokes, some nice writing, and some bad writing. Liked.
A+ for making me laugh.
F- for the grammar.
you passed funny exam with a rainbow
and failed gramar exam with a derpy
lot's of gramar mistakes, but funny as hell
I honestly don't see anything wrong with the grammar, but keep up the good writing!
I wish I could be there, because I could kick RD's flank at yo mamma!
Great story, very funny!
The premise was interesting, and the "yo momma"s were decent, but Applejack seemed a little bit... off. I mean really, you would think she would have stepped right up to kick that colt's sorry flank. HARD. And yeah, the grammar seemed a bit... wanting. But, I still enjoyed it nonetheless. I'm glad to see there are some authors who don't stress too much about having the "absolutely, best-thing-in-the-world, most hilarious story ever." I think you had the right attitude with comedy. You try too hard, and... just ugh.
Wasn't expecting this one. A 'momma' fight? Still, I enjoyed reading it.
Ok, sorry for the awful grammar everyone. I blame that on me being from the South.
Someone's gotta do a fic where it's epic rap battles of equestria. That would be awesome.
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There is one already...
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26717/Epic-Rap-Battles-of-MLP
Nvm, then. They should really do Cadence vs Chrysalis. Copy vs Original. Would be awesome, right?
Rainbow Dash is BEAST!!!!!!!! This was badass, I'm so glad I read it, you did very well, keep this up!!!!!
Great story! You made me laugh. Rainbow Dash is a pro!
786718 I'm from the Deep South and speak using very good grammar! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applejack.png
Also, I'm just going to leave this here.
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First of all i don't even care about the bad grammar that had me laughing so hard
second of all 875444 what the fuck was that
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1959950 i know but that was a freaky ass video. looked like a really bad trip
1959971 lol, yeah, I know right, but I'm surprised you haven't seen it?
With 6,733,615 views and counting, it's one of the more well known pony fan animations. 
1960000 hmm weird i haven't ever seen it
lol now i have
Oh Applejack, stick with what you know. This was hilarious! I'll be reading some of your other stuff, I'd just thought I'd start here.
Silver out!