The Everfree Forest is the one place in Equestria that ponies have never quite been able to tame or harness, though many have tried. Fluttershy is one such pony, but she seeks to befriend the Everfree Forest, not harm it. Too bad it doesn't know that.
This story is told in a poem format. As in, for the next thousand words, it's all going to be in verse. Not sure if that's a good thing or not, but I hope to do well.
I really enjoyed, this... not many people could come up with rhymes like that! That took serious skill verse fics work. I may well do one! Can you do more?
2026855 Possibly, though it looks like this one kinda failed.
2028371hardly! it was on the homepage, right. Just persevere... It will become popular, by hook or by crook
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Oh, come now. You said yourself this was an experiment, a first try, right? Of course it's going to be rough. Meter wanders a bit too freely, and the narrative is still more literal than poetic, but those are common enough errors and definitely fixable. Honestly, you're not off to a bad start, here. Give it another go!
That was a very well-written poem that tells the message of the show. Excellent job! The lack of views is criminal.
Silver out!
3181019 Lol, I know, right? People want more copy/paste of the same stuff on this site over and over. No one wants anything the least bit original.
This was a pretty good fic I enjoyed it hope you make some more like it.