Pipsqueak's Valentine

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It's Valentines day again in ponyville, or as they all it, Hearts and hooves day, as for this colt, it'll be the best one he'll ever have!

Also thanks to Tophatphony for working with me on this. Hope you enjoyed working.

Rights to the photo goes to sue9000 on Deviantart.

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Pipsqueaks Valentine · 15th Feb 2014 · 3,232 words
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DarthWill3

DarthWill3 #1 · Feb 15th, 2014 · · · Pipsqueaks Valentine ·

Aw... That was so adorable! I just LOVE PipBelle stories!

Here are couple things I've fixed for you:

Pip didn’t usually come here. His mother specifically told him that he shouldn’t have too many sugary treats, but he regarded this as an exception. He needed something to lift his spirits.

“Come on, Pip! I Pinkie promise I won’t tell a soul!" Pinkie smiled and chimed the rhyme: “I cross my heart hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!
"Oof! Pinkie sense tingling." Pinkie smiled as she knew what it meant. Pipsqueak looked dumbfounded, but pressed no further.
"Oh alright," Pipsqueak gave in. He knew a Pinkie promise was for life. "It's just that nopony wants to be my special somepony."
"Ah, so that's what's got you in a slump. We gotta get you out of that, but first I think we could do with something. Oops! I forgot I had Rainbow Dash's thing she wanted to show me. Can't Miss that!" Pinkie bounced off to go meet her friend, once again leaving the foal all by his lonesome.

"Sweetie Belle," Pipsqueak sighed with lovestruck eyes.

Oh no, no, no! I can't find a single pony to go with to the Hearts and Hooves Day Festival. Apple Bloom and Scootaloo will laugh at me.
The small pure white filly, as all her friends called her Sweetie Belle, was swimming in her worrisome thoughts.
Come on, Sweetie Belle. There's plenty of time to find somepony to go with us. It’s just... who? I can't ask Pipsqueak. He most likely has one being the new and different kid. Snips or Snails? No, that would be humiliating. Oh, come on, Sweetie. What about...? No, he was taken by Dewey. I'm never going to get somepony to go with me.
The small delicate filly had taken a spot on a nearby bench. "How am I going to find one now?" she wondered aloud.
Sighing, Sweetie Belle stood up from the bench, and made her way to her sister's home and workshop, the Carousel Boutique. The trip would take her past the Hearts and Hooves Day Tree, although the tree was magnificent in its gold and red shimmering colors. It had reminded Sweetie Belle that she didn't have somepony to go with.
"Why is it I have to be alone?" moaned Sweetie Belle as she stepped into the parlor of Rarity's shop.
"Sweetie?" Rarity chimed in a concerned tone. "Is that you, dear? My, I thought you would be out on the town with your... Oh. I see what's the problem."
"You do?" Sweetie Belle replied sarcastically. "Everypony has been taken."
"Oh Sweetie, you need not to worry," smiled Rarity as she cuddled her little sister. "We will find you somepony to go to the Hearts and Hooves Day Tree."
Oh no, she's going to try and make me pretty! Must. Run.
"Um, I have other things to do," Sweetie Belle lied as she ran towards the door. "See you later!"
"Hmm, I wonder what has gotten her now," Rarity wondered.

"Oh, sorry I thought Pinkie got your smoothie," Mr. Cake spoke, "but chocolate?" It took him a moment to realize what Pipsqueak was going through.

"Oh, I see... Problems?"

"Wow, Mr. Cake, that is good advice!" Pipsqueak felt relieved. "Thanks a lot!"
Mr. Cake watched as Pipsqueak ran for the door. "Anytime, anytime."
"You know you did that just cause you felt sad for him," Mrs. Cake chuckled. "It was nice of you."
Mr. Cake nuzzled his wife. "I know. It's just upsetting to me, to see somepony else sad. Especially on Hearts and Hooves Day."
"I know, honey. I know."

Do I know I need to go on? I know it seems rushed, but the mood of the story was so darn cute!