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Have you ever loved someone so much that you'd do anything for them? Travel great distances, search for the hidden, put yourself in danger, even...trade your life?

Two souls fueled by their overwhelming love for a mare will do just that
this winter.....the bro movie of the year is.....You and I, Me and You!
this time.....it's personal

A collaboration fic with GiantMako

*The violence and gore is nothing worse than a PG-13 Rated movie.

Staring:
Pip "Pipsqueak"
Spike
Princess Luna
Sweetie Belle

and countless cameos.

Slight Spoilers: This is Luna x Pip and Spike x Sweetie Belle.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 33 )

Beat Regidar..........why do I feel so unfulfilled :pinkiesad2:

1779633 Because it's a worthless achievement, and your comment merely detracts from this fic.
Here, have a useless award.
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.......just a few more million points before I make it near......Rage quit Micheal

1779662 Good luck. It's depressing that people enjoy my worthless ramblings on fics then my worthless ramblings in my stories.

You don't see this ship done very often. It's great to see an adventure fic staring Pip.
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This is good... I like it.
Here is a fav and a like good sir.

This fic... what does it mean... does it mean ME, and YOU THE AUTHOR. Or does it mean Me and the mare that I apparently love, OR does it mean Pip and Spike with Luna and Sweetie Belle. I DON'T UNDERSTAND.

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I think since you read the first chapter, then it's not really spoilers if I tell you. My co-writer might disagree, but the title is play on the fact that Pip and Spike are looking to trade lifespans and it's a reference to the shipping in this fic.

You(Spike's lifespan) and Me(Pip's lifespan), Me(Pip's trade) and You(Spike's trade)

The other way to look at the title is:
You(Luna) and Me(Pip), Me(Spike) and You(Sweetie Belle)

I can see it now

Spike and Pip tied to a log.

Spike: uh oh.

Pip: don't tell me we are about to go over a huge waterfall.

Spike: yep.

Pip: sharp rocks at the bottom?

Spike: most likely.

Pip: bring it on.

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That has to be a scene now. :pinkiehappy:

Most fascinating, truly fascinating... thewaffler you done it again my boy!:pinkiesmile:

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Thank you, but I can't take all the credit. My co-writer GiantMako did a fantastic job helping me write this.

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Riz

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Spike and Pip ?? Bros ?? :pinkiegasp:


CAN"T WAIT !!!!! :pinkiehappy:

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True true, how thoughtless of me.

I don't really like these characters, and, as it is a pattern I am finding with myself, I enjoy their pairing.

It's an interesting plotline and the description said it would be crammed with cameos, so I'm sure I'll understand one eventually...

You thought I read this chapter.... you were WROOONG! Now I have, and I cannot wait until Spike loses his long life/immortality... because I dislike dragons greatly, such power should not be wielded since the birth of a race, tis' bs, they need not improve upon themselves for they are already more powerful than most can and shall ever be! Good thing they aren't real though.... right?

Pip looks like Ponified Dirk Pitt From Clive Cussler's novels.

i like it :twilightsmile:

Riz

Sweetie Belle and Pip looks awesome !

A Dragon with a beard? Wtf? Adult Spike looks like an anthro? Why did Spike call Pinkie a bad singer? That's a load of crap, she sang in tune with his piano playing!
Sweetie Belle probably won't approve of this... good chapter.

Try reading your chapters out loud, being careful to read what it SAYS rather than what it SHOULD SAY. It might help with the grammar.

I'd say get a pre-reader/editor, but sometimes that is easier said than done.

Perhaps the sentiment is slightly lowered since this is our own story, but it certainly is a good chapter to me.

Good times, good times, and I'm glad you worked in the 'greeting from this river' thing you told me about. Looking forward to working on our next chapter Waffler.:moustache:

I love the

“Bloody ‘ell!”

Bit! :pinkiehappy:

YEAHH!!!! Look at that awesomeness! Ok enough self promotion from this guy. Glad we got this chapter finished dude:moustache:
Also for you and the readers I totally hid a secret game reference in this chapter. Who will be the first to find it?:

“Old family recipe.” As soon as those words left Hammerhead’s mouth an eyeball floated to the surface of the stew causing Spike to turn positively green ...well more so than usual. “And look there’s some of the old family, HA HA!!!”

wasn't that from Treasure Planet? :rainbowhuh:

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Yep and I love that movie.

Holy Hentai? You know what that is don't you? :derpyderp2:

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it was a joke me and my co-writer put in because Pip and Spike were caught by a tentacle beast. There's even a joke where Pip is compared to a school girl in this situation.

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I caught that, and it's funny, I was just making sure. :twilightsmile:

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Nope. Just been really busy with work and my co-writer had some stuff to take care off. The story isn't dead, trust me I even have the entire thing planned out. The next chapter sends the cast through the river and into a dragon city where they meet a certain 8 legged wall-eyed drake.

The history is amazing. Too bad we probably won't see a sequel ;(

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