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Dainty Blaze


Been a fan of the show for a while now and I like writing so here I am.

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Spike the Dragon is living the life. He and Pipsqueak, his best friend and playcolt of a roommate, own a very nice apartment in upper Manehatten, he just got word a big shot director from Canterlot wants to turn his best selling novel into a play, and business is booming at the jazz bar he and Pipsqueak co-own. Nothing could rain on his parade. Until a bombshell from his past makes a comeback in a big way and Pipsqueak isn't helping matters with his bad advice. And to top it all off some big shot with a vendetta comes along wanting to run their bar out of business. All Spike wants to know where he can a stiff drink...shame dragons can't get drunk.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 52 )

This looks interesting. I wonder where you'll go with this.

Very good first chapter. Interesting concept. Character's and situation very believable and interesting. I look forward to reading more of this story.

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Thanks guys. Next chapter will be done soon for this and another piece of work I'm doing.

sweetie bell

rarity

Now that only leaves the other character tag which is DIAMOND TIARA

Oh hell yes im a giant diamondspike shipper

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It is pretty rare. I liked it in the one's I've seen so I decided to give a shot. I think might be the first that's longer than a chapter or two as well

I was thinking of Spike and Silver Spoon.

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That shipping is even rarer heck almost nonexistant. And I can see the potential there. Someone should do it

So that how it's probably going down. And seriously if it looking like it's possibly a DiamondSpike story, I'm really intrigued---Spike shippings are one thing, but there is something about the obscure and frankly rare ships are right up my alley. I really hope that there is one for him, he deserves it.


And now here's come the perv in me (I sincerely apologize for this, but if I don't get it out of my head, it will drive me nuts:)
-- apparent TwiDash is neat--neither mare would really care for on, though if it got wild and frisky, Twilight more than likely can summon a magical stallionhood at will, and it's cute that even though RD is still tomboyish, she's got that cute girly side as well.
-- Saw that coming from a mile away with FlutterMac--apparently 5 sessions with the biggest cock in Ponyville really cured her of most of her fears, but then she wouldn't be FlutterSHY anymore. And a mother of five as well----wow!!
-- I feel sorry for SweetieBelle, but only a little since she recovered---to that bastard Button, you don't just put your key in one lock and then when it's working fine, you start to try use your key in another lock. It's a wonder why that key wasn't 'misplaced' or more than likely 'stripped'.
-- For Pipsqueak, it's a wonder why his dick hasn't fallen off yet; at some point one of the mares that he fucked will fuck him back, and it's not just pegging.....
-- I have to wonder where will Spike paramour will be, since Rarity is following her dream and doesn't have time for lover at the moment.

Intriguing start, and I hope this play is a success, also nice to hear Spike grew his wings.

No Diamond yet, but she's a tag and all the others have found partners, so that means this is probably gonna be a Diamond/Spike ship. I have no idea why, but I actually like that ship provided Diamond isn't completely unlikeable.

Slayer of my heart? I wonder what the history behind that is. I do hope there isn't too much drama though, it turns me off if a slice of life story has too much of it. Better when it's fun and stuff.

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Drama will be minimum I assure you. Glad you're liking it

5425561 I just meant don't have TOO much drama. Ty anyway. Having a bunch of mares chase Spike is still enjoyable to read for example, but when his actual friends think less of HIM for that, well that's when I get turned off from enjoying a story.

Can't believe I didn't see your notice that Dragons can't get drunk, I'd love to see him demonstrate that in your story at some point.

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You shan't wait long either.

5425794 Define that length then.

It's a shame this isn't part of more groups, it would get more rep if it was.

5487001 yeah and sorry about the wait my computer crashed. My only way into the site is through my phone right now. It sucks.

Sweetie Belle is very protective of Spike, is she?

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Very much so. Then again she's like that with most of her friends. Though Pip she likes to poke fun at, or crush, take your pick kind sir.

I like this Sweetie Belle, shes got some fire in her. Really :unsuresweetie: aw yeaaahh :moustache:

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Same here. I'd always figured she'd grow up like that anyway. Fierce ya know.

It's too bad I didn't get to see the reactions of the patrons to Spike's drinking. Oh well, good to see another chapter. Damn you Prose!
Spike is thinking some very disturbing thoughts, how to cook his roommate for a meal. I love it! Good to see some of that Draconian instinct, as long as he keeps it in control.
I still have to wonder what happened between Spike and Diamond. From what I can gather, they broke up at some point but not on bad terms since Spike still seems to care about her. I still don't know what Diamond is like though, haven't seen enough of her yet to judge.

Sweetie Belle's in Pissed Off protective mode.

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Yeah wanted to touch base on that old predator nature. And yes Prose will be the ever loving troll and there will be more

Lets think on that word a moment shall we. It means lacking grace or ease of movement. Now apply this to a situation, any situation, and it ends up becoming nearly painful to witness, even more so to be a part of. An example being, walking in on your long time crush (at the time at least) and your sister having a drunk make-out session on your bed. Where you sleep. Every, single night. had to burn the damn sheets. Or finding out your best friend and the mare that practically raised you bonked. Little known fact by-the-by Celestia is the queen of cougars. Common knowledge, Pip's a whore. Moving on.

Immediate reaction: Lucky bastard, that Pipsqueak is, bonking the Princess of all ponies. Also, no wonder Spike left for Manehatten, I bet it was after catching Twilight and Rarity in bed together w/o the damn decency for the latter to tell him that they were always friends and nothing more (obvious friendzoning....personally I would be a little pissed that my own siblings pretty much took a prospect from me, but that is me). Got to hand it to him though, Spike was obviously the better creature of the three to just walk away, and more kudos to him that he and Rarity are still friends and acquaitences. Now it makes sense with Sweetie Belle, and I'm assuming that Tiara was one of Spike's exes, if there is more than one, and probably wants to get back together with him.

Again, this is just a immediate reaction to what I just read. I have only read the first couple of paragraphs, don't worry, there will be proper comments once the chapter has been read. :twilightsmile:

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Glad your liking it. In any case unfortunately it wasn't Rarity and Twilight's 'session' that did that. This was I'd say a year before he started dating Diamond. In truth he didn't talk to either of them for quite some time afterwards but it helped him get over said crush.

Hell that'd do it for anyone.

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So Spike DID indeed catch Twilight and Rarity in the act, or close to it. Definitely see that it was a good while ago, probably a few years in the past, it makes more sense with how the three characters (Rarity, Spike, and Diamond Tiara) initially interact with each other in my opinion. Thanks for clearing that up. I really wonder why Diamond and Spike broke up the first time though, from the lunch date scene with her, his manager/agent Prose, and himself, I can really see that Diamond has deep feelings for him, even after the break up. Was it nasty or clean? Was it on Diamond's side, or Spike's side?

I'm telling ya, you got a lot of story between the two of them, and we haven't even gotten into what made them together in the first place, much less possibly getting back together again.

And it probably doesn't gonna go that way, but I swear that there may even be a little love triangle developing with Sweetie Belle and Diamond Tiara....Sweetie's been a good friend of Spike through Spike's heart-breaking moment as well as when Spike dated Tiara. I'm a little surprised that Sweetie hasn't even attempted to show Spike her own feelings for him. I could bet that it is respect on her part knowing Spike crushed on her sister for so long until it got unceremonially shattered, but seriously, I bet that Sweetie got some affection for the drake.

Spike does deserve the right to be loved after all, he a somepony as well, it's not right that he's pretty much by himself even though he's shown that he can love someone else completely. Good luck, Sweetie Belle.

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We shall see what happens. But I'm thinking a flashback in the next chapter. Maybe. In any case the relation between the dragon and Diamond will be explained

So that is how they started. It was nice and fitted with both of their characters and situation. Though it does make me wonder how it ended?

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Yeah. I was surprised how long this chapter turned out. Didn't check the word count until after I was done and finished editing. I was like 'Holy Crap!' Anyway over all its a fluffy beginning, with a little sour to it.

I wonder is Twist still pinning for Pipsqueak?

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Ding Ding Ding. Yes! You get a cookie sir. Yeah, Figured I'd add that in. It will come into play a lot more a lot later. And I do mean a lot later. Anyway, figured I'd give everyone's favorite lisper some upgrades. And she will end up a good foil for Diamond in the future. Besides I like the role reversal bit.

5533358 I mean is Twist still love chasing Pipsqueak?

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For now yes. but she won't show up till way later.

You should be proud, I think that was beautiful. And I want to see more because of that.

Did you mention who Spike was raised by? That flashback implied Twilight was far too busy to do it, and it's a bit odd that he goes by the surname of "The Dragon", implying that he essentially raised himself. Unless Celestia raised him and she told him to go by that because she doesn't want mares chasing after her little dragon because of a title.

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You'd be right. Twilight named him but Celestia raised him. (Tis head-cannon so tis truth!) Don't know what they were thinking letting a foal name him but hey whatever works.

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Oh and thank oyu glad you liked it. Stand by for the next chapter.

There's always Plan B.

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Plan B. What is this Plan B you speak of?

5534116 Tying up Button Mash and force to watch Spike and Sweetie Belle have you-know-what?

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To quote a certain purple scaled shrimp. Ahem. Dude that's creepy.

Spike is more like a brother to Sweetie Belle.

I say that you should get rid of it. Make it more intense and less funny. Also, Plan B should kinda be a thing to do, but I like the Pip and Sweetie Belle angle more.

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Same here. I mean the sweetie spike angle is nice if the story calls for it but we'll I've got a thing, a guilty pleasure if you will for obscure pairings.

Since there's none of the darker tags, Spike shouldn't do anything to Button too scarring. Well, at least not physically.
An article did that? Some ponies can be so gullible. You'd think being a sister of one of the Elements of harmony would give Sweetie some good rep. It's too bad Rarity doesn't know what Button is doing. She'd probably do something crazier than Sweetie if she did.

And while this has been a nice story so far, yeah, I agree that there doesn't seem to be enough comedy to fit the tag. Unless Spike get publicly revealed to be royalty and gets chased around every mare in the city Yakety Sax style, or something like that, then the tag doesn't seem to fit.

On the other note, I really hope that Diamond and Spike repair their relationship at some point. She acted so... indifferent towards him. Come on Diamond, he saw you at your most vulnerable, and despite knowing your reputation, he was kind and understanding, rather than rubbing her condition in her face. You don't find guys much better than that.

Damn, a lot of tension all around and a pissed off Spike. Good story but not seeing much comedy and romance.

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Yeah ponies are gullible aren't they. I present an example. Flim and Flam's second appearence in the show. The defense rests. But anyway, press is crazy fast in this world, even more so in Equestria. This we have seen in several episodes.

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Gotta build up for the romance. The mistake I see that happens way to often is people just jump right into it. There's no build up. It's like they meet one minute and then bam! kiss time and it just irks me. Real meaningful romance takes time to build. On that note the comedy tag is down so we are going full out drama here folks. Not too much mind you but we'll gotta keep it juicy.

5534937 Rushed romance is terrible, Love doesn't happen overnight. Good to see another author that realizes this.

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Thank you and here I thought I was the only one. I mean love at first sight is fine, if it's done right. It's all about subtlety there. But in almost every case it's a slow process. That's my biggest problem with most romance fics here. They Rush it.

Hehe sorry I rant from time to time.

5535291 You and me both.

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Scales and Silver is good fic for that pairing

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