Chapter 31
Meeting with Rarity
Onyx and Rainbow Dash had a friendly spar after he called the blue pegasus a stallion, which Onyx had easily won, even with restraint. Afterwards, Twilight and Onyx decided to take a walk around Ponyville and talk about good times.
“Do you remember when Philomena died for the first time in front of you? You were crying so much that Celestia had to take pain pills just to stop the headache, before she cast a mute spell on you,” laughed Twilight; she could not have wished for a better day. Her prince was with her away from all the royal business, and they were both sharing a great time … just like in her dreams.
“Hey, I loved that bird, and I didn’t know that phoenixes could regenerate like that! And what about you? When you saw me eating meat for the first time, you looked at me like I just ate Smarty Pants,” chuckled Onyx.
“Well, sorry if seeing somepony eating meat was something new to me when I was a filly. At least now I know that it’s not because you’re a cruel creature that likes to kill animals for fun, and that you only do it because of your metabolism.”
Onyx gave Twilight a friendly push. ”Have I ever acted like a cruel creature?”
“Well, you did throw Smarty Pants from the eastern tower, if I remember correctly.”
“HEY! We both said we’d never talk about that again; I was young and I just wanted to get your attention!”
Twilight smiled at her best friend. He got flustered every time she brought it up; it was so easy to make him act like that.
Her heart started to beat faster, and her leg trembled a little … she was going to tell him how she felt now, when the moment was right.
“Onyx … I wanted to tell you something. You know, since you came back from the North, I-I’ve started looking at you in a way that’s more than just a friend … I want you to know that I’m interested in you, and hope that you can see me as a mare. I want you to know that this evening we’ve shared is ... one that I’ll never forget and … Onyx?” asked Twilight as she realized that the object of her desires was no longer at her side, but was busy, buying a jar of strawberry preserves from a stallion. When he came back, Twilight was trying fight and cover up her desire to strangle him.
“Do you see that? They still have strawberry jam at this time of the year! Tomorrow, if you want, I’ll make you my special recipe pancakes that I usually only make for Mom on special occasions.”
“Hoooo great … I can’t wait.” Twilight’s mind smoldered, “Just bucking great, I finally tell you how I feel about you in my heart, and you aren’t even there to listen to me … now I’ll need to do it all over again...”
“Hey, look at this. It looks like the clothing stores in Canterlot,” said Onyx, pointing towards the Carousel Boutique.
“Well, my friend, Rarity, owns the place. Maybe I could introduce you to her.”
Twilight entered the shop; the little bell sounded throughout the boutique, informing Rarity of potential customers.
“Greetings, and welcome to the Carousel Boutique where we— Oh, Twilight. What are you doing here, did you like the dress?” asked Rarity.
“Yes, I love it, and again, thank you. I just came by to have you to meet an … er … old stallion friend of mine.”
“Oh, and where is he, darling? I can’t wait to see the stallion that put stars in your eyes.”
“He’s outside, but before I show him to you; there’s something I really need to tell you...”
Onyx was playing with a small rock outside of the boutique; apparently Twilight’s friend was usually very busy, so she decided to check if she was free to meet him.
“Are you lost, my Prince?”
Onyx return his focus to the mare who spoke to him: an old earth pony, with a cloak and saddle bag, was there holding a card game.
“Lost? No, not at all, but thank you milady; I’m just waiting for somepony.”
“I’m not talking about that. Let me take a look at you … hmm. Yes, a soul of another realm. You have greatly suffered … and you shall suffer greatly more. Please, my Prince, let me see these strange hooves of yours; I will read what the fates have planned for you.”
Onyx, intrigued by the old mare’s offer, held out his right arm, and she held it between her hooves.
“Interesting... Let me explain it to you. You see this line here? It is the line of love … you want to find somepony to love … but two others will want your heart, though not of the same type. This line here signifies family … congratulations my Prince; you will have four foals of your own … one filly and three colts. Oh … this … this one is the line of death...” She stopped talking, grabbed Onyx tight, and pulled his arm closer to take a better look at the appendage. “... but this doesn’t make sense...”
“Excuse me, what are you talking about?”
“Nothing, my Prince. You should return to wait for your friend. Remember to profit from life.”
Before he could convince her to tell him more, Twillight called him from inside the store, “Onyx, you can come in.”
When Onyx looked back towards the old mare, she had vanished; leaving a confused Onyx behind her.
Gryphon Empire
The gryphon Emperor was cleaning his talons of blood. He had just finished with one of the maids, her splayed body lying on the throne room floor and severed head put on a spear. Now that he was satisfied and in a good mood, he decided to take a look at his prisoner. He had this prisoner in a unique room that he had made since Onyx’s escape; it was there where he would keep his most precious prisoners. The door was forged of solid steel and the lock was unlockable without the key. He even hired some of the best thieves to try and unlock it, without success; their heads had since joined his collection.
The sound of the door being opened woke Raynor, who faced the Emperor and waited.
“Good morning, my dear friend. Did you sleep well? How does it feel to know that you have betrayed your country for the life of a single pony who—I might add—may still not survive his surgery? The rat had dug pretty deep by the time you decided to talk...”
Raynor did not respond. He had revealed everything he knew to the Emperor; he would never be able to forgive himself for that … even if it was for a friend...
“Please don’t make that face my poor pegasus friend, we both have what we want. Your comrade will live, and me … I will have total control of the Council. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have better things to attend to than you.”
Raynor watched the Emperor exited his cell, and it was at that moment that he made a promise to himself; if he and Vallis were ever to escape from this jail, he would spend every day of his freedom plotting the murder of the Gryphon Emperor.
This is what Onyx and Twilight should do:
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I have to say that the Griffin Emperor is starting to get high on my list of fanfic villains I hate so much that would punch them right in the face, I think he has past Frost Snap from: Echo the Diamond Dog, but not as hated as Spell Nexus from: Past Sins.
I only have one question. Does the Emperor rape the females then kill them? Cause that's what it sound like.
mysterious mare suddenly appear and want's to see your hands?
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Sorry but...............
How did she read his palm when he is the only one with palms there?
The rest I loved.
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magic is the answer of everything
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wait till the council chapter
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you sir have made my day
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Yea, but Spell Nexus was still inoccent. It wasn't his fault in the end
Nice use of foreshadowing with the gypsy, reminded me of a gypsy from a recent Sherlock Homes movie.
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2346405 Aw I feel bad now....
But I laughed at that nonetheless.
when i kill him, i'm going to stuff him and bake and eat hi :D
Oh man, things are starting to heat up.
Hmm 3 girls love truly love him?, we know that Twilight may love him, I hope Rarity will love him, but I don't know who will be the mysterious 3rd mare…ohh cryptical. And Twilight, Onyx just said that he will spent the night are your house and will make you his special breakfast, BREAKFAST that may I ad, he just said only make on very special occasions and only for his mother, I think you should had catch that clue.
Oh I wonder if he has a special recipe for Candace for special occasions too, he could teach that to Shinning as a wedding gift. And maybe he could invent another one for Luna, that would be a very touchy gesture
Also of what Twilight will warn Rarity?
2346397 Meh, I still would punch him.
2346396yeah, that picture is hilarious
2346405 now i have to watch the pet detective
2346394 best answer: it's magic, i don't have to explain shit
2346336 and that, ladies and gentlemen, is the million dollar question
Yup I really hate that bastard, who would kill a maid for no reason?
I wonder how Rarity will act towards Onyx?
2346320 Keep in mind Spell Nexus was more or less possessed though, although I can't remember without checking, did he even have permission to look at the artifact that possessed him or did he steal it?
2346922 He was asked to study it, but I'm talking about while he was being controlled.
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i have no idea what you are talking about
2347068 You haven't read Past Sins!
2347068 Long story short there's a cult that tried to bring back Nightmare Moon...but things go wrong and we get cthulu moon filly of eldritch diabetes
2347068>>2347163 This is a crime against all things fimfiction. now go to THIS Link
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wait...why everypony know this story...is this something like my little dashie or what
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who know...it could be Rainbow..or Luna..or Celestia..yea Celestia make sense
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I read it but I have no idea what your talking about.
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meh ok, maybe i should explain, the first story i have created was about Silver(me) being in Equestria...but the story was full of cliché so i erase it before i start ToPO. But still, i have keep the character wich live with Chrysalis so once in a while i do a blog post about them (Well me but not really me...)
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Thank you for explaining, also please give my condolences to Chrysalis. I am truly sorry for her loss.
2347579 Past sins is about Nightmare moon, a cult devoted to her, motherhood, and the fact that everypony has something they wish to take back. it is about forgiveness, rebirth and the trails in life. it is about a filly named Nyx born form Nightmare Moon's shreds and her struggles to find who she tully is. Nightmare Moon or Nyx, a monster or Twilight's daughter. it is written by pen stroke it is the most wonderful work there is
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You honestly want Celestia to fell in love with her son?
2347579 It's a really good story and probably one of the most well known MLP fanfics out there. I'm honestly shocked you've never heard of it.
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i was talking about love that a mother have for her son,
The Griffon Emperor is getting high on my villain list, Titan from The Immortal Game being the first.
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Ah, in that case is oblivious of to where belong those lines, Celestia, Luna and Candace…that are the only 3 that truly love him.
I think Twilight fell for him, kind of for being her first and because of being her first true friend, some puppy loves (I hope)
Besides that, I don't think there are more mares that fell that way for him. Oh and I imagine, Dash has a new level of respect for him, for the spar and the fact that he didn't hold back, and never treat her like a delicate flower or the like, right?
so the chapter is called "meeting Rarity",and the dude never meets her
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but maybe is the gryphon who want his physical heart or Chrysalis who want to feed on his love
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Possible
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i wonder if Twillight is happy about the pancake
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Maybe not, she didn't catch the hint…that or Onyx just want to prepare himself for his confession and when he saw Twiligth starting hers, he decide to try to postponed for when he is ready
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and rarity XD well if i follow the show she will want to be with Blueblood until the gala
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And if you want it to be as close as the show goes I think 2 things could happen, one the subject of Blueblood will not be mention for a while and something will happen that Twilight will not want to be with Onyx anymore, after all, what she want all along was being with Celestia and that what cause all her problems.
Now that I think about why did she has never has being in the celebration before? In the 2 years Onyx has being in Canterlot by obligation he must has to be assisted in 2, perhaps even along side her mother, greeting all the ponys
Oh and its probably that Onyx will be with Luna during that, she never appear in the whole episode