Meeting With A Old and A New Pony
Since the Changeling had freed him, Onyx had been walking though the woods for the last few days. When he first escaped, he quickly went to the closest town and, ‘borrowed’ some items from the village. Usually, he would’ve bought it or at least offer work in return, but the Emperor had already set up some ‘Wanted Posters’ with his face on it, with a reward of 500 bits to bring him in alive, so he didn’t really have a choice. The sounds of the forest was very relaxing, the birds singing, the little gusts wind blowing in the trees, the sound of the hoofsteps behind him, the feeling of the sun on his skin... ‘Wait, what?... Hoofsteps...’ Onyx swiftly turn himself to see who is following him, but he didn’t see anypony. “Well, that was strange... Maybe it’s just my imagination?” Onyx turned around went his way, but as soon as he did, he bumped into a grey pegasus, which was flying right in front of him.
“Well hello there... Who are you?” Onyx rose up from the ground, holding his nose and checking if it was bleeding.
“Argg! Do you surprise everypony you meet, like that? That hurt. Grrr...” The gray pegasus looked at him and smiled, then looked up at the sky.
“Sorry, my bad... My name is Ditzy by the way, and you’re?...” Onyx, now reassured by the fact, that he nose was alright, shook the hoof which was held out by ‘Ditzy’, but the strange thing he noticed about her, were her eyes. He tried not to show that he had not noticed them, because he didn’t want to insult her.
“I’m Onyx, glad to meet you... Hurr... If I may ask, what is a pegasus, like yourself, doing this close to the castle of the Gryphon Emperor?” The cross eyed pegasus looked a little bit frustrated.
“It’s Derpy, and I’m a mailmare on route to bring this letter to the Emperor himself.” She said, showing him her saddlebag with the official post emblem.
“Wait, um... Derpy, who sent this letter? Please tell me.” He answering back, wishing that the one who had sent the letter was his mother.
“Do you have difficulty hearing? My name is Ditzy... Repeat after me, D-I-T-Z-Y. And for the letter, it’s a confidential secret. I can’t tell you, sorry.” Onyx mentally face-palmed.
“Um... Okay... Ditzy, if I tell you that I’m royalty... Do you think you can let me read the letter?... Please.” The Derpy/Ditzy pegasus looked very angry.
“Listen, my name is Derpy! It’s not hard to remember and no, I won’t show you it. Not only because you can’t remember my name, but because I’m loyal to the rules of my job. Now if you don’t mind, I need to bring this letter to Onyx.” She told him, before she started to leave him.
“...DER-MISS WAIT! DON’T GO I‘M ONYX!” he yelled after her, the gray pegasus turned around and now so looked happy.
“You see, it’s not hard to learn my name. Now if you really are Onyx, here’s the letter.” She said, holding the letter in her hoof and giving it to Onyx. He thanked her and took the letter with a shaking grip. His name was on the letter and he could see the emblem of Celestia on it. It will be the first piece of news from his mother, since the last 10 years.
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Listen that
Dear son,
In less than 2 weeks, you will be 18 years old. It’s an important day because, it’s the day you become an adult. I wish you could be here with me, ever since you left, nothing has been the same here. Twilight and I miss you a lot, she won’t stop talking about how she wants to show you all the progress she has made in the domain of magic. I think that the reason she studies so hard, is to impress you. Shadow Heart is now been accepted in the Mages University and he has passed the test like he had promised you in the last letter.
Cadance is now, officially, dating one of the guards, you know the one called Shining Armor? She has moved in with him in a little house that I had given them last week. Now she’s trying to convince me to name him the Captain of my Guard.
Onyx wiped a tear from his eye. Reading these words, was like a dream come true.
As for Blueblood, he’s still the same, Cadance and I, (well more like Cadance... it is her talent.) have tried several times to match him with a mare who could teach him how to take care of the others, but it’s seem that the only thing he loves, is himself. Philomena (not the plush) is near to the end of her life, I think in 3 years she will reborn.
As for myself... Well, I miss you Onyx... We haven’t seen each other for the past 10 years and it’s really hard for me to not break the promise you made me do. I know that your training is hard, and that you need to travel through out the Gryphon Empire to learn all that you need to know... Heh, heh, now I’m crying. At least Twilight is with me for now... The next part will be written by her...
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Hello Onyx,
Like I have promise you, I still have Captain Philomena hidden somewhere. Seems kind of odd to say that, now that we’re not young anymore, like before... Spike says ‘Hi’ to you too... I know that you’ve never meet him before, but I’m sure that the both of you will be friends when you will meet him.
Now that my B.B.B.F.F had left the family house to go live with my foalsister, I feel a little alone, so I pass the time by reading all the books in the royal library. I have learned many things but unfortunately, I could not find the spell I could use to talk to you, I told to about in the last letter... I wish we could see each other soon... And I can’t wait for your next letter, even if they’re really short... You should take more time for that, you know.
Your Friend Forever,
Twilight Sparkle.
It’s me again son, I will send you a package with a gift in it, when it’s your birthday comes. I hope you’ll like it... Please take care of yourself... I really miss you Onyx...
Love, Your Mother,
Celestia.
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Onyx read the letter two or three more times before he folded it up, then put it in one of his pockets, he silently cried the entire time he was reading it, and the gray pegasus had stayed with him the entire time.
“..M-miss... C-could you please give a message to Celestia?...” The gray pegasus nodded and pull out a sheet of paper and a pen from her saddlebag.
“Could you tell her... that... That I’m coming home and that my... Training is finished... Please
YES an update but... bad Silver Fang!!! No CLOP of Onyx and if you do have it please write it better.
oh god...my feels....you hurt me right in my feels......
Ok so Ditzy is schizophrenic?So next chapter is the homecoming... good for both of them
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the clop part or before the clop?
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ever heard of phoenix wright pony?
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Err... well I've heard of Phoenix Wright and I've seen him ponified... if that's what you mean
yay the quality is way better in this chapter.i like the way things are progressing cant wait for the next one
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nah i mean that go to 47:21
Is this the end chapter?
2152809 both
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grammar or plotline?
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hell no =p
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I'm not positive but did you mean to put Blueblood instead of Shining Armour here?
Now I have to find a song that will be played the next chapter when he comes home just to set the mood.
Crap
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dat mistake...thank for pointiing it
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No problem
2152861 plot line just a bit to quick.
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is the clop version, the no clop will be more detailled
Hm...Well..i hope noone finds our cross-eyed mail carrier! Because if that King DARES to touch her.....We shall destroy the fourth wall to slay him!
2152888 glad to read it. Also Onxy+ Twilght=
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Twonyx is best ship
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hey =D did not saw you in the last chapter
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lol
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lol
Yes this gonna be good!
MYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!!!
Wait... When Onyx tells Celestia what the Griffin King had been doing...
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incoming shitstorm is scedualed for the next 2 or so chapters so take precaution in going outside this has been a weather forecast by genteck
Silver_Fang, once again, you don't disappoint.
Reading this made me smile.
He's coming home!
This is going to be good.
.......YEAH!
let the games begin, loving this
Wait, why Onyx is not telling her that he was captured and now the griffons are after his neck? Or for that matter, why don't he ask Derpy/Ditsy that she guide him to Canterlot?
Boy I hoped next chapter will be him coming right in time for his 18 birthday. I hoped those letters where nothing offensive
Oh and how the emperor can put wanted post? Ponys now who Onyx is. More important CELESTIA will see those post and she will only be even more in rage.
And also Onixity, please make him go with Rarity, they are the perfect match.
He and Twilight are much better only as friends and confidents.
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More you are close to the Capital mountain more Gryphon live in the village so basicly he just send wanted poster in gryphon village. AND Onyx don't want to worry Celestia
OnyXRari they should know each other before
Play this. Trust me
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Fair enough and you are right, if he is going to talk his adventures the best bet is that he talk to them when everything is more calm, or at least until Celestia is more calm. But is good that she never forgot about him.
Is there a chance that the next chapter will come up tomorrow at night?
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Yes, alot of chance,
In the next chapter Raynor will come back
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YEAH, I can't wait. I really hoped the hate to Armor is noting serious and they can work things out
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you saw the hidden message...good...btw did you watch the clop chapter?
2153735 ??
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Yeah, is was a nice work from your anonymous friend, I hoped it not stop only with Twilight, (in story I still go for Rarity, in clop I'm more open, is a clop after all) I just hoped he put some lines as they progress, it will be very creepy if he get something with Candace at some point.
And good job with the message, is was not easy to find
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well onyx will really mate with twillight but its will be consored here
go check the character tag forwith who onyx will sleep XD but he will not agree do to it everytime
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consored? Oh men…well I suppose is fair consider they both are close friends, but I don't give up, I can still hoped it was alcohol talking and was only a thing of the moment. Or that they don't last, I don't see them click very good, especially since Twilight is still learning friendship and all that. And having a boyfriend will make his behavior in ep1 had no sense. That is part of why I tell you to put him with Rarity and regardless of who you put it, make them happen in or after the gala so things can make sense in the canon. Just a suggestion
2153904Fuck that. TwiXOnix all the way!
And, I predict a shitstorm to hit Canterlot and all cities within a 100 mile radius when Onyx tells Celestia what the Griffons did. Let the skies rain with griffon blood and guts until all ponies can see is RED!
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Sorry dude I voted Onyx x Rarity all the way. But we both are reasonable people I think we can talk this conflict like adults.
Lets put a pros and cons of witch pony he should go (ad other ponys if you think could do a go match)
Rarity:
-She is generous
-She is very well educated in hight society class
-She loves royalty (I know is not exactly a quality but is a plus)
Now, you give me 3 cons abut Rarity shouldn't be Onyx girlfriend and why Twilight should
The chapter is so short but I still love it. Its good to see that this story is still moving on. So excited to see how this turn out!
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and what if i say it's will be a PinkyXOnyx
2153957 No fuck that, RarityxOnyx all the way!
2154002No, Twilight is best pony!... pfffft
Alright, yes I can see where you're going with this.
Cons:
1) She tends to be a bit melodramatic. It could make Onyx relate her to Blueblood if he thought about it.
2) Onyx, being a guy, would probably be turned off by the ungodly amount of fashion Rarity can tend to obsess over.
3) Pretty sure Onyx (from what I've seen of him with girls so far) isn't all that attracted to sissy women. Now don't take that the wrong way, it's just that, and you know this to be true, Rarity tends to obsess over being ladylike, whether it's taking dainty bites out of food, or keeping her coat free of ALL sorts of filth. Doubt guys like Onyx would be too interested in girls who refuse to get dirty.
Now, bear in mind I've made all these cons with assumptions to Onyx's taste in girls. None of these are solid proof of any cons on Rarity's part. But then again, you could make quite a few pros for Onyx out of any of the Mane 6. Sooo, right now we kind of just have to wait and see.