Chapter 16
The Escape: Part 4 (Last Part)
Onyx rose up from the floor, his head was pounding and he could feel the cold breeze of the mountain on his skin... ‘Mountain breeze?’ It took a few seconds for Onyx to realize that he was no longer inside the dungeon, ‘Wasn’t I was inside the dungeon? with that..hum...yea changeling....’. He slowly opened his eyes, but a bright green flash forced him to shut his eyes. When he re-opened them again, the changeling he met earlier was in-front of him and a another creature, who looked like the changeling but more taller, was at her side.
“Finally, you woke up, I was starting to think to leave your body here and just leave, but now that you have regain consciousness, she will be able to talk to you. Don’t take too much time Fillia, I will wait for you in the woods over there...” The tall creature said with his abnormal but interesting voice, then she flew away, leaving Fillia and Onyx there. Onyx was not really listening to what was happening, he was more occupied looking around him; the moon was not really bright as it should, but now he could see that he was at the foot of the mountain, he looked where the city is built and the feeling of being away from that prison was so wonderful, he couldn’t describe the feeling.
The Changeling called Fillia, walked in the direction of Onyx and smiled at him.
“Our Queen, even if she didn’t say it, wants to thank you for saving me, and let me feed on you. Usually when someone else sees us, there first reaction is to attack us, but not you... You had helped a totally unknown creature without asking a question or something in return.” Onyx, who was now listening, was trying to remember what had happened in the dungeon.
“Well... That was nothing," in fact, I didn’t know that I was helping you when I had thought about my mother", but can you explain to me what we’re doing here? I only remember a loud ‘bang’ and then nothing.”
“Well the ‘loud bang’ was my Queen who had exploded the wall to set me free, unfortunately, you were behind the wall and a chunk of the wall had hit your head. For ‘Why are we here?’, well my Queen had free me, but when I told her about what you did for me, she decide to set you free too. I can say that she was intrigued by how you looked, she has never seen something like you before in her life.” Then she paused, as if she was listening for something.
“I have to go, my Queen wants me to return now. Thanks again for all that you have done for me... Prince Onyx.” Then she flew away, leaving Onyx alone. Onyx waved his hand to the Changeling, his eyes filled with tears, he was free... finally free. He was away from that cruel, so called ‘Emperor’ who had kept him in that awful castle, as if he was like a toy for him. Now HE was the one who will decide what he wanted to do because he was free! Never had he thought, that he would have to endure that much pain in training, the whip of the torturer, and the cruelty of the Emperor. The only thing he wanted to do now, is to go back see his mom. He wanted to return into Equestria, he even missed his rude cousin Blueblood. With this in mind, Onyx walked in the direction of the closest village, sure he will need to hide himself from the Gryphon guards, but the road to Equestria easily take him about 2 weeks, but if he didn’t get caught, and didn’t stop too often, he will be in Equestria... In the castle with his mother... For his 18 birthday.
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Meanwhile...
“EMPEROR! EMPEROR!” A Gryphon guard was running throughout the castle in search of his Emperor. The last hour for him was quite shocking and even he doesn’t understand what had happened. One hour ago a patrol had found the dead body of the torturer, his throat cut in the dungeon, but the most shocking thing about that, was a green cocoon and the torturer was inside, floating slowly up and down. Then, if that was not enough, the cell where the ‘bastard son’ of Celestia was kept, was empty and the wall was destroyed.
The guard entered the throne room and the Emperor was with a female Gryphon at his side, tied with chain around her neck to the throne, probably the new prey for the Emperor...
“What are you doing here, can’t you see I’m busy right now!?” The Emperor yelled at the poor guard, who was only doing his job.
“I’m sorry Emperor, but I have some... bad news for you... *Gulp*... T-the Torturer was found dead in the dungeon and th-”
“Well, I’ll find a new torturer, that can’t be to hard. Now go... Before I give you the same fate of the torturer.”
“But your Emperor! I was going to tell you that... well... the ‘bastard son’ of Celestia... How should I put this?... H-he has escaped...”
“WHAT!?!” The Emperor in his surprise and rage, had smash the head of the poor slave chained to the throne, even the guard had heard the skull of the Gryphon crack open when she had hit the throne.
“I want all the guards to search for him, NOW! He can’t have gotten too far away. It’s really hard to go down our mountain without wings. Now go and call a maid to clean this mess, I don’t want my floor filled with the blood of this slut.”
“Y-yes your Emperor!” The guard left the throne room and sighed, he secretly wished that the Emperor would die soon. Since he had been put on the throne, nothing had been good for the empire.
“Hey! You there! Come here. The Emperor needs you in the throne room right now, and don’t take your time, he’s really angry.” He said to the first maid he saw, he felt pity for this maid, because he knew that tomorrow, he would have to go bury her body somewhere. The Emperor will probably make her clean his throne and then he will do the same thing he was gonna do to the dead Gryphon before he killed her, and like always, he would kill her when he would be done with her.
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YES! So, when is Onyx gonna get his payback? Or is he going to do the honourable thing and just have the emperor arrested for crimes against another sentient species?
Fuck you clearshot, I wanted the first comment.......
mwhahahahahaha
gods speed to you onyx
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Who says he can't do both?
And now the hunt will start, but who will hunt who. Onyx have spent 10 years training and had manage to escaped multiple times, that means that he is at least average in the art of stealth, and know if the ponys recognized him, then they will help him prepare, hide and guide to the castle maybe going faster. Oh I really hoped, Onyx will escaped the griffins, assassin style minus the killing part.
Oh by the way Silver, perhaps you should edit a little the resume of the story, after all this crap just happen, I can't see Onyx now starting to prank Celestia, he loved her with all his heart and never have we ever seeing a sight of him enjoying pranks and after all he has being through, making him a prankster just doesn't make sense. I see him more like a noble knight with his feet well put on the ground, outgoing and friendly but no the typed that make pranks or at least not in his daily basis.
Same with the vein thing to Shining Armor, after the hell he went through, is almost certain that he will respect and maybe even admire the royal guards (specially thanks to Strong Shield) and there for will acknowledge every singe one of them specially Shining.
Just saying, perhaps your story have turn in a way you weren't expected, so I'm suggesting change a little that resume that everybody see when they are about to read the story so, they will not get confused.
Oh and Onyx will get his weapons and clouding in the next chapter? Or did he will go to Canterlot, using a trench coat or cape until he is sure is safe?
onyx was not out of character i knew you wouldn't screw it up
GOT HER BEFORE REGIDAR! sooooo... BUCK YA!
I want to see Onyx kill Gryffin with his bare hands.
Wow you really are making Gryffin a truly messed up baddy to behold, what does he gain from his actions?
Yeah I really do see massive retribution in store for him.
I can't wait to see what the future holds.
it was a good chapter however i urge you to learn to phrase your story better.instead of (well my Queen had free me,)try ( well my Queen set me free,) it would help the story very much
I haven't read this fic yet, I just saw it to be honest, but someone please tell me this isn't just my imagination, that that really is the sfaff of light the prince is wielding
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Sweet mother of saradomin.......
but unfortunatly it is not the staff of light
the weapon is this.
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oh lord free at last free at last!
Well, this will certainly influence that wedding.
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you have no idea
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First: OMG YOU HAVE A PROFILE PIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Second: you are true when you say that the story have take a turn that i did not wanted to do at the start, but the description don't need to be changed....you will see when Onyx will comeback to the castle why him and Shining will hate each other, and when Luna will come back, you will understand the Joke part
3) nope, weapon is not before some chapter.....but just for you here years of when he will get it.
Years 1 of the return of Luna
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your OC will be in the story soon
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Oh ok, I do hoped that the jokes are not nor to cruel nor to frequent, I would like like one or two jokes every week or mount, and very light jokes like invisible ink, or a rearrange of some armors something like that , and that he and Armor can talk thing up a be friends eventually, he is dating his cousin after all. (Bottom line, I would like to see more moments like the one when he give her Celestia a photo album)
Over all, you have teach us that Onyx is a very good person and respect life, so seeing him as a prankster or that he and Armor having a juvenile hated for one another is doesn't fell right, but I will wait, like you said, everything will make sense as the story progress.
Oh an thanks for the commentary about my profile, I decided to put a image in there, perhaps in the near future I would publish something
P.S: Celestia would recognize him when he return right? You have no idea, how nervous I am if he return and nobody remember him
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for shining you don't worry. i have a really good reason for why they will hate each other
So now he's finally escaped and on his way back home. I think this should sum up Celestia's reaction when she hears all that her son had to endure.
2128354 And this is what she's going to say to the Emperor:
Well... I just read all the chapters so far in about 3-4 hours.. I'm chuffed. I love your fanfic! Please continue on it!
2128077 My only question...how have the others grown up?
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probably a mistake sorry
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A hate for life or until they know each kind of hated? wait don't tell me, i will find out when the chapter come up right? Oh well I will wait, Chrysalis your finally on the story, don't you think you exaggerated a little with the tortured?
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nah not really, he merit it.but i'm a little anfry because i did not get my hoof on the emperor
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Oh lets make a race Silver, how the emperor will die,
-Onyx will bring him to justice and Celestia will clip his wings just to start their quality time
-Chrysalis find him seaching for Onyx and return the favor saving him with a juicy payback in the middle
-Some maid or his new slave will kill him like Leia kill that giant worm thing
-His people will just have enough of him and they will give him a state overtake
-Or he will just die of old age
P.S: Where are the Emperor sons and/or daughters?
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one of them was already in this story..little hint....ok
Go check the chapter when Onyx is a kid and went to the school for the first time
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Oh I know, good for shadowing Silver, I hoped he don't hated all griffins from now, what the emperor and his soldiers did was bad, but blaming a entire race is just not right.
Take note Onyx, it will help you when you ascend to the throne
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BAD!!!! that was not just bad, he have treated me like a toy, i got whiped, beated, he have kill philo, he use his power to get everything he want, he enslave young Gryphon and rape her before he kill them, he maybe the worst ever emperor that never be on this throne.!!!!!!
...ok calm down Onyx..you are free now.....and don't worry he will pay...i dont know how but he will....
And so the seeds of vengeance/revenge finally start growing.
Vengeance is justice by the suffering.
Revenge is for self gratification.
Which will Onyx take?
*Its / her
And you might want to work on not repeating your dialog in the descriptions
e.g.
It would make more sense to put something along the lines of:
Onyx took a few seconds to grasp his surroundings, noticing that he was no longer in the cave, 'Where am I?'
2127436 Hmm.... I guess... He could arrest him first... then get payback... though I wonder just how he would get said payback...
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But in end where are talking about 1 Griffin, yeah their soldiers too where monsters, but they must have beings good Griffins that you at least could have talk, like some maids or another griffins slave, is obvious, other wise you would have end mad long ago, besides think about your Griffins friends in the school, they didn't know you but they treat you good and were good friends, weren't ti?
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Try the Griffin under his laws, nice and legal way of beating the crap out of him
Good chapter.
God speed, Onyx!
*salutes*
2130097 Technically, for his crimes against Onyx, I wouldn't be surprised to see Celestia bring in the death penalty... I wonder if Onyx would ask to be the executioner...
Can I reccomend you change the name of the chapter to 'Part 4'? 'Last part' doesnt sound quite right.
2130163 No, that'd make him no better of a person than the emperor. Last thing a ruler should do is start an action like that. (war)
Celestia wouldn't kill him, but most likely banish him, since that seems like her character. However, I sense that silver here might go out of character for Celestia
This chapter... was unexpecting
Nonetheless, good!
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Thank you ditzy teacher
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You'r right
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ho and your OC is coming back soon
2130377 My point. Think about this from her perspective: Your son comes home on his 18th birthday, half-dead, telling you that every letter she'd ever received from the Gryphon kingdom was faked, and that he was subjected to horrible things to turn him into a living weapon, when she'd been promised by the very being responsible for all his suffering he'd be protected and cared for. I think that would drive her to execute the Gryphon king... or at least threaten him with the likelihood of execution...
2130408 Epic!
2130709 I personally think after a couple of thousand years that she'd be more wiser than that, despite that Onyx was put through all that. Execution of a king is just ASKING for a war, unless.... that's what silver here wants to drive the plot to.
2130772 Unfortunately, wisdom tends to be overwritten by emotion when it involves those closest to you. Even Celestia could let her emotions get the best of her if Onyx was involved...
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hahahah i so want you to see what i have planned
2130793 True. Very true.
Wonderful conversation my good sir.